SwaSan & RagYa FF - There's some love that hurts [Ch. 2 on Pg.3] - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2 --

The Maheshwari and Gadodias both reached the temples and Swara & Laksh prayed together with their respective families

Swara messages Laksh: Laksh come to the back side of the temple I'll see you there

Laksh replied: Okay see you ...

Laksh and Swara met at the back side of the temple

Laksh: Now we should make our families meet before they plan to leave

Swara: Your right laksh .. let's introduce them to each other and make them understand

As Swara & Laksh were heading back to their families, a man just came and holded into swara's dupata which had frighted swara due to his scary and poor look

Man: Please mujhe bachaao.. mujhe kuch kaane do .. mujhe bohot bok laagi hai

Swara tries to get her dupata back but he keeps holding on to it

He was in all torn clothes and his face was covered in black dirt

As soon as this happened everyone were looking (including the two families) towards Swara laksh and the man with them

Laksh: Yeh kya batameezi hai? Choro uska dupaata

Man: Nahi ... dupaata ... dost ... kaha hai?

Hearing the person talk, laksh feels like he has heard the voice before

Laksh: (to himself) Why does this voice sound so familier to me?

Soon the Gadodia and Maheshwari family reach the spot where Swara and laksh were

DP: Laksh! What are you doing here? Chalo let's go home now

Pareenita: Swara! Are you okay?

Dida: Look at this, this man is still holding on to her dupaata

Pareenita: Maa! We need to go home soon .. the clouds are getting darker seems like it's going to rain and we didn't bring umbrella too

"Sanskar! Sanskar!" A voice was heard of a girl calling sanskar from far away

"Dupaata Dost" Screams the man who was holding on to swara's dupaata

The girl sees Sanskar and rushes to him "Sanskar! Kaha chale gaaye the tum? Tumhe paata hai mein kitni pareeshan ho gaiti .. kaha kaha nahi dunda Tumhe" she says

The man in that dirty and old clothes was no other than Sanskar ... Sanskar Maheshwari

"Sorry Dost" Sanskar replies to the girl

Everyone was shocked to see Sanskar there and couldn't believe their eyes

Laksh: Sanskar bhai ... Ragini?

Laksh was very happy to see his brother sanskar back after years but at the same time shocked to see Ragini with him

Sujata: Sanskar! Mara chora sanskar ... mujhe pata tha ke tum zinda ho

Sujata hugs him but Sanskar pushes her away and holds Ragini's dupaata

Sanskar: (saying to sujata) Nahii ... durr durr raaho mujse ... tum bad girl ho

Sujata: nahi sanskar mein buri nahi hu ... mein toh tumhari maa hu ... kya hua hai Tumhe kyu nahi pechaante mujhe

Sujata starts to cry as sanskar wasnt able to recognize her

AP to Sujata: Calm down sujata.. control yourself, everything will be fine soon

Laksh runs to Sanskar and hugs him

Laksh: Bhai! Where were you all these years, you know how much I missed you

Laksh hugs Sanskar but this time Sanskar keeps looking at him without responding anything

Sharmista tells swara to return home now : Chalo swara, let's go home

Dida: Yes let's go ...

Swara looks at Laksh but he was too busy with Sanskar so she leaves with dida and her mom

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you will read it later
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sanskar with Ragini...😆
Want to know what will be Ragini's reaction when she meets Laksh . . 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update Anjale can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG !!
Anj !!

Lovely, lovely plot !!

The premise of the story is so amazing, and the plot is getting thicker, so to speak.

Ragini with Sanskaar ?

What is this all about ? I really can't wait to find out more.

Please update soon !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey hi. Is de beggining same as de show ?? I got confuse cz laksh tored Ragini's pic nd in de prolouge Ragini wasn't mention ?? plzz updtee soon. Thnkww for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it anjale👏👏😳..read both parts bcoz was busy with exams..😕
continue soon😳😳

Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Wow ⭐️ don't know how to compliment your writing skills 👏 simply awesome
Really eager to know how laksh knows ragini and how Ragini and Sanskar knows each other. Waiting for next chapter 😳 impatiently
Please continue soon and do PM me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you for the pm
Lovely update
Can't wait for next update

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