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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Shru ๐Ÿค—

Anna dearest ๐Ÿค—

What a wonderful Chapter 30! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ You write Swara SO beautifully! This particular situations arose in the show - and both Sanskaar and Swara were a disappointment, Swara ofcourse more so. But the feisty Swara here - who is sure that Sanskaar loves her only even if he once loved Kavita is

Thank you so much Anna ๐Ÿ˜ณ. I take what you say as a huge compliment and you know why ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜Š. As you know, I DETESTED that part of the show- it sort of ruined things for me to a large extent and even with Sanskaar marked a very poor phase for me. I deliberately wanted to deal with the Kavita issue in DK for that reason with a very different treatment given to it, the key thing being Sanskaar's unhesitating and firm choice in choosing only Swara, but not being callous to Kavita. And yes, I wanted an equally trusting and firm Swara- she will not be making stupid sacrifices and sending her man to another woman. If he chooses another she will leave with dignity but choose he must.

I loved reading a Swara centric chapter - which I hate in the show ๐Ÿ˜†

Now this I know is seriously major ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ- thank you!

Starting from the beginning, I loved how Sujata and Annapurna's conversation flowed. Though it is very obvious that Sujata was doing Annapurna's job and AP was taken aback by what Swara had said about Ragini. I dont want to judge AP too soon because she is one of my favorite characters till now. But when it comes to choosing between Laksh and Sanskaar - Ragini and Swara ; I feel that AP might choose her own blood.

Sujata did what she felt she had to, to ensure peace in their already battered house. AP was taken aback in that she is surprised at Swara's spirit- I will explain more in 32 ๐Ÿ˜‰. I very deliberately crafted this part of the chapter the way I did and will be able to more freely talk after 32! ๐Ÿ˜Š

I loved that Swara is not forgiving of Ragini as easily. You already are aware how I feel about Ragini's failed redemption and blame Swara and AP for it in the show - so I was really happy to see that Swara took a stand here for herself and for Sanskaar. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Yes we have discussed and are in total agreement about the so called redemption on the show which made a mockery of the whole thing. I cannot have my Swara silly enough to overlook things to the point of allowing Ragini to walk over not just her but her knight and their families ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.

I dont know if I am right or wrong - but the letter as from Kavita - does not seem to be written by Kavita or if it is - it is definitely on the orders of someone from the Maheshwari family. Someone wanted to create a misunderstanding between Swara and Sanskaar because Sanskaar has already told Kavita that he loves Swara and even though he will save Kavita - his heart belongs to her. Kavita is also aware that Sanskaar is not the type to keep a mistress on the side and is a one - woman man. So this letter by Kavita is only to create a misunderstanding. It could be Kavita or it could be someone forcing Kavita to do it? But then Kavita hates Swara and is selfish so it could be her ๐Ÿ˜† So many questions! ๐Ÿ˜†

You were very right about the letter- Kavita did write it but it was a calculated ploy not really masterminded by her- she isn't that way sophisticated to plot with finesse. Kavita was left in no doubt that Sanskaar firmly choose another and the whole letter was to destroy Swara's confidence and force her to the Temple at Rudranagar where a trap was laid and she avoided that one.

I loved Swara's initial reaction to the letter. She did not judge Sanskaar but she judged the intention behind the letter being sent to Janaki and not Sanskaar directly. Kudos to Swara here ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ The confidence she showed in Sanskaar's love and the belief that she has on her is so beautifully penned down when she confesses her feelings to Annapurna. Really, that confidence of love is rare and I am impressed.

I so see Swara as a gentle and pure soul, genuinely good and a superlative person but still human and very much a self respecting and intelligent girl. It's not that she'd never do silly things as most people do but she won't be stupid and in the case of her love and trust on Sanskaar- there she will never err as it is as true and as powerful as his. That to me is what defines soul mates ๐Ÿ˜ณ. To me, trust is so important, you can claim as much love as you like but if you cannot trust, it is all rather meaningless.

I really dont know what to make of AP at the moment. Swara wrote her feelings about Sanskaar on the parchment about trusting him to love her while a part of him loved Kavita. I too want to know what AP wants to do with the letter because she clearly did not want Swara to take the letter and mentioned about a misunderstanding. I have a couple of situations in my mind on how this could play out - from one author to another - but I am sure you will surprise us ๐Ÿ˜‰

I hope I will surprise and after 32 you will know why Annapurna did what she did with the letter and how that played out. Yes there were so many options with the letter and I hope the one I chose will not disappoint ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Absolutely loved it Shru! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Thanks again Anna- this means a lot to me! Love ya!

