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amimus

@amimus

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Congrats on the 4th thread. This is truly amazing. I wait eagerly for the updates and each update is better then the other.

I love this story and your skills.

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

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Dearest Shruti ,

I wont start off this one with an sorry as well..So let me get to the comment that has been long due.. Since you even update the next one .And i have yet to unres.

I loved Part 1 so much as always,anything that is about Swasan being happy will make me love it but i really like Uttara and the way she teases both her bhai and Bhabhi..Swara needs such an loving sister in law since there is no hope in sister department. Plus Pawan and Sanskar bond is so special and unique, only Pawan understands how much happy his friend is finally after being in pain for so many years.

Suju was being Suju as always, but i liked the quick turn around of her character. I wont say she changed completely like you said but still she is not actively plotting against her .That one quality i love about her . And even if AP was more of Maa to Sanskar still Sujatha also loves him in her own unique way and she just wants him to be happy .

The Mystery person is really mysterious to me, i tried to guess but failed,so i wont guess and wait till you reveal it to me.

But Part 2 had to be my favourite in this chapter.. I really loved it. What with Swara and Sanskar trying to spend some time together inspite of the chaperones. Then him going on an important errand on he final day leading to angry Swara who fasted for him.

I so loved our secret meeting in the night. It was such a treat to read Sanskar pacifying his princess and finally getting her to eat. Words cant express how much i loved that part . It was really so good that i read it few times. Also i dont think i need to say how much i love there sleeping in each other embrace as i probably must have told about it lot of times.. Thanks Shruti dear for giving me awesome scenes like that..

Then came part 3, i was expecting it ofcourse some twist or turn as reading part 1 and 2 , i know it was too much of happiness for both SwaSan and me and i knew you would balance it out. But still the twist came as shock ,I know you will clear it out but i didnt expect it ,Happy that Sanskar was firm on his decision and i love him for his steadfast love towards his princess and i am glas he was not the only one on the know and Pawan knows about the letter too. Still knowing you , i am guessing this are going to get lot complicated before it solves itself out. So that the reunion would be much sweeter just like the last chapter. And i cant wait for that chapter.

But you know how much addicted i am to do this FF, so i wont be able to handle the suspence or handle another MU.So i am very sorry dear but i think i am going to wait till you update the next chapter or actually resolve the new conflict named Kavitha before reading Chapter 29. Since i wont be able to wait it out till you update . Please do let me know when you solved the new twist named Kavitha, i can catch up with ten chapter at once but i cant wait patiently though. I hope you understand Shruti , it really hard not to be able to read Chapter 29 as soon as i saw the PM but i decided this is how i am going to do it this time when i read chapter 28.

Love

Nita

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Vianna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Shru,
I am making an appearance - you are that good, dragging me away from exam studying to write this. Just got the PM. It just made my day. Was dying for this next update. Dark Knight is going so freaking well. There were moments in chapters 26 when I wanted to strangle you for the misunderstandings and SwaSan separations happening but Chapter 27 made up for it. ❤️ Going to go read Chapter 28. Till then, keep writing.!
Will post a longer comment as soon as done with my finals. Muah! :*
-V
P.S.: Hope your health has improved! :)

Edited:
Chapter 28 started out so blissfully! The SwaSan moments and the Pawan Uttara teasing was too cute. Question: That woman is not Ragini, right? Its Janki. It cant be Ragini. I don't know yaar. Over active dimaag of mine.
The 3rd part. Can I say that I prefer Kavita as a good woman whom Sanskaar was in love with and who is truly and kindly six feet underground? Why does she creep up? Why?!!!!! 😕 Anyways, brilliant chapter with one more topsy curvy twist which is so amazing that I am dreading the next turn of events. Brilliant work Shruti! :)

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Chapter 28:

Such a "short" chapter this is Shru😆

Pawan

There is no greater fun than teasing couples so much & so obviously in love & PaRa do it best😆 Poor Swara, though Sanskaar is totally shameless😆 Pawan is such a gentleman to not look at Swara when she is in her "delightfully rumpled state"😳😆 He is the best XXX Zagadne ke liye dono hamesha taiyyar rehte hai😆 Chance mila nahi ke shuru😆 Though Swara really shouldn't be much angry. There is another love story happening right under his nose of which he knows nothing about...Finally we found something the Prince is dense at😆 I really want to know the back story of how they ended up here together. Party mein toh Uttara ko kitna avoid kar raha tha Pawan...me wants to know how Uttara managed to convince him to let her walk about with her 🤣 (since no one other than Prince Dense will believe that explanation😛) And now he is picking up her pins & combs 🤣 Ab aisi harkatein karta hai aur fir Pawan hase toh usko punch karega ye ladka? 🤣

BROMANCE!

