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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Wow this part is so good swasan 😃 they are really just perfect , kavita😲 what how😲 I am sensing a very big trouble or some big danger

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

shru🤗

I have mixed emotions towards 28 ..

I never liked kavita infact I hate all of them who come between swasan but some demons from past keep haunting but I think this is much needed to give closure to this entire kav kar scenario ..Better now than later

And how dare she keep a condition that he should leave swara .. seriously ..whoever is behind drama has definitely underestimated sasnkaars love for swara ..I am confident about sanskaar But I am worried about implications of this part on swara 😕

Loved the moments between swara and sanskaar and I totally adore pawan, his protective stance towards swara and the teasing in initial part 😳

Sujju finally accepted swara ..good one wicket down from ex party😆

and Is ragini behind all this ..I dont know yaar I feel there's much more to be revealed and someone else is also part of this foul play

after a heavenly 27, I think we needed this part to gear up for forthcoming journey in DK ..brilliant like always👏👏👏

love

lucky

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Oh such a beautiful morning!! Thanks Shruti🤗 Such a lovely start to my day with DK.. Pawan toh pawan, Uttara bhi kuch kam nahi hai😆 Cute teasing session that was😉 How can Sanskar be so unabashed at that??😲😆 Holding her hand throughout😳 Swara's punches keep getting better🤣 But Sansku still hasn't realised those other sparks, he's so lost in his personal sun
Next we have Sujju!! Just like on the show, crass but adorbs😛
SwaSan's almost stolen meetings😃😃 The royal mothers are sort of in on the romance ha😛
Best part- SwanSan's secret meeting at night.. Uff!! Sooo cute!! Swara is annoyed, hurt, has missed him crazily all day, and is somewhat grumpy coz of hunger.. Uspe Sanskar ka manana..☺️ The exchange of rudraksh n the ring was so very soulful!! A piece of heaven before the oncoming battle...😳😳
Itna sab kuch accha ja raha hai, you had to put in a twist na??😆 But return of kavita??😕😕 I have this strong sense of foreboding about both letters!! Especially coz of the small bit in the middle of some sinister jealous person😉 But as usual I'm very eager to know how everything plays out😃😃
Super swasanlicious chapter, thank you Shru!!!🤗
Love,
Akshata😊

Akshata sweetheart 🤗

I so look forward to your take on my chapters 😳. Thank you so much as ever for this lovely set of comments! So glad you liked it! I wanted some cuteness from all 4 of those 😃 Sanskaar is totally besharam especially now and I so like that 😳. Swara is certainly warming up huh? Sanskaar whenever he realises is in for some serious shocks 😈😆

Sujju is sujju as you say! Not really "evil" or even "bad" just rather shallow and silly. But she could be an asset to SwaSan I feel if she wanted to.

The mothers are turning a blind eye when needed yes 😆. As if they can stop Sanskaar anyway so why fight it I guess 😉. I am glad you liked that SwaSan part when he sneaks into her room to reconcile her anger and annoyance 😳. Those exchanges were the little calm before the storm yes in a way.

Aha 😆- you know me too well by now huh? Total relaxation mujse hazam nahi hota and so yes the intrigue and suspense elements had to roll in. I know no one particularly wants Kavita and trust me I would like SwaSan in their bubble too but I have to deal with Sanskaar's past if they are to move forward and she was part of that so her or whoever is claiming to be her- they need to be shown too . Ah you sense hints of danger and foreboding in those letters? 😉 Let's see what I have in store for you all. I think most have a guess as to that sinister person which isn't surprising. I am so pleased you still want to read what happens and weren't put off that all these new twists and mysteries are now being brought out.

No, thank you for being so supportive of DK and me 😳

Lots of love,

Shru xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Chap28-
lovely updt.
Aww!uttara teasing.&sujata's straight words like it.
Swasan part was so beautiful.
Ur writing actualy again remind me serial's kc,gangor & mauli dhaga part.
I love it hw swasan stayd with each othr,thr love & trust 4 each othr.
Yes!sanskar z ri8.thy already weded by thr heart.love tht part.
As usual ragini hs 2 do smthng?& nw kavita z bk!!was ragini thnkng 2 tk help 4m kavita?ugh!
Waiting 2 knw our sanskar's rl 2 kavita.
Thnks 4 pm.updt soon.

