Res, Saku my love! I am beat this week and also frantically working on a very long chapter for DK so please bear with me till Friday or the weekend but I wanted to secure my spot:). Will also comment on Vajra as soon as I find some time! xoxo
Unres for both parts:
Saku 🤗
I was so glad when I saw you had delved into the world of OSs/TSs:) and of course you delivered like you always do- with powerful writing and a well threshed out plot. I was so intrigued to read the reference to Patrons, being a huge HP fan of course and for the phase you chose to represent it was the perfect link- both SwaSan were in dire need of a patronus there and this provided almost that for me personally as I shall explain! When I first realised what phase you had set the TS in I was a a bit apprehensive. It remains one of the worst phases in the show to me- only outdone by the disgusting plot that emerged post Kro! But this gave me such a nicer and much preferred treatment and resolution, it was a balm.
The anguish and conflict of part 1 came through so well including the little moments between them that they cannot just hide from, no matter how much "outward: conflict prevails between them. It was so understandable how Sanskaar was so resistant to believe, to hope, to trust in fate being anything but unkind to him after all he has been through . And Swara's pain too- after realising that she had been wrong and misguided but now genuinely returning that overwhelming love that was always his due and that he gave her, thinking it may be too little too late . But of course that had to happen and they had to prevail over that. Some lovely touches I wanted to highlight- the reference to Sirius and the scene with the shawl 👏👏. By then I was so anticipating Part 2.
And then there it was! Just the right touch there and you pulled it all together so sweetly- chocolatey indeed 😉 and left me satisfied but always wanted seconds too (sorry for the rubbish puns 😆). I loved how Swara Maheshwari was so determined and really went after proving her love, her own too apparently finally too strong for our Mr Perfect Maheshwari to continue to resist! And so they had a contrived time spending session which of course Sanskaar saw through, but wanted to play along with too- after all his heart lay there too! And then the sweetness of the simple things like making a cake and tasting frosting and understanding it was for his birthday, all culminating in a final resolution of that awful impasse and period of misunderstanding and pain. Sigghhh- such a lovely end. A real Patronus inducing memory certainly created for life!!! I am trying to figure out what Partonus's both would have. Perhaps a gorgeous steed with Sanskaar's eyes for Swara - loyal, steadfast and noble and much like how Veer (from DK!) is? For Sanskaar- tricky!! But maybe a skittish but pretty doe with Swara's eyes- jumping gracefully and drawing him to bright sunlit places?!
Love you Saku xoxo
Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago
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