DARK KNIGHT-A SwaSan FF-T4-DELETED-AN PG1- Creations-Pgs 98/9 - Page 38

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Chapter 30:

Shru 🤗

Lanny dearest 🤗

Sorry for my late response xoxo

Swara is all listless & missing Sanskaar badly. Funny that she isnt thinking about her Baba &his safe return at all😛😉😆 So nice of Uttara to spend some time with Swara given that Pawan is still in Maheshpur😆

😆 I already explained that I didn't want more time wasted and that too on Shekhar who hardly wins the prize for best Baba 😆. Missing Sanskaar deserved more attention! Uttara - awww 😃, like Sanskaar she capitalises her chances when she can!

While I don't like the idea of Ragini being forgiven so easily...even without her asking for it but what Sujata said does make sense. SwaSan have accused her but could not prove her guilty. At the moment I am just happy that Sujju says that she believes SwaSan but like any woman/ mother she wants some peace for her home & children & if that means she has to get forgiveness to an undeserving woman...so be it. But I loved Swara's conditional forgiveness. She will forgive Ragini's past deeds but if she were to repeat it & cause any further harm to Sanskaar or anyone Swara loves there will be no more forgiveness👏 Now it remains to be seen what Ragini does with this unearned & definitely undeserved forgiveness which she has got so easily.

Yes Sujata does what her rather simplistic thinking and also rather centred around her and her own tells her to do. Also as you say it does make sense as they cannot kick Ragini out on the street and if they are to live here, she wants some harmony as things have already been to hell and back for them all . The main point as you note was that Swara showed she is forgiving but not stupidly and will not be a pushover! Especially when it comes to her knight- she will not stand any offence or injury to him 😃. As for Ragini, she has limited capabilities in certain departments and I think you have commented on that for the observations on 31 already 😉

What was Ragini doing in Janaki's room? Did she come just to see her mother or did she plant that message there?

Ragini as was revealed by 31 was not the one who actually planted that letter

Janaki & AP are such similar creatures but they reacted more like mothers today than Queens. The mother in Janaki was all confused & afraid for her daughter & thus in turn confused Swara with her panic. And on the other hand we have AP. She is Sanskaar's mother & before offering help or advice she wants to know if Swara trusts her son. This is the same woman whose trust in Sanskaar is unshakable. She stood against her own husband for this very son & hence naturally she wants to know if the woman entering her beloved son's life has even a quarter of that faith in him. And Swara doesn't disappoint! 👏 AP must be so proud of Swara & her son's choice👏 I loved how after her initial panic Swara when left to think on her own almost read each & every action of Sanskaar with precision. She knows him so well & hence guesses what he would do & what he wouldn't correctly👏 She chooses to keep faith. But then the topping on the cake is how she tells AP (to even talk to such a woman so clearly fearlessly would require some courage) firmly but politely that she will never agree to be one of two women for a man👏 👏 👏 She will readily leave with a broken heart if he chooses Kavita over her but she will not compromise on her self respect. I will once again repeat what I said in one of my earlier comments: abhimaani ladkiya bahot mil jaati hai par swabhimaani ladkiya nahi milti😳

I will say little about Janaki save to reiterate that I still maintain she too is a queen- a queen can be dark as she can be bright after all 😉. AP- absolutely- this was her test for Swara and she also hoped that her precious son's love would come through and it did so, which would have delighted her too 😃. Yes that initial panic I felt had to happen before she realised how she had to trust her heart which is one with her knight and she did. We are always on the same page as far as the self respect point goes so here too Swara would choose a life of heartbreak and sadness than an ignoble existence.

And now comes the confusing part. Why did AP make her write it all down? Writing it all down is a pretty modern day technique to relieve stress😆 so I dont know what AP is going to do with that letter...hmm dekhte hai😛😆

Annapurna has a very definite purpose in making Swara write all that- you may have guessed most on 31 but final revelation in 32 😊.

P.S.: Oh n I loved how Swara went in search of Pawan. She trusts him so much😳 Pawan❤️

I know the ❤️ is going to be 😭 after 31 but that still makes the ❤️ even more pronounced!

