Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: raaz19
Amazing...nice start and update soon...

Hi Raaz

Thank you😊

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Hey Lucky! 🤗
What a powerful prologue and an emotional start! Can really feel Sanskaar's pain at being parted from his Swara and those memories of that house he created for and with her was so touching and more so, that moment of cosmic connection! Wow- will wait to read more but really liked the way you penned this:)

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Shru xoxo

Shru🤗🤗

Double hugs dearie, I know how grilling your schedule is, still you managed to take time to go through this , 😊 I am over whelmed, thanks a lot😊🤗🤗

Swasan and cosmic connection, well you know they are inseparable, and this is one part which makes swasan more charming, and Yes I wanted to capture sanskaar's pain at being parted from his love, But I was bit nervous about being able to do that, make readers feel intensity

phew, your words believe me, are a huge relief sweet heart😊

Love

Lucky

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Sneha Ray

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Interesting prologue..
Update soon
Pls pm me..

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Esha012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Interesting waiting for next update

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Hi Lucky.😊
So intense and heart touching prologue. Awesome!! Loved it.😃
Plzz update the 1st part soon.😳
With love.
Aheli.

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sneharay
Interesting prologue..
Update soon
Pls pm me..

Thanks sneha😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Esha012
Interesting waiting for next update

Thanks Esha, Chapter 1 is up😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hi Lucky.😊
So intense and heart touching prologue. Awesome!! Loved it.😃
Plzz update the 1st part soon.😳
With love.
Aheli.

Hi Aheli

Thanks dear😊, Part 1 Updated😊

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Sree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Lucky 😡 where is the PM?😡

Waise I loved the first chapter. Small request if possible please make the conversation in English.

Opposite attracts and my guess would be that they will start working together. What is the incident - wait you will reveal this only later, right?

Conservative family will be meeting ultra modern family. Can't wait to see the clash of the Titans.

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Sree

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

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Dear Lucky,

Chapter 1 introduces Swara and Sanskaar as polar opposites and sets the stage for explosions. He pursues perfection and she personifies imperfection. Perfection is an illusion and imperfection is beautiful - I just cannot wait for both of them to meet Maybe, you should just update those chapters first and the rest as flashback (I truly am short on patience😆)

Sanskaar is the only son, brought up in wealth but still wants to work his way up and prove his worth on his capabilities rather than take it as his birthright. Durga Prasad has his reservations (a premonition about Sanskaar falling for Swara) I guess Mr. Mehra who would help Swara would be known to Mr. Malhotra with whom Sanskaar is planning to work.?????

Swara on the other hand, though, also an only child, is brought up in a relatively open atmosphere and appears to be quite pampered and yet responsible (Sharmishta's hand in this, I think) And then there is the incident which has disturbed Swara so much that she leaves Kolkata - you are keeping too much in suspense and you said in would in the later chapters (how do I wait).

How quickly would the next weekend come???

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago