SwaSan & RagYa FF - There's some love that hurts [Ch. 2 on Pg.3]

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Hello everyone! I'm planning to write both RagYa and SwaSan FF this time, I know I started many stories and after few chapters I didn't continue 😆 but this time I will Pakha Continue. Since I'm using phone this time sorry for not being able to send you all PMs

It starts with Sanskar's return to Maheshwari Mansion for Revenge from his younger brother Lakshy Maheshwari.

Prologue 5 years ago Sanskar used to love a girl named Kavita but since she was a Bengali girl so DP didn't agree for their marriage and accepted their love. As only laksh knew about his relationship and love for Kavita, he thought laksh was responsible for telling DP about it and he lost his love forever as DP killed Kavita.

For the world now, Sanskar was death but this wasnt't the truth, he was alive and waiting for the right time to make an entry into Maheshwari Mansion. Time had passed but Sanskar could never forget Kavita as she always remained in his heart forever

One fine day a news comes to Sanskar that his brother Laksh's marriage was fixed to Swara, Swara Bose who also was a Bengali girl.

"Wow what a two faced man you are, You didn't let me marry her because she was bengali but your letting your son marry a girl of his choice even if she's a bengli" Sanskar says while fuming with anger and looking at DP's picture

"But I won't let you both Father and Son live peacefully, I will be back I'm coming soon! Till then smile as much as you want" He says and burns his and Laksh's picture

Meanwhile in Laksh's room, he's looking at the old photo albums when a picture of him and sanskar falls to the ground

"Where are you bhai? Why did you leave me and go so far away bhai? didn't even you think once who will i share will and talk with ... If only you could come back, but I know that's not possible because you have gone very far away" Laksh cries saying this

Do suggest a title 😉

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Chapter 1 - Page 2

Chapter 2 - Page 3


Thank you for reading and all comments and suggestions are welcomed

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start Anjale👍🏼
Waiting to see how laksh falls for ragini now when he is getting married to swara and what sanskar does next.
Don't make ragini negative please, let her be positive in your story😳
Do update soon😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing, its gonna be interesting
waiting for more updates
good work :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story anjale.
Hey how is A Tale Of Love as the title
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Anjale😊
please don't make ragini negative



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prolouge!
Title can be Swaragini's arabic version title- And there's some love that hurts!
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Thank you everyone for reading and liking the Story! First few chapters are just the introduction and background to the story and would include more of Swa-Lak scenes than SwaSan and RagYa. Here is chapter one of the story.

Chapter 1 --

It was a beautiful night tonight, the sky was clear and the moon was shinning bright

"Swara!Mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai"

"Toh bolo na Laksh"

"Swara!Mein tumse bohot bohot pyaar karta hu, mein tumhare saath apne puri zindagi betana chati hu ... I love you"

"I love you too Laksh .. I love you"

They both hug each other but what they didn't know was that they were being stalked and a picture of them hugging and laksh propsing swara had been taken by someone

Person 1(The person who took the pictures) : Your work is done!

Sanskar: Good! Now see how I'll destroy laksh with this picture

Person 1: I'm also waiting for the day to see him all broke and destroyed. He destroyed my everything now it's my turn

Sanskar: That father and son duo had destroyed many people's life now I won't let them live peacefully

Meanwhile swara and laksh breaks the hug

"But Laksh, what about our families they'll never agree to our relation, I'm from a bengali family and your from a Marwari family"

"Don't worry about this swara, I'm there so I'll take care of everything .. I think we should return home now, if anyone sees us here together at this hour at night we'll be in trouble"

Saying this they both returned to their respective home and thought about a plan on how to tell their family about their relation and make them agree

Laksh thought of a idea and hence messaged swara regarding it

Laksh msg: Swara! Let's bring both our families to the temple nearby, where else can be a better place to tell them about our relation then in a holly place like the Mandir, I know that it's a public place and they can create scenes but I'm sure god will handle everything, and whatever will happen will happen for good reason only

Swara msg replay to laksh: Okay laksh! I also hope everything goes well.. see you tomorrow .. I love you

Laksh: I love you too

Laksh keeps his phone aside and walks to his cupboard, to decide what he should wear for tomorrow. He was searching for his clothes when a picture falls down upside down

Laksh: Now what is this? (He picks it up and sees the picture) .. This picture ..

Laksh was shocked looking at the picture as it was a picture of Ragini, he keeps looking at the picture for a while and afterwards tears it

The next morning, both laksh and swara talked to their respective family about making a visit to the temple

AP: But laksh we just visited there few days ago, why do you want to go again

Laksh: Please let's go na mom! Last time we didn't go with the entire family. Also, today everyone is free

DP: Your right laksh, it's been long we all didn't go out anywhere. Now all of you get ready we''ll leave within half an hour

All the Maheshwaries goes to get ready while Swara is still busy trying to make Sharmista agree

Dida: Come on Shomi! First time your daughter is asking you to go to temple and your denying her

Swara: Mom please na ... plus we should never say no to temple

Sharmista: Fine, Okay! Now get ready

Both Gadodias and Maheshwari's were on their way to the temple

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Laksh tears the picture of Ragini!!!
Sounds interesting :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update I wonder what happened between Ragini and Laksh
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update Anjale
very interesting

what happened between RagLak

please update soon

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