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Shru🤗

Like the title of chapter suggests ..Test ..Indeed it was test for swara's love and trust towards sasnkaar and she didn't fall prey to plan

I am just waiting to see how sanskaar would react when he reads letter from swara 😳

Are there any twists here???

I dont know who the traitor is and I dont want to guess it either but Janaki doesnt seem right to me..I may be wrong on that note and it may turn out to be someone unexpected ..waiting for the traitor to be unveiled

My love for Swara is growing leaps and bounds with every chapter, her convo with sujata, annapoorna and janaki at the end just left me with an aww feeling ..⭐️⭐️

Lovely update👏 👏.👏.looking forward for the next chapter

Love

Lucky

Hi Shruti.

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Sorry dude, I'm not writing a long post, but since, I'm too late, I'll unres now with whatever comment I've got! But I've loved all your chapters equally and I DM you as well, so I hope you wouldn't mind!😭

Coming to it, SwaSan getting separated...aww!! Swara was putting on such a brave face. Pawan stayed back...hmmm!! I BEG Shru, I Beg, don't kill this guy!! Or, you don't know the consequences!! That 'chhotu' sa scene, of Swara touching that necklace and Sanskaar, the Rudrakashtha, was sooo sweet!!

That stare of Sanskaar's to Ragini was quite, you know...amazing yeah,, but it like brought a menacing smirk on my face...better!!😃 And Ragini was instantly restless. Chor Ki Daadi main Tinka, ignoring the fact that Ragini doesn't have daadi.

Swara felt lonely without him!! Poor lovelorn princess, Shru I love your Knight and his Queen too much<3 Beyond words!! Pawan teasing Swara😃, I just love it when Swara teases him back with Uttara's name. And PaRa are my next fav couple after SwaSan, they are really cute!! Love them as well

This Devendra!! Uff...There can't be a man, more VILE, more DISGUSTING, more HORRIBLE and all swearing words aimed at him, than him. The way he treated Kavita...eeekkks!!! I loathe him more than anything else would be an understatement!! I actually feel bad for Kavita. Poor girl. Although shewas a bit tharki in flirting with Laksh and all other stuff, but still this treatment all over the years!! Jeezzz

Is Kaveri a mother? Like really man? She is one of the reasons na that sch torture was inflicted upon her sole daughter? This is what I could infer, temme if I'm wrong!! But I hate this lady too. And now Kavita is gonna snatch Sanskaar from Swara, seeing the pain she had to go through, I feel this attitude of hers s justified, but then Swara and Sanskaar love each other, so then separating them would be too wrong!!
Rest mysteries and climax, is what I'm badly waiting for badly!! So you better update 32 sooner than possible!
Love ya
Sakshi

ooppsie,swara is in denger...

Hi shruti u r a brillient writter👏

Hey Shruti,🤗

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Dear Shru,

This whole chapter was indeed a test - for all of us.

Nyna dearest 🤗

I guess there was some tests there for readers too and it seems many passed with flying colours like Swara 😆

Well, the start was on an expected note, Swara moping around for Sanskaar and refusing to be cheered despite the combined efforts (at times) of Pawan and Uttara. Then the first encounter - with Sujatha - she appeared to be acting on behalf of Annapurna - who addresses the ''Ragini issue' - which so far everyone has put on the backburner. Swara listens and states that while she will no longer trusts or loves her, she would not do anything to 'upset the applecart' provided Ragini stays within her limits.

The moping was def no surprise to anyone:). I like to think the Sujata convo with Swara was a little. I will try and make clear in 32 but as we have had the revelation in 31 I think I can break suspense a bit and say that I deliberately penned that scene like that but Sujata took the initiative herself re the SwaraGini convo, Annapurna merely overhead it and it made her think.

Thank you for not making Swara like the serial one who simply goes around forgiving people without a thought.👏

I like gentle and forgiving but not foolish and a woman has to be fierce about her man and family in my opinion. I have very easily forgiven people some grave ills against me but if they tried even a fraction against those I love, I would unleash hell 😊. That is how I see Swara.

