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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


I told you indirectly that you might be way off with Sharmistha but Ioved that you thought her when no one else did- that makes the sort of twist I like but Janaki has the spirit to stab as she did - she had the real motive and from her perspective it would make sense to hate those she sees as having usurped her rights. More on her real reasonings will unfold



Okay agreed but you won't kill Pawan, right???
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Okay agreed but you won't kill Pawan, right???


Errr- no comments . I have not hesitated in taking harsh decisions in this story but read on and soon all will be clear hopefully 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Wish I didn't have to do it but the tale was leading up to this from various chapters . Sometimes a true hero can only be truly appreciated when you see what they do at a time like this . Let us see what you think when it ends 😊


I'm having a heavy heart right now. After 17 this is the one that is painful and a part which I'll only brush through while reading. I so want Sanskar to rip everyone apart. Janki never accepted swara or Shomi. All these years, just pretending to care for them... We reached the climax and all I see now are villains. God knows how many more are to come to light.
No wonder you were on tender hooks. Even Janki's back stabbing didn't effect me as much as Pawan.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sree8410


I'm having a heavy heart right now. After 17 this is the one that is painful and a part which I'll only brush through while reading. I so want Sanskar to rip everyone apart. Janki never accepted swara or Shomi. All these years, just pretending to care for them... We reached the climax and all I see now are villains. God knows how many more are to come to light.
No wonder you were on tender hooks. Even Janki's back stabbing didn't effect me as much as Pawan.


Janaki was always meant to be the hidden villain- she made sense to me as a woman who compromised out of necessity and there is more that will explain her motives even further. This is a painful chapter yes, and of course the next one isn't pleasant either as Devendra has Swara. But try and trust the story if you can- I have taken us this far . Endings are not about happy or sad, to me they are about being remembered 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Errr- no comments . I have not hesitated in taking harsh decisions in this story but read on and soon all will be clear hopefully 😕



Okay I dig angst but please do give him a hero's farewell if he indeed is to bid us adieu!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Janaki was always meant to be the hidden villain- she made sense to me as a woman who compromised out of necessity and there is more that will explain her motives even further. This is a painful chapter yes, and of course the next one isn't pleasant either as Devendra has Swara. But try and trust the story if you can- I have taken us this far . Endings are not about happy or sad, to me they are about being remembered 😊


I do trust you!!

And yes Devendra has Swara and that is not good either. But it will be fine soon. I have my fingers crossed and a complete faith in you that you will not torture more. My head is literally spinning. I'm going to go and read some happy moments from before.
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Posted: 9 years ago
What ?? Pawan is dead🤢 ..no no no shru..dont kill him please ..😭😭😭 make him alive na atleast by end of DK ..😕😭😭 keep him in coma, please and I knew it , i knew it was janaki , I expressed my doubts in my comment for chapter 30 but yeah my guess was right ..that means she always despised sharmistha and swara ..she never accepted them ..all this while shae has been acting to be mahaan😡😕

And I hate that creepo devendra .. I hate him ..I knew his death is going to be painful when sasnkars unleashes his fury on him..I am so waiting to read about his death.😡😡😡

The convo b/w sasnkaar and laksh was nothing less than eventful and sounded like much needed one with truths being unfold layer by layer ..

Such a power packed chapter shru👏 👏👏but with a painful part😭😭..only if pawan as alive but I understand his death might be much needed to add fuel to the further chapters but kya kare I love pawan .😭. say I am wrong 😕 He is not going to die without revealing the secrets to sanskaar, right??

I know it might have been so painful for you to put pawan through this , but you penned down the way he fought so brilliantly that it leaves readers with more pride for him than pain

and update Awesome like always 👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
Res baby...😭
Unres

Shruuu sweetuuu...😊

Sorry for extremely late unres...uthak bathak for that...😭
Busy busy ...

Coming to chapter 31...it was heart wrenching...after swara assault chapter..this was by far much painful chapter...😭

Starting with lakshya n sansku confrontation...finally both brothers had an heartfelt talk..n cleared soo many misunderstanding...sansku mind has grown a seed of doubt regarding kavita intentions...felt happy for them...😊

Swara the naive one...how easily she is manipulated...she trusted the women ...she considered her mother but she backstabbed her n handed her over to creep n cheap Devendra...hate him n her..whatever reason for her hatred ..how can she do that to other women...😭

Pawan...he was diverted...from his path but he annalyze quickly of foul play n headed back to mahesh mahel..only to witness a death of helper...concerned pawan confronted ragini n she blurted half truth..but pawan did not realise the trap n went to save swara n queen janki...for his utter disbelief he was shocked to see Devendra..n tried to save swara but was backstabbed by janki..n brutally injured..i cried a lot for him..never wanted anything happen to him...sushena death was soo painfull for me..ii could not bear pawan death..but now know he ia alive...phewww😭

Loved uttara n pawan brief moments...😳

Sorry again ..for short review...😭

Simply loved it..was painful chapter but still...😭

Waiting for more

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thrilling update to say the least. Amazing how this story progresses. I always had a reservation about Janaki...seemed too good to be true. Pawan...leaving aside the realistic outcome of those injuries...I do hope he comes out of this alive and eventually well. Not for a happy ending but just so because not every other good, brave person should die in this story. However, it is your story and you will do it justice as you have done so far. As always, looking forward to reading the next one.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Shru
Oh so much in this update. First of all i would like to mention this here my inner voice never trusted Jaanki n i always tried to find out any clue where i could say yes she is a villain but hats off to u by writing in such a way that it could not be guessed but in my heart i always found Jaanki a villain n now my instincts proved right but it was so heart breaking to see her like this. Swara loved n trusted her so much n she is such a cruel n selfish lady. I would like to say something if she did not like Sharmishtha she should have stepped back if his husband did not love her but doing such henious crime is unacceptable even if she felt cheated. Everyone has right to move on in life even if Shekhar wanted to with Sharmishtha n Jaanki should have self respect for herself n move on in her life rather than accepting them n doing henious things with them later on. I just cant tolerate double face people. Sorry for writing so much n coming to update i am horrified and trembling just by thinking poor swara alone with that devil Devender n i just wishing for some miracle to take place. Right now even i want to be a part of DK n just go there to save her from that devil and kill that bitch Jaanki with my own hands. Not to forget how Pawan fought with so many people despite of getting wounded. Poor soul still could not save his bhabhi n i m hoping he will be ok not dead as i want his love story with Uttara to blossam. Plz continue soon as i will be worried like hell about swara n i want to request you though you leave Ragini or not its upto you but i want Jaanki be given death sentence plzzz
ohhh still shocked n horrified
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regards - Kawal

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