Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august) - Page 17

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Lucky dearest 🤗

shru🤗🤗

I am late but you know why and as your story too covers those golden friendship rules I won't apologise 😉

rules tho rules hain, ab dosti ki hain tho maan na padega na😉

This was the perfect thing for me to help handle post DK blues 🤗. I went back and read the previous super cute chapter too. I am so getting such nice "feels" with story and I simply love your writing style Lucky- it's so natural, the flow is great and your dialogues feel really spontaneous; nothing is overdone or forced about this. Like me, you clearly do fairly long updates but I still want more at the end and hope you know that this I mean as a genuinely heartfelt compliment.

DK BLUES..😭 dont remind me ..I still cant come into terms ki DK ended😭 I totally get how you might be feeling😭 But I am happy that a bit of fanaa is helping you out😊

Feels😳..swara aur sanskaar ho aur feels na ho ..not possible.😆 I mean thinking about them itself gives so many feels..they are just magic, arent they ? 😳 and no thank you for all nice words shru ..means a lot when it comes from one of your fav writers🤗🤗

Long updates HMM..Weekly once update, I feel obliged to give long ones though sometimes may not be possible and you want more of it😳

no thank you again😆😛❤️

I loved how you have shown the natural attraction first between both Sanskaar and Swara but it is so sweetly tempered with respect and then the start of a wonderful friendship. I love the angle of the orphanage and the children. I had written an OS ages ago- totally different context but had dealt with a scenario where it was Sanskaar's tribute to a deceased Kavita (we knew nothing about her then) to go to an orphanage (Sishur Sevay was one I researched and chose as it really inspired me) and then Swara had helped him 😃. Here I love how that humane and compassionate side of them is explored and gives them an immediate connect. Sanskaar is already falling hard and fast- the signs are so obvious and Mr Suave cannot help but be pulled in by the sweet and naive but yet intelligent and gutsy beauty he has met. Same for Swara- she has no armour for her sophisticated charm and lovely manners. On an aside, men who are gentlemen and have manners are my weak spot. My own hubby, even if I say so myself and won't admit to him, has beautiful manners. The holding of doors, worrying about the lateness of the hour, and the various other touches are making me melt towards this Mr Maheshwari too 😳. I also love how you have made Sanskaar want to be self made despite his elite background.

I remember that OS TRIBUTE..it was such a beautiful one shru 😊and wish they would have let remain kavita as sweet memory rather than turning her into vamp. Lil flowers defo is key player here and children being such pure souls thought making leads bond over them would be good and would give more scope for getting them together..Happy its working out😳😛

oh yeah , hero will be the one to fall first for he seems not to get rid of swara's thoughts and later lady will follow😉

The other thing that made me grin ear to ear was the cute bonding. I love Uttara 😆😆 and her teasing was priceless! Oh and in modern romances I find it can be easy to lose the romance with texts and all if you are not careful but you have wonderfully managed this and I found their exchange perfect and so cute without being childish.

Uttara ..I am so glad you guys are liking it .I was nervous thinking if I had stretched that part b/w bro sis, but feels relived now.😛 and the teasing part 😆 comes a bit from my own experience , I have two brothers😆

Text Part ..Well that was a tough part ,I mean so many things were popping up in my mind but with help of my bestie I could track them down to right ones ..lot of brain storming went behind simple sms😆😆. Relieved again😊

So then I assume more of this till things "heat" up, love blossoms in earnest and then "wham"- a problem or complication(s)? OR will those hit before, interrupting the currently smooth ride? 😕. But for now, not going to overthink that. Am so enjoying this nice and sweet but still exciting enough development of growing feelings.

Few bumps on its way but later .You have to wait and watch if problems will hit before things heat up or after or at both times😉😈 Meanwhile enjoy happy ride with our darlins😳

Lovely work Lucky! Loads of love always,

🤗🤗

Shru xoxo

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res 😊

Lucky dear, am at my cousin's wedding; functions through today and tomorrow ( you know how South Indian weddings are). 😊

Will un res as soon as back. 🤗

Love ya loads

Viji

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Lucky 🤗

viji🤗🤗

aww ..I love u ..inspite of wedding you dropped in ..😳

Will be back for my detailed revert later. But in the meantime, I just wanted to give you a big round of 👏 for how real and so very relatable your dialogues are. Just superb. I was grinning so contentedly to myself, envisioning your Sanskaar and Swara chatting with each other, that lovely banter and later, that sms exchange, was just so superbly done.

No thanks again so hugs🤗 ..my sanskaar swara ..nah ..our sanskaar and swara😉 whoa I could make you guys smile

Again, the Sanskaar--Uttara bond was so genuinely portrayed. A completely real feeling of a bro--sis bond. Who adore each other to bits, and enjoy taking each others case, too. 😆 Reminded me of my bond with my elder bro, whom I love to bits. And for whom I am still "kondhe" 😉 (Tamil for gudiya).

Oh ..I totally get where you are coming from viji .I have two elder brothers and I am still chutki for them.😛 Now u know why uttara and sanskaar scenes turned out good .😃 I myself enjoyed those parts so much.😉

Excellent work as usual Lucky. This is one of my favorite works on the forum.

😳😳🤗 I am honoured dearie

Lots of Love

Viji

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Hi

Your latest chapter makes me want to fall in love once again. The SMS conversation is lovely. Please update soon

Veena.

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Lucky dear,😊
Awesome update.👏 Loved each and every moments of SwaSan.😳 So sweet, cute, funny, teasing and caring.😳 I think Sanskar is falling in love with Swara.😉 Loved their text convo.😆
Sanskar and Uttara's bonding is so sweet. Such a cute bro-sis pair.😊 Haahaa!! Uttara teasing him with Swara's name.😆 Plzz update the next part soon.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.