Sujju is sweet? No, actually Sujju is just being Sujju, annoying yet nice😆 And she is right, saas aur taane na maare aisa kaise ho sakta hai😆 I liked the part where she asks Swara to stay happy & make her son happy...finally the mother in her wins! What does a mother want other than her child's happiness anyways😊

😳 A witch at work somewhere is the dark recesses of the Palace...

Why could Sanskaar not tell her & go to get those supplies? Poor thing must have wanted to spend the last day before he leaves with him & here he goes on self assigned missions! Men will be men🥱 But chalo at least he came back by night. He surely knows how to coax her into things😆 Swara can resist his charms, his touches, his words but just the mention that he is hungry & she forgets all her anger immediately😳

Hmm so now both have their talismans to protect them though I don't like what it implies...that they will be in need of protection...meaning they will be in danger And this time they aren't even together And they once again spend the night together. I love it how they are always finding reasons & excuses to always be together😳

And finally the most awaited (NOT!) entry of the FF🤢 Kavitaji🤢 I am so glad Sanskaar was so clear in what he would & would not do for her👏 He left no room for any MU. And Pawan...oh could he be any more perfect. Everyone needs one such friend who will steer you in the right direction if they feel you are about to do something wrong😳 As soon as he felt there was even a slight chance of Sanskaar choosing Kavi over Swara he immediately set out to make Sanskaar understand how stupid that would be. But it was a relief to see that Sanskaar himself was not weakening & while he is happy that Kavi is alive she no longer has that place in his life which she did five years ago.

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Res for Chapter 28

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"Bhabhi Saa, shall I help you rearrange your hair? Just so that you look less ermmm delightfully rumpled?" - That was the best (there are more but my foolish mind and blissful heart love this and wholeheartedly agree with Sanskaar - she could look even more delightfully rumpled; if the sense of propriety had not reared its ugly head 😉).

How did Pawan manage to keep a straight face - but it was not for long, how could he resist the mighty General Sanskaar treasuring Swara's ivory combs and pins? And the mighty General is quite dense in truly identifying women's emotions, he did not realise Swara loved him till she literally screamed it in his face and he cannot see Uttara falling for Pawan (I am sure he will give both his blessing and a significant payback for all the teasing he has and would endure till that day).

Sujatha's declaration - was as you said unexpected and individualistic as she is - but it was what I sort of expected (I did mention that Sujatha's opposition to Swara was more because she felt she had to rather any deep feelings for the same). But an open statement was very welcome. Here's hoping that she does not do a volte-face in future.

Ending of Part 1 - Why do I have a feeling that you wrote as you did so that the most easily achieved logical assumption would be Ragini but is not? Ragini did scheme to have Swara removed from her path to marry Lakshya but not to stop her marriage with Sanskaar. So it must be someone else. Someone else who has had a very very long time to nurse their hatred but who is also aware of quite a few facts / secrets which she is sure of disrupting Swara's marriage to Sanskaar. There was a niggling doubt it could be Kavita but then she would have to be at the Palace - not possible - she could not stay hidden for long. Kaveri - no way (does not have a ''husband') and that leaves Janaki and Annapurna (Sujatha, in my opinion, does not have a personal hatred towards Swara even if we pretend that she did not mean a word she uttered at the feast and Sharmishta should have no plausible reason to hate Swara), Annapurna again does not have an apparent reason to hate Swara which means it could be Janaki - all this thinking worries me. [I wrote this at a stretch and re-reading it - makes me confused - but am leaving it, if it make any sense to you, do let me know😕😕].

Finally, the day for the men to be leaving for the battle draws nigh - and Swara is taken over by a foreboding, which considering part 3 was well placed. The exchange of the protective talismans, actually they truly did not need any 'external' talismans, their love is enough but was symbolic and a reiteration of their love for each other especially when Sanskaar says "it is a black stone, now on gold. I will replace it with a "Mangalsutra" but until then it is a sign that we are wed in our hearts anyway, my love. Wear this and stay safe for me. I think I must go now but I will see you in the morning before we set off." It is a promise that he would be back for her and a request that she stay safe for him. (Slightly ominous😲). And they again spend the night together - and despite their newly admitted love for each other - was of secure promises and faith in their future together.

And then, disaster strikes and Kavita makes her reappearance! Her death was suspicious and her mother is devious, so her being alive is not so surprising, though her 'demands' are - though she does appear to slightly contradict herself - "she would never mention this again if Sanskaar didn't want her, but she felt she couldn't give up on their love now that she knew what awaited her without seeing what he wanted too. If he didn't accept her, she would never blame him but she wouldn't live either, as she didn't think she could bear the life that she was to be thrust into unless he could retrieve her from it. She also felt terrible asking for another woman's relation to be broken because of her, but she hoped that like hers did to him, Sanskaar's heart still also belonged only to her."

and also "If Sanskaar told her that he wanted her back, she would send him another message to meet her somehow and she hoped that he could then help her escape her mother's clutches but before she made any further plans, she felt she had to know what his intentions were."