But what caught my attention - Annapurna surely put up Sujata to talk to Swara and Sujata finds that Sanskaar is unreasonable with the guards for Swara (is it her own thought or a reflection of what Annapurna voiced?)

I explained a bit above- one of my red herrings I am afraid, and Sujata doesn't think Sanskaar is unreasonable about the guards per se but about how unforgiving he is about Ragini as she dared attack his Princess:) but this is unreasonable by Sujata's standards of course 😊

The letter from Kavita (accepting the same for the time being) found in Janaki's room - (the fact that Ragini is hovering around their chambers in their absence - another red herring of yours???). The seal already broken, presumably read by the 'palace traitor' before leaving it where it could reach Swara. But then the message - why do I get the feeling that the letter has been 'dictated' by someone else who planned this letter to reach Swara more than Sanskaar - Kavita would know about Sanskaar he is too honourable to keep a mistress (he gave up everything to marry her) why would he now take her as one? Even Sanskaar's letter was clear, there was no way he would ever take her as a mistress - He is clearly a 'one-woman' man.

You were very on the mark- the letter had been dictated and planted there and it was very much a trap for Swara- to make her rush headlong to the temple at Rudranagar but as that didn't work, the plotters made another plan which you saw the result of in 31 . Ragini was hovering but actually that letter wasn't really planted as such by her- she didn't need to- there is a far bigger villain than her whom I have revealed now! The Kavita written letter was very much a plot and she is in no doubt about Sanskaar's blunt rejection in that sense.

Then there was Janaki's reaction - she is worried alright, but she stresses her point that Swara should not go to the Rudranagar temple, which is not feasible in any case as there are guards to watch her. Is she indirectly hinting that if Swara has to go the temple she would have to give the guards a slip??

👏👏- I need say no more now huh? 😉

Finally the encounter with Annapurna - Swara breaks down and confides all about the letter. Annapurna's first reaction is to find out where that letter is and then she wants to know what Swara's reaction to the letter was. She was not expecting such a reiteration of trust and faith in Sanskaar, was she? And then the strange request of having Swara write down a letter to Sanskaar - about her discovery of Kavita's letter, her initial reaction, her subsequent conviction of faith in Sanskaar and her final decision of allowing Sanskaar to choose (this is the no brainer, she believes completely that Sanskaar loves only her and that any rescue of Kavita would be on compassionate grounds). Annapurna has Swara then leave this missive with such a massive potential for manipulation and misinterpretation with her and further also makes Swara promise that she would let no one as to this letter (my mind and heart are screaming - CONSPIRACY) 😡

I will explain in 32 what Annapurna intended with the letter so cannot disclose much more here. I mean we now have Janaki's face revealed but what if I for instance have plans still for AP? 😉 OR do I have a very good other reason for her actions? 😉 End of 32 will make very clear 😊

So Swara convinces Janaki too that she trusts Sanskaar implicitly and promises not to do anything. The last line - they continued to talk till interrupted by Sharmishta, so what does her entry portend?

I was reading the other posts on this thread and chanced on a post where doubts on Sharmishta were expressed, that got me thinking - what twisted warped mind would Sharmishta have to conspire against her own blood (the questions raised were quite pertinent) unless she feels more for Ragini? Even if she did, she could not so deviously scheme against Swara - turning a blind eye towards Ragini's deeds would be sufficient.😕😕

Swara's trust was unbreakable much to Janaki's chagrin so other means were employed. I know there was a theory about Sharmistha by Shivani, she had it for a long time. I leave you to decide whether I would play both mothers as false to my Swara 😉

This was clearly Swara's chapter and I hope she continues to be the firm woman determined not to forgive Ragini and has implicit faith in Sanskaar.

Yes, it was rather a Swara dominated chapter with some of it to Annapurna and Janaki in different ways too. I don't think you will find me changing the core of my Swara 😃

love,

Nyna