Hey Sonu 🤗

Thank you! So glad you liked the chapter and the teasing in particular as well as Sujata's clarification. SwaSan are always a treat huh? Yes there were elements of those times from the show I guess- I loved some parts of those and hopefully the bits in the show that irritated me I managed to cut out 😃. That is SwaSan for me- pure love and trust. Ragini is always in the midst of plots and yes there is a Kavita mystery here which needs to be cleared . Whether Ragini is working with Kavita or whether Kavita is an innocent victims too the later chapters will tell. You saw Sanskaar's reply no in the last past? 😕

Love,

Shruti x

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: prerulalli
Chapter 28

First of all thanku for the PM Shru😊😊

Hey Prerana 🤗

Thank you for reading and leaving me such nice comments.

Coming to the chapter, it was worth waiting😊😊

Glad you thought so, I was nervous of this after 27!

The way u dealt with the embarrasment that swara and sanskaar faced while facing pawan and uttara was superb😆
Uttara definitely loves swara ...that is so sweet of her😃😃

I just found much humour in that and wanted to bring it out. I love Uttara- she is rather similar to the "old" Swara and a really good person I feel. Nice for Swara to have a real friend 😃

Swara and sanskaar also leaving no stone unturned to tease uttara and pawan😆

Well Sanksaar is at the moment tied up in threatening and oblivious to the teasing material he has, not that he will be so pleased I guess to think of his sister and his friend but Swara certainly isn't missing her chances 😆

Sujata and swara's convo----Or simply sujata's convo with her
Sooo happy that she finally acepted Swara as her DIL😊😊😊
That convo was indeed very necessary👏👏👏

I thought so too that it needed to clear whether Sujata is going to be a thorn in Swara's side. So she said she won't. It doesn't mean she won't be a pain but not an evil one at least 😆

Bechaare love doves wanted to spend some together and the situations are not helping them------Poor souls😕

Swara's fast and she retiring in her room without having food--being the stubborn she😆

Sanskaar entering her chamber through ladder-----(Let it be 1816 or 2016 ,, Lovers can never meet khullam khulla 😆)
He explaining the reasons for his absence and manofying her 😆😆😆

I loved the line about loves having to sneak around irrespective of era 😆. And yes those two are so desperate to be together, that wait until they see each other again seems so long to them already Swara is stubborn and Sanskaar had previous experience of that so was rather prepared huh?!

It was indeed very difficult for them to part away from each other😕
The special gifts they gave to each other was soo sweet
For sanskaar , they are already married😳

Yes, see in their hearts they are already married to each other which is why the next part was even more errmmm as now Sanskaar is being thrown that dilemma and whilst she doesn't know it, so is Swara

Don't know who has written that parchment ( I just hope its not ragini, If yes how can a sister fall soo loww😡...She got what she wanted to have ...atleast she shud leave her in peace🤬)

Ragini has shown before too how low she can be- she had her own sister accosted by a guard, she wanted her dead. So how much further she can go remains to be seen.

Sanskaar receiving the same parchment saying cavity is alive(sorry not using her name as i clearly loath that lady in the serial...😡)
She wants to come to him ...Like seriously ...he shud sacrifice swara for that 😡...selfish lady!!!!!!!!!!)

Oh you have no clue how much the Kro/ Cavity track in the show spoilt the whole of SR for me, I have not felt the same for it since then. It was the phase when I thought so much went downhill. I wanted to deal with Kavita here but hopefully try something that might not be totally run of the mill and what we saw on the show so let's see.

Thank god sanskaar has taken a wise decision to save her but he cannot give swara's place to her as it is not some deal👏

That was my intention- even if he is torn and concerned and of course he will feel residual loyalty/ concern for Kavita, Sanskaar he will not treat Swara as disposable.

Don't know what is in store for us in the coming chapters😕
Please no seperation or MU plzz plzzz pretty plzzz

I have done the planning for 29 so will start writing from tomorrow, it won't be too many days.

Update soon
Love,
Prerana😊😊

Dearest Prerana

Replied in blue.

With many thanks for the love!

Shru xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
Wow didu...
It's awesome and mind blowing update...
Just loved it...
You always made me surprised by your writing skills...
You are just wonderful..
Loved each and every part of the update...
Loved swasan moments...
Swara ka roothna and sanskar ka manana...
Hehe suju ma too good...
Arghh ragini and her jealousy..
Omg yeh kya twist??
Kavita vapas aa gaye??
How??
Abh kya hoga mere swasan ka??
Hope serial ki tarah vo villain na bne
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Hey Megha dear 🤗

Thank you so much for the lovely words! I am so pleased you liked it so much. And for the high praise- I am truly grateful and overwhelmed 😳. I felt that some sulking and making up was needed there especially if the after effects of it could be so delightful for them both before they had to part . Ragini is a unique case- a true specimen! Kavita- more on that in next chapter. It's her or someone who claims to be her- let us see. SwaSan- they have some challenges coming up as I bring this to a close and I sincerely hope I can keep everyone at the edge of their seats!

