DARK KNIGHT-A SwaSan FF-T4-DELETED-AN PG1- Creations-Pgs 98/9 - Page 22

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

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Hey hun! I'm so annoying na? I know!! But you ARE SERIOUSLY THE BEST! Thank you thank you thank you so much for this!! DP is really giving him so much honours and his trying to rectify all mistakes that he has committed. Finally Sanskaar is getting all that he deserves and even Swara! After all she is a hero!

Sakshiii 🤗

No, you are not annoying, stop saying that 😡. Awww, you are the best too- in fact all of DK family is 😳. I so hoped you would come round to feeling that DP was genuinely making an effort. It doesn't negate his actions from before but that's what I meant before- he can only do what he can:)

Aw..my Sanskaar!! He is sooo amazing!! Such a warrior man! Always perfect and flawless<3 Great. But love will always interfere! All these rituals mattered to him only when Swara feels happy. And Swara, also! However she tries to hide away she can't resist when it comes to Sanskaar and his honour! Among everybody, Sanskaar's eyes find only Swara's where he only finds pride and love!

Sanskaar is totally Mr Perfect no? Yes exactly, Sanskaar isn't bothered about the glory. His happiness is more that she is proud of him, which of course she is . And yes since when can she hide from him? 😳

That momentary yet beautiful eye-lock was a treat!! This and all the efforts that DP made to make all good back again were so pleasing!! Just loved them. Thanks for giving me this! I was quite angry with DP but this makes me pity the old man!! Good, I'll be able to forgive him! When Swara was honoured, Sanskaar's face shown, just like Swara's had! Just loved it. But it was more like the calm before the storm!!

Whoa! It seriously means a lot to me that you felt I managed to make you get over some of the earlier antagonism (which was understandable too) towards DP. And yes, just as Swara glories in Sanskaar and his achievements, he is the same. These two are already just living for each other in a way huh? And yes calm before the storm indeed!

Sanskaar was so anxiously waiting to have a glimpse of Swara and there that idiot was shying!! Uhho..couldn't she have told Shekhar that yeah Baba! Prince Sanskaar asked me to marry him. But no...Buddhu Ladki! The moment I read this man's name and his convo with Janaki, I was sure that he's gonna propose Swara for marriage!! And I was like...Uhho! Naya Natak! But you sorted it all very well in chapter 27!

Swara- I don't think she has that sort of relationship with Shekhar although she deeply loves him of course. And also she feels she is "wrong" for Sanskaar so she cannot go around telling them about his proposal as she knows then that they will insist on the marriage . And Ranjit- yes, he had to be thrown into the mix to force things to come to the boil I felt 😉

Oh My Sanskaar! The moment he heard Swara is ill! He wanted to and he did rush to see her! Aw..Prince coming from the window to meet her!! How sweet<3 Just loved it. How Swara wanted to hug him and how he wanted to make her understand everything..well I just loved it man! Such emotions, such feels! Oh God!! My babies are the best<3 That slight squeeze as a sign of reassurance was such a sweet gesture by Sanskaar! I use the words-sweet and amazing too much na? Well then bear wimme! I hope I don't bore ya!

Sanskaar would of course be besides himself if he thought she wasn't well. And I felt a window entry was suited. Some like Sree and Asmita too were so looking forward to windows 😆. They are so desperate to be together and Swara is so conflicted in trying to do "right" which is of course here the totally wrong thing . I just felt those moments were little but in their way important to them so am so pleased you liked them and sweet and amazing is good for me!! 😃

Poor Swara!! Such excruciating pain being inflicted upon her heart! Damn, poor princess. But seriously, if she wants why can't she remain unmarried? Those are my future plans too ;p But the thought of marrying a man, double her age also having a son, isn't it more shameful? Actually a person starts to feel unwanted in such conditions!! Poor Swara. She was soo ill and Janaki made her more! Ugh

I think just as you will find 😉 families and our own don't let us remain unwed even if we want to- trust me I have tried that one 😆 and as for shame in marrying a much older man- yes, for us but the standards them would not make it so as most marriages would be entirely dynastic and for convenience 🤢

Sanskaar's deep blue tunic😉 I love this blue blue so much damn!! Sanskaar in deep blue is sooo lucky for us! This is Sanskaar! Blunt and straightforward. And Annapurna was the best person to tell this too I agree! My both babies are in such pain! This time my sadism really goes to hell and I actually feel bad! But chapter 27 is hella amazing!! Will meet ya there. Till then
Love ya loads and loads!

