OS: A lot like you - Page 3

Originally posted by: lucky.m

oh god ..this is so so beautiful and touching ..👏👏 totally loved it

It is a beautiful os , poignant yet rejuvenating , and written in a very perspicuous and gripping style...you are an extremely talented writer(sorry i don't know your name)

The most appealing part is that swara ' s heart somewhere deep inside reminds her that she belongs to someone and romantic thoughts about some other guy is nothing but an egregious blunder on her part ..it is just that her mind is not able to connect those cherubic memories and conclude that the shinning knight-at-arms of her dreams is the monsieur standing in front!!

A concept I am dying to see in the show...if our dear cvs portray them , do give them these ideas , it will lucidly portray the intensity from swara's part as well!

On the whole a mesmerizing os adroitly mingled with pain, anguish and liberating joy❤️

love,
sanjana

PS would love to know your name.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Lanny just got out meeting and read what you titled a Drabble but was actually a beautiful self contained litany. I loved it is too mild to explain. It's written so beautifully- it's simplicity makes it come alive and I just love the blend of perfect emotions from each of SwaSan in it. The confusion and yet totally undeniable attraction from swara, and the master touch with those little "flashes" she can't place but her heart perfectly does was superb. Sanskaar is beyond words amazing- his whole thought process made me want to cry and hug him and and that ending can only be called sublime. If we get anything like this in the show, we will all be sobbing with pain and happiness and all other wonderful emotions:).

PS: I've only reposted what I told you but I mean every word so wanted to share here too:)

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Beautiful... 👏

Originally posted by: Cintila

Oh my God Lanny !! 😭 First of all come give me a hug 🤗

This piece is so so touching. I can totally feel Sanskaar's pain and it freaking kills me ! Oh God just reading this made me tear up again

You've described his emotions so beautifully !! My baby... Oh I've never felt this way about any fictional character but Sanskaar ? He rules my heart ❤️.

Thank you for writing this seriously. Sam gave me the link and I came to the forum just to read it. This is beautiful. Really. 👏

Originally posted by: manasie23

aaawww... this OS literally just made me go awww

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

This is beautiful! 😭❤️

Swara feeling that pull towards Sanskaar and knowing in her heart that she belongs to someone, brilliant. Sanskaar's pain and his need to reassure himself that she is alive, heartbreaking. 💔

Would love to see something like this on the show

Originally posted by: sumeetadeb

Kash story main bhi aisa scene dikhai.awsum

This is just beautiful 😭 if the CVS even write halfway similar to what you wrote this track would be worth watching !

Originally posted by: sanjana_cool

It is a beautiful os , poignant yet rejuvenating , and written in a very perspicuous and gripping style...you are an extremely talented writer(sorry i don't know your name)

The most appealing part is that swara ' s heart somewhere deep inside reminds her that she belongs to someone and romantic thoughts about some other guy is nothing but an egregious blunder on her part ..it is just that her mind is not able to connect those cherubic memories and conclude that the shinning knight-at-arms of her dreams is the monsieur standing in front!!

A concept I am dying to see in the show...if our dear cvs portray them , do give them these ideas , it will lucidly portray the intensity from swara's part as well!

On the whole a mesmerizing os adroitly mingled with pain, anguish and liberating joy❤️

love,
sanjana

PS would love to know your name.