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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Shru,
Finally unres for Chapter 28 on page 27!

love,
Nyna
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Sakshi, Talia, Nyna- 🤗
Thank you for your lovely replies!! I will respond as soon as am able to! Am working on something at the moment (not 29 unfortunately ) but reading these will keep me going so much love and humble gratefulness in the meantime 😳
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Sakshi, Talia, Nyna- 🤗

Thank you for your lovely replies!! I will respond as soon as am able to! Am working on something at the moment (not 29 unfortunately ) but reading these will keep me going so much love and humble gratefulness in the meantime 😳


Sure sweetheart!
Will try to unres tmrw! I got 2 back-to back exams hence busy!
Still will try
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sree and Priyu- love your comments guys! I'm mired in mad meetings all day today so it's going to be non stop but I'll go in charged having read your wonderful takes on the chapters in question! Sorry about not being able to respond to comments as quick as I would like but I'll ofcourse do so as soon as I can!

Tonnes of love xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
Short apology for not yet unres on chapter 28. Will get to it on the weekend dear, my schedule is packed ,so do bear with me in the mean time

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Originally posted by: NitaReid

Short apology for not yet unres on chapter 28. Will get to it on the weekend dear, my schedule is packed ,so do bear with me in the mean time

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Nita


Nita dear!

You'll kill me with embarrassment 😳 - I still haven't commented on your last update either as am struggling for time in a bad way! Please let's cancel the apologies out and whenever is fine and even if you don't comment that too is ok as I know you tell me your whether you liked a chapter or not over PM:) Loads of love and take care!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved all the updates, read it in a go :) plzz update soon this kavita track is driving me nits now dont know how swara will react to this she seems to believe that sanskaar had loved kavita too much so i think this will affect their relation tobsome extent but i hope not too much
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Friends
I have just posted Chapter 29. I know I usually try to post more than one update a week but at the moment, time is in seriously short supply. Also the chapters now are very difficult and need careful planning to ensure the plot is crisp enough. I am working on 30 and hope it can be up before end of Sunday but I do have an important work presentation which I have not even started preparing for due to working on 29 all day 😆 so please do bear with me in case it has to follow in the week. I hope you will all see the need and importance of 29 😉. It isn't as short as you may think- over 12 pages still in word so the next instalment had to be split to a new Chapter 😊.

Please please keep your comments coming, it often is the only realistic spur to keep going especially in difficult times! I am not far from completion and am working furiously! I will also reply to pending replies on previous chapters asap- just didn't want to delay getting this to you all.

Love,

Shru x
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res for chapter 29

With a migraine so bad that I can barely sleep or stay awake I was refreshing this page to see when you'll update. Shruti, what have you done to me???? This obsession with DK is not good help me contain this madness you have unleashed in me.

Sree

Unres

Shruti 🤗

Since we have already discussed this on PM I'm just unresing this with most of them copied from my PM.

So to begin with as expected Swara and Sanskar doesn't get much alone time before he leaves for the battle at Baadigunj. To see them separate even for a while - short while- is heart breaking and that too in this situation. But they never needed words to express their feeling for one another earlier so why would they need them now? Loved the silent communication between the two were both touched the talisman as a gesture to let the other know that they will be together soon and that they will be fine.

Pawan is not going😲. I know this last minute change of plans has come as a result of the message from that (Oh I hate her so much that I don't want to take her name) Kavita. But somewhere I feel he is asked to stay for protecting Swara as well. Sanskar couldn't risk her safety and with Ragini lurking around he might have put his best man on guard for his wife till he comes back and take over. I mean I get it that his actions show how much he is trying to figure out whether the person who wrote the letter was Kavita or an imposter and he might be waiting for the reply to Sanskar's reply too. But I like to believe that its for Swara's protection along with this kavita mess.

Now coming to Kavita, I hate her. No matter how you portray her I hate her. I do sympathise with her or as close as that for all the torture she had to endure in these 5 years, but that is what you get for betraying the one who placed you above every thing and every one else. I get that when you are taught from childhood on how to woo men true love or genuine feeling will come after material pleasure. I would have accepted everything considering her mentality but the moment she said she would prefer Swara to get caught by Devendra just so that she will be removed from her path is not right but then again we can't expect great deeds from a woman who is brought up to be a mistress of someone. Loyalty will be the last thing in her books. I hate her for wishing to harm an innocent soul who has not done any harm to her directly. She is the reason for her own misery but then again like Ragini she too believes that she was a victim and all others are the reason behind it.

How can she trust her mother again. Didn't she already betray her once? How can she be foolish to think that this time things will be different? Oh! I hate her. (You know half of this is filled with this same word repeated over and over again, but I'm helpless I hate her that much and even if you tried to make her a victim of circumstances I would have still hated her, the impact of the show)

"And if the worst should happen and the plan fails, if I cannot have Sanskaar, he may as well be dead. After all, I am all but a living corpse myself so unless he is returned to me to bring me back to life, I will rest with him six feet under." And this is love I suppose. If I can't have you then better you die!! Wow!! But I'm not expecting her to think other wise.

Some part of me would also like to see Kavita and Laksh situation to be out in front of Ragini she needs to see that the woman she is so fond of in helping to get rid of her sister also had a connection with her husband and that too a rather different kind than what Swara had. Then lets see how she will handle the situation.

And Ragini what the hell is her problem? How can she sent such a message? Help them get in and out just to remove Swara from Sanskar. Doesn't she know what that vile creature did to Swara when she was caught earlier? She deserves to be punished, punished badly for this act. Let her try to harm Swara and then she and her new friend will see what hell raised on earth will be like. I would soo love to see that.



Love

Sree

P.S. I've missed something which I wanted to say, but I seriously can't remember.
Edited by Sree8410 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sree8410

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With a migraine so bad that I can barely sleep or stay awake I was refreshing this page to see when you'll update. Shruti, what have you done to me???? This obsession with DK is not good help me contain this madness you have unleashed in me.

Sree


Awww no hon! You have migraine? I hope you feel better asap! As for obsession with DK- I already told you you are not allowed to let that go at least until I finally finish 😆 and for what it's worth I love such obsessions- mmmwah! I hope this Chapter doesn't disappoint 😳. I am just doing some minor edits x

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