Love
Anna


Replied in blue above dearest Anna xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie

Hey Shruti,๐Ÿค—


How are you dear?๐Ÿ˜Š

Chap 30: I'm lack of words at the moment. The inner turmoil of Swara has been handled very nicely by both the mothers.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Queen Annapurna is one woman I love the most in your FF. She can handle every matter so nice and clean where others fret over small things.๐Ÿ‘ Writing out your inner turmoil will actually lighten your heart. I'm telling this from my experience,you see..๐Ÿ˜‰ Swara's answers did surprise the ladies a lot..๐Ÿ˜ƒ They have realised that she is not the same Swara whom they met earlier.. She has become so matured now.. Of course when you face situations far worse than your wildest dreams, you do mature a lot. ๐Ÿ˜Š

I am totally out of words now.๐Ÿค” As we are reaching our destination i.e., end of FF now, I need to brace myself for all the revelations and secrets.๐Ÿ˜Ž So I will get prepared for that. Tata.๐Ÿ˜Š

See you in the next episode.๐Ÿ˜ƒ Till then stay blessed and be happy.๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks,
Geetha.


My dear Geetha ๐Ÿค—

I am rather late with this reply- sorry! But it did make me happy as ever to read your take:). I am glad you love my portrait of Annapurna - I myself have a very special place for her. I too am used to writing things out (would you believe it ๐Ÿ˜‰) but here she had more reason than therapy being the strategist that she is- you will see in 32 where I will fully explain the letter away ๐Ÿ˜ƒ. This was a lot of course about Swara and how her trust in her love won through- the bond she has is stronger than created misunderstandings and she could have easily stumbled there but she held firm ๐Ÿ˜Š. As you will have seen in 31 there are revelations aplenty and a lot of shocks too but this is the story I set out to tell and I am trying to stay true to it ๐Ÿ˜ณ.

Thanks for your love and support!

Love and wishes,

Shruti xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Res๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Unres๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Super update Shru!!๐Ÿค— The angst, heartbreak, confusion, denial, worry, fear.. Mind numbing fear at that.. Wow!! How aptly worded๐Ÿ‘ Even all through that i knew Swara would come around, somewhere it will hit her how much she trusts Sanskar and that he deserves it.. You wouldn't create mindless misunderstandings, especially after building a pair's trust n love in such a way.. You know the part which i liked the best? Swara trusts Sanskar to do the right thing, she knows he loves only her but if he were to choose kavita, which he won't, she'll stand by it, and without compromising on her self respect.. Superb stand!!! So poignant!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Something feels off about the whole drama, though i can't really put my finger on it.. I'll just trust you and wait for it๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Much love,
Akshata๐Ÿ˜Š


Dearest Akshata ๐Ÿค—

Thank you so much sweetheart! I sometimes wonder when I read such wonderful and varied feelings suggested to be inspired by something I have written ๐Ÿ˜ณ and it is a true compliment to a writer when anyone says this as you can imagine! I am glad you knew I would show a steadfast Swara and avoid the cliched misunderstanding from the letter route that I think would be the usual expected way here. And no, when I had a MU between them- it made sense to me as they were both not aware of the love the other had and that was more to do with their own fears and not being arrogant enough to think the other loved them. But I personally don't like mindless misunderstandings. If a woman thinks something about the man she madly loves, she at least needs to ask him and here Swara knows Sanskaar is true as you say ๐Ÿ˜ƒ. The self respect thing is a pet peeve of mine- be that for Swara or Annapurna, I cannot feel right to not show that. I am so glad you like that. You were 100% right that something BIG was off and after 31 you of course know what that is .

Loads of love,

Shru xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dilwali

Hi Shru
brilliant update as always you do nd ya we can see how its moving towards end but with lot of suspense n drama which you are creating beautifully. I loved the way Annapurna calmed down Swara n specially the way of writing she chose though i think there is some motive behind that writing but in real as well writing calms you n i liked you added this thing in story.
What Kavita has written in letter was disgusting n she proved she never deserve to be with her love which she calls love but in reality its just love for fame n money.
Waiting with lots of curiosity for coming updates.
lots of love
Kawal


Kawal dear ๐Ÿค—

Thank you so much and it pleased me so much that you liked this so much! Also glad and relieved you think the drama and suspense is being maintained- that is my biggest concern and my endless attempts get directed to that! You are totally spot on ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘- the calming down was a by-product but Annapurna had a very definite aim in making Swara pen that letter- after 32 you will see what it was ๐Ÿ˜ƒ. I always find writing very therapeutic and it helps me analyse things as nothing else does- perhaps the combination of being a lawyer and writer makes it even more profound! Kavita is a sad and wretched soul- there is rot there but let us see what happens there by the end. I hope I will meet your expectations in the coming chapters and right to the conclusion ๐Ÿ˜ณ.

