Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
My friend,
My network was interrupted. I didn't complete my view.
The update was awesome. Really heart touching one.
I felt bad for both swara and sanskar.
Hey Sakkiyah 🤗
No worries, I should have known you were interrupted as you usually give such a nice full set of comments 😃 Thank you so much for the below and the lovely summary, showing as ever that you picked up all the various nuances I was trying to bring out. Really pleased you loved this chapter despite its angst, I felt it was needed to move the story to where I need it next at so really appreciate the way you have grasped all that.
The beginning was beautiful. The auditorium sequence was well written. Sanskar a good warrior. The flames shot up sequence was well written. The audience were excited to see that sequence. The return entry of sanskar as a prince is a happy news for the people in his country.
Swara was sitting behind her mother's.
She wanted to watch his performance. Her heart was still beating for him.
She can't control her excitement,
In this performance also sanskar was searching his lady love, he only wanted to see her smile. He was searching it and at last his eyes got its destination.
He was really happy after seeing her. Swara was also happy. They shared a passionate eye lock. They were lost in each other. Janaki, sharmista, Annapurna, and sujatha were witnessed this. Swara's thoughts were broken.
These two just gravitate towards each other- they seek one another out and cannot stay away and only really feel happy or complete when with the other 😊
Durgaprasad praised sanskar for his brilliance, and he gave him all the powers back. He praised Pawan and swara. Swara was happy after hearing this.
But her happiness was short lived.
The family were discussing about swara's wedding.
But they were confused about this.
The real truth was, when swara was praised some one was faking their happiness.
Dearest Ragini would of course revert to her jealousy 🤢
Janaki was saying about swara's wedding and she was not interested in that topic.
In the palace sanskar was waiting to watch swara once.
He witnessed the conversation between janaki and ranjit.
Sanskar was searching swara in the dinner. But from janaki he hears that swara was sick.
So he immediately reached swara's chamber to meet her.
He was worried for her. Swara was surprised to see him.
He asked about her health. At that time janaki came to there
And she saw him
She didn't questioned her. But she informed her about wedding. It was fixed with ranjit.
Swara was shattered after hearing this. Her world was lost.
She was not ready for this marriage. She was in love with sanskar. She confessed her love in front of janaki ma.
And at last sanskar also confessed his love for swara to
Annapurna. After hearing Swara's wedding was fixed with ranjit sanskar was shattered..
He wanted to stop that wedding. But he was helpless.
The update was filled with tears.
The condition of swasan is really painful. They love each other. But the circumstances are not favourable.
The whole situation spiralled out of control due to Swara's family fearing more and more for her reputation and grassing what they see as a "solution"
I think the character of janaki is grey shaded. It is my guess.
In the beginning of the story janaki always supported swara. But while reading this update, I think the love was fake.
Because she slapped ragini after the accusations of sanskar and saved her. Today she arranged a alliance for swara. He is a family friend of janaki.
When swara will marry ranjit, then the life of ragini will be safe. In annapurna's decision also, it was mentioned about the relationship between the sisters.
Hmmm, this is DK so of course anything is possible but Janaki has always been shown as a queen in the same sense as Annapurna- taking decisions where necessary. If you think from a different viewpoint, the mothers especially could fear for Swara. They have their own strange family situation they have lived with and seen the pain it brings. As for Janaki, if you think back, in the past she also took a stern decision with Ragini and made her accept that Lakshya would't be hers as that was a political need. Let's see what happens.
But how shekhar support this? I have no idea about this.
I think for reputation he is doing this.
Well quite- he is a father in an orthodox time where things are very weighted against girls and he is trying to "fix" things. Of course having the opposite effect but he cannot know that.
But the condition of swara is really bad. She can't confess her love.
And the marriage alliance will be a new torture for her.
He is too old. And she can't love him. She gave her heart to sanskar. It is true that she can't marry him, and she can't forget him.
Swara is a good soul.. She only knew to love.
But she was betrayed by her own sister.
She was a victim of her sisters plan.
But she was named characterless. She is totally shattered. She is a volcano now.
She has no voice.
And sanskar's condition is also same. After years he got his family. He proved his innocence. And he loves some one unconditionally. But he is helpless.
The dilemma is painful.
And sujatha is also against the marriage. So many new hurdles are on the way.
And sanskar is going to a dangerous mission.
And swara is worried for him.
What will happen next?
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
The situation for both of SwaSan is sad and full of hurdles . As you sum up, a lot of factors in play here and a fine mess has resulted so let us see what happens next. 😃