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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Dear Shruti,

This is such a lovely OS - I had fallen in love with the story the first time I had read it and now reading it all over again makes me fall in love with it again- there is so much magic in it despite the pathos it evokes - that must be what Sanskaar would be feeling - seeing Swara and all the memories it brings back of the moments they had shared - he is aware that she has forgotten him and that this the reason she is unable to recognise him but then the heart is unwilling to listen.

Swara, on the other hand, has vague yet clear memories - she cannot recall the face but is aware of the depth of the love she feels for a man - and is quite confused when her heart seems to recognise him. It is so true - how can one forget a love like that, you love with your heart and your memories are your brains. (But then if one followed this logic then the entire film history would have to be re-written😉

And the ending - when Sanskaar answers - "a lot like you" - the poignancy in that line brings tears to the eyes.

A truly beautiful OS - one that could be written only by someone like you.

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Nyna


Thank you so much Nyna! 🤗


Yes the detective did tell him about the ML but the heart wants what the heart wants😳 And his wants her to just come & hug him tight 😳


@bold: That seriously means a lot. Thanks again😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

this is so heart breakingly beautiful dear!!!! so heart breakingly beautiful...
a lot like you...wonderful...short yet so in depth...reading this m not sure I can see sanskar like this...but at the same time I so wish they focus on LIL things like that...
again...this is a masterpiece love...


Thank you so much!


Yes it is the little things which carry a lot of impact I feel😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Simply awesome... Hats of to you dear.. Crying...

With love...

Kam..


Thank you Kam😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lanny dear...
Magnificent update...loved entire scenario u created between swasan...enjoyed alot...

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Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krishuuu

Lanny dear...

Magnificent update...loved entire scenario u created between swasan...enjoyed alot...

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Talia


Thank you Talia!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lanny my dear 🤗 🤗

I already told you in brief how much I loved this OS, over our PM exchange. Couldn't resist re reading it a couple of times, just to soak in all the feels. 😳

I would love to see this playing out on TV---am getting goosebumps imagining all the myriad expressions flitting over VK's and Helly's faces. Sanskaar would be feeling such a maelstrom of emotions---a powerful, incandescent burst of joy, seeing his very reason for living right before him; mixed with a keen pang of anguish at her incapability to remember him. 😭 😕 I can just picture the wistful, forlorn look on his face, even as he keeps smiling longingly at her. Gosh! You made me tear up again! 😭

And Swara...the trauma she has suffered has obliterated her memories, including the most precious of them all. The lovely time she had spent with her reason for living. What I found so evocative in this fic as regards Swara, was the fact that she knows in her heart, that she belongs with someone. The fact that she was at home with someone. Someone a lot like this magnetic "stranger" in front of her, whom she wants to get irritated with for his "effrontery", but is unable to---she feels that undeniable pull towards him. 😳

The way Sanskaar asked her gently, if she could bandage his wound, since the person who used to do that for him, whom he adored above all else, had forgotten him---Sigh...I could picture VK's intense expressions and voice modulation in that scene. He would just nail this scene!

A very, very poignant piece yaar. And with the definite underpinning of hope---that our Golden couple would find their way back together again. How could they not? Swara's logical mind might not recollect Sanskaar (for now), but they are destined to be together after all, na?

Do continue this if you can. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Lanny my dear 🤗 🤗

I already told you in brief how much I loved this OS, over our PM exchange. Couldn't resist re reading it a couple of times, just to soak in all the feels. 😳

I would love to see this playing out on TV---am getting goosebumps imagining all the myriad expressions flitting over VK's and Helly's faces. Sanskaar would be feeling such a maelstrom of emotions---a powerful, incandescent burst of joy, seeing his very reason for living right before him; mixed with a keen pang of anguish at her incapability to remember him. 😭 😕 I can just picture the wistful, forlorn look on his face, even as he keeps smiling longingly at her. Gosh! You made me tear up again! 😭

And Swara...the trauma she has suffered has obliterated her memories, including the most precious of them all. The lovely time she had spent with her reason for living. What I found so evocative in this fic as regards Swara, was the fact that she knows in her heart, that she belongs with someone. The fact that she was at home with someone. Someone a lot like this magnetic "stranger" in front of her, whom she wants to get irritated with for his "effrontery", but is unable to---she feels that undeniable pull towards him. 😳

The way Sanskaar asked her gently, if she could bandage his wound, since the person who used to do that for him, whom he adored above all else, had forgotten him---Sigh...I could picture VK's intense expressions and voice modulation in that scene. He would just nail this scene!

A very, very poignant piece yaar. And with the definite underpinning of hope---that our Golden couple would find their way back together again. How could they not? Swara's logical mind might not recollect Sanskaar (for now), but they are destined to be together after all, na?

Do continue this if you can. 😊


Viji 🤗

I hope even in the show they do show us Swara's internal mind v/s heart battle. It shouldn't be the same old Swara who was so indifferent to Sanskaar. Even if she doesn't remember anything about him she has to feel that pull! She does love him now & love isn't in your mind...its all in your heart😳

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