Lots of love to you,

Shru xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Res darling

Unres

Shruu love...๐Ÿ˜Š

Taliaaa! ๐Ÿค— How are you?!

Firstly 100 uthak bhaitak ๐Ÿ˜ญ for being sooo late...sooo busy week..took soo long to reply to many awesome updates...

No no please, we don't allow sorries and all so let's not- am so grateful you commented despite being so busy! Mmmwah for that.

Coming to chapter 29.it was quite captivating...after shocking climax of chapter 28..with kavita return...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜•

I like to fling you all all over the place ๐Ÿ˜†

It started with all men went to baadigunj...but sansku very calculatively left pawan...to ensure the safety of all womens in mahesh mahal...very thought full...
Swasan seperation scene was quite moving...both were deeply in pain..but held themselves strong so not to weakened other...it was beautifully described...swara is deeply n irevocably in love...she became sad after sansku departure..loved how everyone was trying to lift her mood..๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰

Yes Sanskaar left Pawan behind as he trusts him as much as himself and especially when it comes to Swara, he won't leave anyone else there unless it's himself. Yes they were both hurting and knowing more pain will come but they are Rajputs after all so they accept this with grace and dignity and courage too and as you say, they stay strong for each other ๐Ÿ˜ณ. Glad you liked the pining sequences ๐Ÿ˜Š

Coming to part 2..i was literally hoping that kavita return would be foulplay...๐Ÿ˜ฒbut that witch is alive๐Ÿ˜ก...ahhh
Kavita whole background from past till present was intriging...that women was actually a gold digger...she was after all maheswari boys...all planning..plotting..scheming she did to seduce adharsh..lskshya n finally sansku...but inall this plotting she fell for sansku..(NO NEED TO MENTION WHY... OUR BOY IS A GENTLEMEN)...felt pity for her condition too.but she in a way was involve with her mother scheming..n was backstabbed...too...hoping she gets good closure too in life...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜•

No, unfortunately Kavita is very much alive but I do have a story in mind and later chapters will have revealed some of my aim at least? Kavita doesn't know how to be anything else but her "love" for Sanskaar is the closest someone like her would feel a good emotion. She did fall for him but she is too deficient to be true to that love. It is a conundrum- she did grave wrong but does anyone deserve what she got with Devendra? I think not and yet her poor choices contributed to that too- I like greys far more than black or white in stories ๐Ÿ˜Š

Waiting for next part...as im late already read chapter 30...๐Ÿ˜ญ will comment soon...

Don't worry honey- I am happy to read whenever you can comment xoxo

Love
Talia๐Ÿ˜Š


Talia sweetheart- replied in blue above.

Much love,

Shru xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you Sneha ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow didu...

It's awesome and mind blowing update...
Just loved it...
Each paet of this update were full of emotions...
Do continue soon
Thanks for the pm...
Sorry for short comment


Thanks a lot Megha dear and don't worry about the length, glad you liked the chapter:).

Love,
Shruti x
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


My dear Geetha ๐Ÿค—

I am rather late with this reply- sorry! But it did make me happy as ever to read your take:). I am glad you love my portrait of Annapurna - I myself have a very special place for her. I too am used to writing things out (would you believe it ๐Ÿ˜‰) but here she had more reason than therapy being the strategist that she is- you will see in 32 where I will fully explain the letter away ๐Ÿ˜ƒ. This was a lot of course about Swara and how her trust in her love won through- the bond she has is stronger than created misunderstandings and she could have easily stumbled there but she held firm ๐Ÿ˜Š. As you will have seen in 31 there are revelations aplenty and a lot of shocks too but this is the story I set out to tell and I am trying to stay true to it ๐Ÿ˜ณ.

Thanks for your love and support!

Love and wishes,

Shruti xoxo

Hey Shruti,

Don't worry about the late reply. I can totally understand your busy schedule. ๐Ÿ˜Š You are used to write things out. I believe you yaar.. Yes, I got plenty of shocks in chapter 31.
Take care.

Thanks,
Geetha
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Posted: 9 years ago
Di please don't let pawan die...plzz...plzz...never let him die...please save him some how please can't see him dead and one janaki how is it possible... Didn't expect this at any cost..omg...and sankaar and lucky aww.. Resolved their issues awesome...continue soon..but PLEASE DONT LET HIM DIE PLEASE CONDISDER OUR WISH DI.. Please
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb.. ๐Ÿ‘
Ha.. Even i request from you.. Don' t let pawan die. He is a brave loyal soldier, good friend & good lover.. So don't let him die..
Well done update the nxt one soon.
Edited by Kaveetha - 9 years ago

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