Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august)

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@nynu and vijji
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your lovely comments need time to reply. I dont want to rush dearies,no sorry for the same as rule goes,😉 but I am late 😕Working on last min details of chapter 5.will reply in leisure ..Love u both😛 ope you will bear with me 😊

Take all the time you need to reply. Chapter 5 will be up now or tomorrow morning?

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Take all the time you need to reply. Chapter 5 will be up now or tomorrow morning?

now😉

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Res for chap 5 😊

so quick viji🤗 just updated😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Updated part of chapter 5 .Pm's on its way😉

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Res for 5A

Unres:

For a change I shall start from the end - which is actually a new beginning for both of them. Lost in their own world, so much so, that the jubilant chaos around them sounds faint and as though it was from another planet.

Na bole tum na maine kuchh kaha, kaha,

Magar na jaane aisa kyon laga, laga
Ke dhoop mein khila hai chand din mein raat ho gayi
Yeh pyaar ki bina kahe sune hi baat ho gayi

Haal ye ishk - kya kijiyega! And obviously it feels right to hold her in his arms, that is where she is meant to be

I knew the match would be a victory for the kids and hoped that it would a different win for them , where they lost to each other, but did not expect it in this update. Freeze frame - for me too...

Now to the start of it all, how right you are, it is the small things that indeed make a big difference in our lives, so much we receive when we give a smile or share a kind word. It costs nothing but the returns are priceless. There is such a joy in giving especially when the recipients accept with such grace and love.

And the gentle growing closeness between the two - commonplace meetings and conversations - and still the building blocks of any beautiful relationship. Trips to the supermarket, coffee and conversations, sharing of little details and anecdotes - which not only alter his way of thinking, dressing but also his outlook towards life.

Oh - how can I forget the cricket match - a match that led to such marvelous victories - I loved the way Swara first appealed to the gentleman in him and when he still did not seem convinced challenged his sportsman spirit (hook or crook philosophy in full play here😉) and how could Sanskaar resist her. And that lovely moment here, when he gives the bats, she loved watching them being spoiled by him???unknowingly she seems to be loving him too - a little

A very lovely update - eager for more!

lots of love,

Nyna

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arathy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Again a wonderful update. ...

Loved every part of it. ..

Thrilling cricket game and nice to read they won their personal worldcup and the ground as the gift...

The swasan moments that followed was romantic and confused feelings of both was nice

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
res 4
Part Unres

I am first🥳
One read done - a quick one - loved it (as usual) will unres for a detailed comment soon

love,
Nyna

Unres:

Dear Lucky,

Nynu🤗

What a beautiful update that was, as soon as I read I could recall this song:

Aankhon, aankhon mein hum tum, hogaye diwane,
Baathon, baathon mein, dekho ban gaye afsane.

No thank you 😛I ran to google the song. Dont know it was from movie Mahal, dev anand mala sinha ..how perfect it is..thanks for this new addition to my play list

So they decide to be friends, both actually a tad worried about the others reactions and yet enjoying each other's company. He is bewildered and smitten by her changes in expressions, smiles one minute and apologies the next.😉 while she is completely bedazzled by his smiles. (where do we get a Sanskaar like this? ). But what struck me the most, was that even there, his mind quickly calculated how much expense the orphanage would be needing and admired her generosity, even though he realised that she truly did not have much to spare.

Here sanskaar is shrewd businessman tho his dimaag is tuned to act like that😆 but around swara he is already getting lost😉 but still sanky is sanky ..antique piece ra vaadu❤️. Yes, they decide to be friends, bcos though the idea of love at first sight seems supER exciting but a relation/love based on understanding and friendship will evolve to be a more stronger one just like swasan ka in SR.It will be slow and will evolve with time 😉

I loved the conversation they share over coffee and coffee cake (I am absolutely partial - coffee and conversations - any time of the day), and both actually admiring the same trait of being able to share with the less privileged and then his observation that she is quite bossy 😆

That point of Sanskaar insisting he drop Swara home because it is late- I am quite an independent girl - but I do love guys who do that - not because they think less of us but because they care and that tells a lot about them as a person, does it not?