Sanskaar in blue , actually Sanskaar in anything or heck without anything - ok ok I need to control and stop ☺️. Aha yes, Sanskaar- no nonsense and no beating around the bush. He wants to say what he feels and he does. But yes, both in serious angst . Cannot wait to meet on 27 😉. And huge thanks and much love for this Sakshi especially as I know the first set typed was wiped out and you still re-did it all?! Bow down to you and am so grateful! Mmmwah.

Sakshi

Originally posted by: BookWormV

Shru,
I am making an appearance - you are that good, dragging me away from exam studying to write this. Just got the PM. It just made my day. Was dying for this next update. Dark Knight is going so freaking well. There were moments in chapters 26 when I wanted to strangle you for the misunderstandings and SwaSan separations happening but Chapter 27 made up for it. ❤️ Going to go read Chapter 28. Till then, keep writing.!
Will post a longer comment as soon as done with my finals. Muah! :*
-V
P.S.: Hope your health has improved! :)

Edited:
Chapter 28 started out so blissfully! The SwaSan moments and the Pawan Uttara teasing was too cute. Question: That woman is not Ragini, right? Its Janki. It cant be Ragini. I don't know yaar. Over active dimaag of mine.
The 3rd part. Can I say that I prefer Kavita as a good woman whom Sanskaar was in love with and who is truly and kindly six feet underground? Why does she creep up? Why?!!!!! 😕 Anyways, brilliant chapter with one more topsy curvy twist which is so amazing that I am dreading the next turn of events. Brilliant work Shruti! :)

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome update..
So kavita is alive...
Update soon..waiting

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Di...this is amazing..what the hell is ragini planning...is kavitha really alive.. Why I feel sanskaar letter will be replaced and he will be blamed again...for getting back to kavitha and I hope swara trusts sanskaar rather than the letter.. Plzz update soon Di... Can't wait now...

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Chapter 28:

Such a "short" chapter this is Shru😆

Lanny 🤗

😆- yes, only 20 pages!! 😲😆

Pawan

I love how many and "love hearts" emos Pawan gets from you!! It makes me glad I wrote him! 😳

There is no greater fun than teasing couples so much & so obviously in love & PaRa do it best😆 Poor Swara, though Sanskaar is totally shameless😆 Pawan is such a gentleman to not look at Swara when she is in her "delightfully rumpled state"😳😆 He is the best XXX

Exactly!! Especially the sort of reactions Swara gives are the best. Sanskaar is totally shameless 😆. Yes Pawan such a gent 😎, really almost brotherly towards Swara without being cheesy 😎.

Zagadne ke liye dono hamesha taiyyar rehte hai😆 Chance mila nahi ke shuru😆 Though Swara really shouldn't be much angry. There is another love story happening right under his nose of which he knows nothing about...Finally we found something the Prince is dense at😆 I really want to know the back story of how they ended up here together. Party mein toh Uttara ko kitna avoid kar raha tha Pawan...me wants to know how Uttara managed to convince him to let her walk about with her 🤣 (since no one other than Prince Dense will believe that explanation😛) And now he is picking up her pins & combs 🤣 Ab aisi harkatein karta hai aur fir Pawan hase toh usko punch karega ye ladka? 🤣

BROMANCE!