Loads of love,

Shru xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: Saba1982
#28: And you hold us spellbound.
I love the way, you get our brains into overdrive at the end of each chapter - thinking about which way the story will go now and then manage to surprise us in the next.
You really write well and I can not wait for the next update! And that for me is the hard part.

Hey Saba 🤗

To say I held you spellbound is such a nice thing to say- a huge thanks for that and for the appreciation for DK and this chapter! 😳 I also love how you say you feel I manage to rile the brain up after each chapter- that is exactly what I wanted with DK- lots of unexpected twists and surprises that don't make the story predictable! Thank you for liking my efforts and I will try and deliver the next part (it will be long again!) very soon!

Lots of love,

Shruti x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86
res.par cavity aakhir kyu? pata nahin kitna dard deti hai.unres jab main pawan aur uttara ki mazak pad rahi thi na tab mein apni chachi ke saath train maon thi aur has rahi thi .pata nahim ab kya hoga.khair chodiye para ka chidana world class.sujju ne surprise kiya.yeh cavity shayad ragz ki karni hai.aur yeh baat achi lagi pawan aur sanky ke dosti main ki itna class diff hone ke bavjjood who ek dusre ko samajh sakte hai.chidha sakte hai aur ek dusre ko galat decision lene se rok sakte hai.aur yeh cavity ke liye jaldi root canal process kijite .dukhega par phir uska naamo nishaan mit jayega.

Dear Niti 🤗

Cavity/ Kro/Kavita- call her what you will 😆. The reason for her is I have to deal with her. Bro track in the show put me off SR a lot and I so wanted to deal with that storyline in my way so this was my attempt. My main focus is on how Sanskaar reacts to Kavita or the person claiming to be her rather than just her and anything she would do or not do.

I am giggling at you on the train laughing at PaRa's teasing 😆. Ragini does have a role of course in many things so let's see what I reveal there. I so wanted to show that true friendship between Pawan and Sanskaar and yes it crosses boundaries of class and status. Pawan doesn't want Sanskaar to make mistake but Sanskaar wasn't intending to anyway 😃.

And your comment about root canal 😆- thank you!!! I so felt that you understood the aim that something has to be dealt with to put it to rest.

Catch you after 29 which I hope you will find interesting!

Love,

Shruti xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: Sanya17
Wow this part is so good swasan 😃 they are really just perfect , kavita😲 what how😲 I am sensing a very big trouble or some big danger

Thank you so much Sanya! I am so pleased you liked this part! Aha- Kavita is only part of the trouble you sense so keep your seatbelt fastened and hang on- we have a bumpy ride coming but I hope it will still be exciting!

Love,

Shruti x

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Posted: 9 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: lucky.m
shru🤗
I have mixed emotions towards 28 ..

I never liked kavita infact I hate all of them who come between swasan but some demons from past keep haunting but I think this is much needed to give closure to this entire kav kar scenario ..Better now than later

And how dare she keep a condition that he should leave swara .. seriously ..whoever is behind drama has definitely underestimated sasnkaars love for swara ..I am confident about sanskaar But I am worried about implications of this part on swara 😕

Loved the moments between swara and sanskaar and I totally adore pawan, his protective stance towards swara and the teasing in initial part 😳

Sujju finally accepted swara ..good one wicket down from ex party😆

and Is ragini behind all this ..I dont know yaar I feel there's much more to be revealed and someone else is also part of this foul play

after a heavenly 27, I think we needed this part to gear up for forthcoming journey in DK ..brilliant like always👏👏👏

love
lucky

Lucky dearest 🤗

Mixed emotions is good- it was meant to inspire that especially with what I put in Part 3 . If only you knew how much I detest Kavita from the show and that whole track 😆. You are absolutely spot on and I felt so so good reading how you said this episode from Sanskaar's past needs closure one way or the other- that was exactly my intention 😃. She did keep the condition and another way to look at it without knowing YET about her real intentions is that she was madly in love with him and he promised to marry her so she's now reclaiming her place- totally not justified when you see what SwaSan now have but she doesn't know that OR she could be a real witch like in the show- you will see 😉

Glad you liked the little "interlude" SwaSan managed to have and Pawan was so robust in his defence of Swara and their relation no? ❤️

Wicket down 😆- yes Sujata doesn't want to be an evil plotting saas but as we know in DK we won't know anything for sure until expressly revealed 😊

Ah, you sense a deeper plot than Ragini? I dare say you may be right- there was after all a wider plot against Sanskaar those years ago

Thanks again for understanding and appreciating the need for a chapter like this after 27 😳

Loads of love to you,

Shru xoxo