Cant agree more😉 gentleman

Next is the sibling's encounter - I love the sibling bond here, I have a younger brother, so the bond is a little different from the one here, but the teasing and the comfort, the willingness to be open and share your secrets, that would all be there. Gift opening - that is more fun than the gift at times - I insist my brother always wrap the gifts he gets for me (never mind that half the time I have to tell him what I want😡, he just is unable to think up on his own). Guess all men are like that, which is why Uttara guessed that he had help - of the feminine variety😆

Siblings bond is always special either way, the elder ones being bit responsible , younger being all bratty and pampered😆 and all that you have mentioned makes bomd even more special Its amazing how they turn out be our best buddies whom you can look up to at an point and they will be there for you

The text messages - Sanskaar truly has Swara pegged down and decides to prolong her agony (kiska aashirwad 🤣🤣🤣 - I so loved it) and his matter of fact reply (he has a sense of humour too - I WANT HIM, RIGHT AWAY!)

😆 At least he got one department which he can play around bcos swara got him tossed in many 😆.aashirwaad being best one 🤣, of course he has more underlying layers, sense of humour being one, we will reveal more interesting ones😳 in later parts ..

And what was that ending - sounds a little worrisome. Please, update soon.

Nothing to worry as of now sweet heart 😊..its going be fine atleast for some more time

love,
Nyna

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Unres for Chapter 5A on page 25.

Glad you loved that song - one of my all time favourites - a slow sensuous song for a slowly blossoming love

love,

Nyna

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Lucky sweetheart 🤗 🤗

Viji 🤗🤗

Am back for my detailed reply here. You know that I'm in love with this SS---it feels all so real. That is something I admire so much in this story...everything is so relatable. The events which unfold, the way Sanskaar and Swara react, the way their minds tick and their personalities work, the way that come across to each other, the slow evolution of the comfort and attraction between them.

No thank you.. and me😳😳

Its all so much like watching two people who could be my very dear, close pals, meet by chance, feel a certain something, and gradually, tantalizingly, start to feel something more. 😳 I don't know if I've put that very well...😊

got it..i m so glad you are finding swara and sanskaar in fanna like characters whom you can connect with and relatable..and of course they are very dear to you and all of us 😉 after all they are our darlins. Its like watching the love story of our close pals unfolding

I just loved this chapter. The interactions between SwaSan were so sweet, so magical. Carried the sheen of the beginning of a lovely relationship...starting as a "friendship", but with the definite feel of something deeper that would evolve. 😳

Yes It would evolve dheere dheere se😉

I liked the way Swara apologized for laughing at him about the ashirwad slip that Sanskaar made...Oh, that was such a priceless moment!! And Sunny Boy decides to pay her back a little bit by pretending to be hurt. 😆 😉 Oh what wonderful dialogues those were----his voice intoned in the way he used to discipline his errant employees!! 😆

But then, what I found so lovely, was the fact that he did not want to let Swara feel bad for too long...The minute he realized that she felt bad about supposedly making him feel bad 😳 😉, he immediately confessed that he was only kidding. He doesn't like her becoming all serious and sad, na?

Swara is such a sweet heart that she cant see people in pain and as she felt bad about laughing over his slip on aashirwaad😆 and sunny boy hardly gets to peg own swara but he cant see swara sad.Its like tere mere beech main kaisa hain ye bandhan anjaana

So they sign of their friendship with a handshake! 😳 Sunny boy flashes his lethal, dazzling grin, making Swara a little light headed with the wattage and charm of that smile na? I could just picture Sanskaar doing that. 😳

😳😳 Sanskaar and smile lethal combo ..maar daala allah😳 hain na

And Swara flashes a dazzling grin of her own in return. I think these two are so taken by each others smiles...the seeds of an all encompassing attachment and a deep love are already being sown. 😊

The conversation over coffee at that lovely coffee joint was so lovely (again, I could vividly picture it, the different people there whom you described through Swara's eyes!). The "no sorry and no thank you" friendship rule makes its entry here. 😊 Sanskaar's quip "Yeh tumhari line hai?", pulling her leg gently, since she had made so many apologies to him, had me grinning to myself. My, My---Sanskaar certainly does know how to gently pull someone's leg, in a subtly ironic manner. 😛 😉

Yes, Famous rule makes an entry here..it had to..

