Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Beautiful update! I think it was the base of coming updates!
Swara live a carefree life where Sanskaar is bound to being perfect!
Now waiting for SwaSan to meet & how story unfold!
Thnx for the PM & Update soon...pretty plz! *Puppy Face*
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Sree8410

Lucky 😡 where is the PM?😡

Waise I loved the first chapter. Small request if possible please make the conversation in English.

Opposite attracts and my guess would be that they will start working together. What is the incident - wait you will reveal this only later, right?

Conservative family will be meeting ultra modern family. Can't wait to see the clash of the Titans.

Love

Sree


Hey sree🤗

Buddy request bheja hain 😉 waiting list main hain madam😆

Request noted, I will minimize the use of hindi😊

Well ,You are right on those opposites attract, which is a proved theory in love stories and you are bang on about swasan working together, You will get to know how and when in next chapter.

and about familes, though not conservative Maheswari's esp DP is bit rigid like in SR , and gadodias are friendly and open in approach and about Clash of titans ...well they will be coming into picture much later to complicate things but next few chapters will focus on swasan😳😳

Incident, which made swara leave Her house - hush.its a secret😉

Thanks dear😊

Love
Lucky🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

will wait for you to unres nyna🤗🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Beautiful update! I think it was the base of coming updates!

Swara live a carefree life where Sanskaar is bound to being perfect!
Now waiting for SwaSan to meet & how story unfold!
Thnx for the PM & Update soon...pretty plz! *Puppy Face*


Hi nupur🤗

Thanks for dropping by and yes, This chapter is base for all coming chapters

Swara and Sanskaar are two contrasting personalities and the environment which they were brought also has a major influence on them.,Wanted to highlight same in this chapter, glad it could reach out to readers.😛

Swasan will be meeting mostly in next chapter if not in chapter 3.i am too excited for their first meet

Aww.*puppy Face*...I am so sorry sweet heart, given my work schedule all I get is weekends but I promise to post as soon I finish penning down not waiting for weekend to come

Love
Lucky
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45


Unres

Dear Lucky, Unres above

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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Nynaeve



Unres

Dear Lucky, Unres above


thanks ra😊,🤗 will reply in a bit😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Thanks you so much for the pm lucky!
Mein soch rahi thi ki fanaa ka update kab hoga and boom! A new pm yayy😆
I loved you character sketch on Sanky baby, the jet black hair, deep set eyebrows and lambe lambe lashes...ayehaye
DP was on point too. Aur swara ka milkcake se pyaar 😊
And ha chapter bilkul boring nahi tha, if anything I'm slightly more hooked. Update soon haan

Happy hugs 🤗
Nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Hey Lucky,
I loved the old lion DP...the magnificent presence, the showstopper Sanskar... Always confident..and cute swara.
Waiting for perfection to have imperfection crashing upon it...won't it bring heavens tumbling down. You pace and writing is very very enjoyable. Do continue soon!
Love,
Sakura
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res

Dear Lucky,

Nyna🤗🤗

Chapter 1 introduces Swara and Sanskaar as polar opposites and sets the stage for explosions. He pursues perfection and she personifies imperfection. Perfection is an illusion and imperfection is beautiful - I just cannot wait for both of them to meet Maybe, you should just update those chapters first and the rest as flashback (I truly am short on patience😆)

@ bold ; That line is beautiful nyna, and may be we should try reverse order thing ..😆 thinking about swasan ahh * feels*,Even I am so excited for their meeting, cant wait to pen it down

Sanskaar is the only son, brought up in wealth but still wants to work his way up and prove his worth on his capabilities rather than take it as his birthright. Durga Prasad has his reservations (a premonition about Sanskaar falling for Swara) I guess Mr. Mehra who would help Swara would be known to Mr. Malhotra with whom Sanskaar is planning to work.?????

Gotcha!, you picked it up bang on sweety, Yes that small point of Dp having trouble about board meeting which he may not able to pinpoint, thats kinda indication about change in dynamics that may come into picture when sanskaar falls hard for swara

Well Mehra and Malhotra may never meet you know😆..keep watching the space, you will get an idea in next chapter😉😈😆

Swara on the other hand, though, also an only child, is brought up in a relatively open atmosphere and appears to be quite pampered and yet responsible (Sharmishta's hand in this, I think) And then there is the incident which has disturbed Swara so much that she leaves Kolkata - you are keeping too much in suspense and you said in would in the later chapters (how do I wait).

Swara, carries an aura of chlidish enthu around her but yet the same time she is mature enough to handle tough situations on her own and abit of suspense factor is always good you know😉

How quickly would the next weekend come???

Kaash, Hafte main chaar shanivaar hote emantaaru?

love,
Nyna


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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...

Thanks you so much for the pm lucky!

Mein soch rahi thi ki fanaa ka update kab hoga and boom! A new pm yayy😆
I loved you character sketch on Sanky baby, the jet black hair, deep set eyebrows and lambe lambe lashes...ayehaye
DP was on point too. Aur swara ka milkcake se pyaar 😊
And ha chapter bilkul boring nahi tha, if anything I'm slightly more hooked. Update soon haan

Happy hugs 🤗
Nandini


Hi Nandini 🤗🤗, will call you nandu if you dnt mind😛

So happy to know you were waiting for the update, thanks a lot and relieved to know it didn't bore you

well sanky baby is always yummm you know😳😳❤️ and DP, like always to point seedhi baat no bakwaas and swara ka milcake se pyaar, wait for few more chapters, will make sanky darlin love it too😉 what say?

Thanks once again , you excitement is really infectious, feel like penning down right now

Love
Lucky🤗

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