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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#431

Shru🤗 Finally unresd on 58😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#432

Dearest All

I just want to apologise but unfortunately despite my frantic efforts I am still not done with Chapter 33 and I won't be able to post this tonight. It is the first time since I began DK so many months ago that I have been unable to update at the weekend but the Chapter has been taxing beyond description. I have literally not left the house all weekend and am more than 15 pages in but still have a lot of work to do. I am so sorry, please bear with me. I would have pulled an "all nighter" but have work commitments tomorrow that I cannot let people down on so I cannot. I will keep working on this and shall not promise an exact day to post by but please rest assured that I am giving it my all and will update soon.

Thanks for being with you and supporting me.

Love,

Shruti

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Sanya17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#433

No worries dear take your time

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: Sanya17
No worries dear take your time

Thanks for understanding Sanya, been writing literally all day and now totally shattered.

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#435

Dear Shru,

Just relax and take care- do not tax yourself!

Love,

Nyna

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piccola1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#436

Finally caught up, after simply aeons, with DK and the forum ..and what a superb twist in the tale you have designed Shru ! 👏

Loving the power play of the Queen bees, the cloak and dagger play by Janaki via Kavita, the Lakshya-Sanskaar rebonding, the Samant's continued loyalty (I do like him), and the extremely beautiful, deft touch to the Pawan-Uttara blooming love !😳

What really stood out for me, and hats off to you for your brilliant writing, was the Annapurna and Swara dialogue. That Swara could keep her faith in her love despite the deliberate instigation, speaks eloquently of the strength of the love and trust she has in her Prince ! A truly brave abd true Princess for our valiant knight.⭐️

Janaki's perfidy, her complete transformation from oh too good to be true to her evil current, was, to me (as I'd written in an earlier post) not unexpected. She had good reason to be negative - angry and unhappy and jealous. But the extreme hatred that is revealed was indeed shocking in its very intensity! Especially so, because she not only betrayed Swara- she deliberately pushed her to a fate worse than death, knowing how depraved Deependra is. That is heinous and hateful and wipes out any trace of sympathy one can have for a wife cheated upon. She deserves no mercy.😡

I liked that you had Ragini finally yield to the pull of her conscience - again I dont know about redemption - but her better self did prevail. Thank God.😲

Chapter 33 will be tough am sure. Cause we have our Golden girl in the hands of a barbarian..it makes me fearful of what we may have to read. Yes our K9night is riding hard to catch up..am keeping my faith in you to get him there well in time !😊

Eager to lap up your next course ! And more than willing to wait for it Shru. It whets the appetite...and we will relish it more for that whetting !

So take your time! We will build our appetites with the aromas wafting from your literary kitchen !😃

Lotsaluv, Pic.🤗

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#437

Shruuu love...

Chapter 32 was fabulous...loved it...

Sorry for late reply..life is hectic nowadays...

Coming to chapter...janki..i felt soo pity for this women...such troubled past...she bear soo much...was longing for her husband love..but shekhar fell for sharmishta...which broken her more..n converted her into cunning women...but for her husband love she accepted sharmishta n swara...just that her husband stay with them..wanting to gave him heir..but God gave her ragini..n again all her dreams shattared...she wanted good life for ragini...n swara...too...but due to lakshya stupidity...she was again lost to darkness..planned n schemed to such low levels..handing swara to devrndra was one of most heinious acts..she even killed that innocent maid...what ur insecurity ..jealousy..hatred turns u into a devil...even worst...felt bad for her ..but this was not right move...

Sansku my baby..glad he got annu letter n immediately figured out..something is fishy n planned to return...but came across bad news on his way...nearly lost his friend n swara...cried soo much to see him in pain...his cries for pawan..entire scene was breathtaking...n pawan was alive..he disclosed swara whereabouts...n he safely send him to mahesh mahal...hope pawan lives...loved uttara n pawan scene..her desperation for him was soo sweet..loved...it

Dying to know what happens next...hope swasan live n stay together happily..they suffered alot in life...

Update soon baby...

Love

Talia

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dilwali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#438

Plz shruti take your time and don't be pressurized. All will understand

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Geethu_sweetie

@Geethu_sweetie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Dearest All
I just want to apologise but unfortunately despite my frantic efforts I am still not done with Chapter 33 and I won't be able to post this tonight. It is the first time since I began DK so many months ago that I have been unable to update at the weekend but the Chapter has been taxing beyond description. I have literally not left the house all weekend and am more than 15 pages in but still have a lot of work to do. I am so sorry, please bear with me. I would have pulled an "all nighter" but have work commitments tomorrow that I cannot let people down on so I cannot. I will keep working on this and shall not promise an exact day to post by but please rest assured that I am giving it my all and will update soon.

Thanks for being with you and supporting me.

Love,
Shruti

Don't stress yourself dear.. Take your time and we can wait, don't worry 😊