I know!! Sanskaar had to taunt Swara and she had to jump on it, but not in the way he would have so preferred 😉. PaRa 😆. We already know you cannot avoid the Maheshwari siblings. So Pawan can't either 😆. And I loved Mr Cool and Macho Sanskaar Maheshwari gathering combs and all and then threatening to break his friend's jaw, and Pawan being like- yeah whatever! Wish we had the WA rolling eyes emo- so seeing Pawan use that 😆. Me loves good bromance 😃

Sujju is sweet? No, actually Sujju is just being Sujju, annoying yet nice😆 And she is right, saas aur taane na maare aisa kaise ho sakta hai😆 I liked the part where she asks Swara to stay happy & make her son happy...finally the mother in her wins! What does a mother want other than her child's happiness anyways😊

Exactly the point- she is what she is and I too liked that she was up front about it but also reassured her that she wasn't going to be vindictive or do things behind Swara's back- Swara has enough of that with EHMMBH 😃

😳 A witch at work somewhere is the dark recesses of the Palace...

Hmmm- yes, time to also decipher the plots and unravel them too now

Why could Sanskaar not tell her & go to get those supplies? Poor thing must have wanted to spend the last day before he leaves with him & here he goes on self assigned missions! Men will be men🥱 But chalo at least he came back by night. He surely knows how to coax her into things😆 Swara can resist his charms, his touches, his words but just the mention that he is hungry & she forgets all her anger immediately😳

Sanskaar- budhu! Sneaks meetings in when not necessary- isme nahi kar sakta tha? But yes men will be men!! And yes persuasion main toh uske paas degree honi chahiye 😉. I love how manipulative he is- he will try everything and know that the emo BM will work best 😈

Hmm so now both have their talismans to protect them though I don't like what it implies...that they will be in need of protection...meaning they will be in danger And this time they aren't even together And they once again spend the night together. I love it how they are always finding reasons & excuses to always be together😳

Ah- you sensed some hidden meanings behind the talismans? Well given the history of DK who can blame you?! I wondered about using the spending night together again but felt it fit there and of course they both need these moments to tide them over for the coming

And finally the most awaited (NOT!) entry of the FF🤢 Kavitaji🤢 I am so glad Sanskaar was so clear in what he would & would not do for her👏 He left no room for any MU. And Pawan...oh could he be any more perfect. Everyone needs one such friend who will steer you in the right direction if they feel you are about to do something wrong😳 As soon as he felt there was even a slight chance of Sanskaar choosing Kavi over Swara he immediately set out to make Sanskaar understand how stupid that would be. But it was a relief to see that Sanskaar himself was not weakening & while he is happy that Kavi is alive she no longer has that place in his life which she did five years ago.

Yes, I know no one wants Kavita but she was a big part of whatever happened to Sanskaar and there are so many unanswered questions there that even Sanskaar needs answered so little choice but to deal with her. However my main aim was to do what you picked up- show the way Sanskaar handled that revelation where he thinks it is Kavita back- he won't parlay with Swara and his love- he will be the gent he is and also do whatever is needed to rescue her but not promise that Swara will be abandoned so they can pick up where they left off. And Pawan- wanted to hug him. How he is so protective over Swara and wants to ensure his friend doesn't stray. And the great thing is that his friend had no intention of straying- tried to bring in each character's own stance and will. 😳

Originally posted by: dilwali

Hey Shru lots of luv for giving so early n nicely written updates n for beautiful replies to comments n most importantly for being so sweet
Coming to update of chap 27
It was too much in one updat
1. Felt shocked of Kavita's entry. I never thought she will part of DK but I dont want her to be negative just like show. She should be a positive person. Does it has any relation with letter written by Ragini...??? suspense...
2. Beautiful moments of swasan with each other specially Sanskar stayed back wid Swara like he used to do. Their care for each other n exchange of ring n rudraksha for each other safety was very sweet gesture
3. Ragini still planning to harm Swara. I m not able to digest that how can she stoop so low
4. Pawan is so caring for swara n ready to scold sanskar for her. That was so sweet
A little worried whats gonna happen now?????
Thanku for listening to all of us. Take care of urself n loads of love