And the way Swara said she was such a wonderfully good person right from her bachpan, was so artlessly cute! She has bowled over Mr Sophisticated with her guileless, innocent charm! And the best part was, he found her a tad bossy, and liked that, too! 😉 😊

cute and bossy ..aise rare combo hain tho mr sophisticated ke paas koi choice nahi hain other than getting bowled over😆

As an aside, Lucky---I always feel that a very confident man, who is self assured and poised, seldom minds his better half being occasionally bossy. There are no hang ups or insecurities there na? In my limited experience (Dad, Hubby, Bro)---all (touch wood) understanding and confident men; all have had absolutely zilch hang ups to being occasionally bossed by Mom, myself and sis in law, respectively. 😆 😉

Agree .. when there is love nad trust .. no chnace of insecurity and being bossy occasionally is always a bit fun 😉

And it works the other way, too! Fortunate me (and mom and sis in law, of course!) 😊

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The way Sanskaar insisted on dropping her to her flat as it was getting late, the way he kept looking at her in the rear view mirror, kept thinking about her, was Oh so very romantic! And the best part was Sanskaar analyzing why he felt that way, and giving himself rational explanations that he was obviously thinking about her since she was his friend. 😆 😆 I SO wanted to jump into your tale and pull his cheeks! 😉 He is falling hard and fast, na?

Bechara become so pareshaan as swara keeps invading his thoughts and for the business man he is, that too marketing ka analysis tho banata hain tho thats only a bahana to convince himself ki she's a friend😆. Sanskaar though at this point is not very clear about his feelings for swara and since the relation is still in evolving stage but this analysis may prove to be helpful in future when he falls for her .😉

I've already mentioned how much I adored the Sanskaar---Uttara bonding. It brings back so many fond memories of my growing up years with my elder bro. That moment, when Uttara had tears in her eyes at seeing the special gift Sanskaar picked for her---the elder bro holding his kid sister's hand wala figurine---Yaar, Lucky---I was in tears at that point. So very, very moving.

awww..I think you are very very close to your brother. Its evident in all our discussions about siblings😊 ..and the memories of growing together are just priceless

And again, those dialogues between Sanskaar and Uttara were simply priceless. So very real, exactly how a bro--sis talk to each other. So much love and tender affection there, but also teasing mercilessly and taking each others case royally!

glad you liked that part so much , thats closer to my heart as well😳

Uttara saying that she knew her Bhai loved her to bits, but that his choice extended only to chocolates, he must have had help in picking the other gifts, was so very 🤣

🤣 🤣 So true of men!! And the way she was teasing Sanskaar with Swara (calling her bhabhi!!) was just too good!! Wonder if Uttara would play cupid for them in future? Or would she be out of the picture altogether, since she's going to a hostel now?

😆 Uttara, not actively but yes she will have a bit to play after all sanskaar needs some one who he can confide to his secrets😉, who could be better than sibling

And then, came that priceless SMS exchange between SwaSan. Sunny boy really has judged HIS Swara very well, nai? 😊 He knows she is going to feel ever so guilty if he waited on his sms reply a bit, making her think he had felt upset at her joke about the ashirwad atta again. 😃 And true to expectations, Swara said Sorry...😉

And then came the killer SMS---Sunny boy matter of factly listing the items he'd had for dinner, in a supposedly innocuous reply to her earlier sms, asking dinner mein kya hai? 😆 Ooohhh...that was such a classic! Almost as much as "kiska ashirwad!"

Ashirwaad is a hit ..thanks to ITC😆 and yeah sunny boy got her down in guilty department..ek tho mile sunny ko 😉

Too Good Lucky. Such finesse in light hearted banter. You have a lovely touch there, my dear.

I am SO eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Do update soonest you can.

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