Well, I get a tiny hope that she is sort of prepared to lose Sanskaar to Swara but hopes that he might rescue her from her mother's clutches as she says that she would rather die than belong to another man and just might not morph into an evil scheming maid on the lines of Kaveri and Ragini and that mysterious letter writer-who-is-not-named.😡😡

Sanskaar's letter cleared up any doubts either Pawan or the reader could have, clear and to the point, especially when he makes it clear that he loves Swara and has moved on from Kavita.

But I am again a trifle worried - if this letter is indeed from Kavita and she is aware that Sanskaar has left for battle leaving Swara alone... On the other hand, if this is a letter written by the mysterious writer who knows that Swara is alone and of Sanskaar's intentions towards Kavita, could she not manipulate the situation with Swara. Sanskaar and Pawan had an inkling too, they did draw up an amended plan of action - would it be enough. Guess Swara does need all the protection she can get!

Chapter 29 - please...

love,

Nyna

PS: I often wondered why I take so long to unres for the DK chapters - I think it is because I first read the current chapter (I save the entire page as a pdf file) then decide to reread all the chapters on that thread, then at times I go back to the previous chapters, especially if the current chapter refers to some earlier written event) and I get lost in DK land. There is no way out, so you have to tolerate my tardiness.😳

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Awesome update..
So kavita is alive...
Update soon..waiting

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dilwali

@dilwali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Hey Shru lots of luv for giving so early n nicely written updates n for beautiful replies to comments n most importantly for being so sweet
Coming to update of chap 27
It was too much in one updat
1. Felt shocked of Kavita's entry. I never thought she will part of DK but I dont want her to be negative just like show. She should be a positive person. Does it has any relation with letter written by Ragini...??? suspense...
2. Beautiful moments of swasan with each other specially Sanskar stayed back wid Swara like he used to do. Their care for each other n exchange of ring n rudraksha for each other safety was very sweet gesture
3. Ragini still planning to harm Swara. I m not able to digest that how can she stoop so low
4. Pawan is so caring for swara n ready to scold sanskar for her. That was so sweet
A little worried whats gonna happen now?????
Thanku for listening to all of us. Take care of urself n loads of love

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bones123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

Res for 25 and. 26

*Updated for Chapter 25*

Shruuu...so sorry for delaying so much on this, but I know you will excuse me :) I'd like to reiterate that these udpates have been quite refreshing in my otherwise boring days !

I will update comments a chapter at a time if that's okay with you...

Swara's grey mood complemented by the grey weather is such a lovely comparison ! I feel for the princess..she reaches that fountain which not only marks the start of the journey as you've put it, but also start of her relationship with the prince...the thought of whom is causing her heart to rip ! poor baby ! 😭

I love the connundrum the two mothers face, believing Swara equals believing the other daughter is a fiend, almost a monster who wanted to slay this one ! But still so glad that Swara stood her ground and did not cower under the triad,especially when she speaks to the two mums about layign the blame where it belongs !

Shomi realising her daughter's condition giving way to her realisation of how much Swara adored the prince is sucha lovely perceptive mother moment ! only they can sense such things without much being said. Given that she knows the kind of duress women go through and having lived through that humiliation, it's only natural for her to feel apprehensive ! Loved that entire portion.

Also, the way the tide has turned, and Swara's earlier security blanket her Janki maa, is no comparison for the peace and respite Sanskaar bought her. That she misses his company is such a lovely throwback to all those times at the Haveli and since then. Buttt, my poor babies have to wait until later and for now stew over some hot coals !

*Have i mentioned before how i love that despite all the relationships that you deal with adeptly in DK, i really love how the strategy and mechanics of war are never lost. It is pivotal to the plot and you draft it in so craftily 👏👏* ...waise still don't trust Adarsh :P

This massive ceasefire and impasse that the men have reached at, it seems like you say a luxury they can afford to take while they busy themselves with the war and other points. I'm 😆😆😆 at all of Shekhar's reaction *i don't know why*...i mean it's natural that he feels for both his daughters and what Sanskaar has done to his family, but Sanskaar is so amazing that he gives two hoots and continues with his agenda..positioning the guards was the funniest...it's the most natural thing Sanskaar could do, but for Shekhar it must seem like such a slap 😆!

Swara's state of mind..ufff...💔...bechari...clutching to the last vestiges of good times with those clothes and the puppets and other finery he had purchased ! Swaraaa...tu kab samjhegi that he loves you equally !! *i know this answer now but still..at this point wanted to ask her that😆*

Veeer is back..woohooo...well he's back cos Swara wants to see his master, but still Veer is always happy to help :P Just like Varun is for Uttara...smart girls i must say :P ...and what a fruitful journey taht was...one gets to meet him..the other gets the news she needs ;)

Pawan..as cheeky as ever...never missing a step when trying to tease Swara...only to stumble when she returns that favour...haha..loved that entire conversation...from eager Uttu's baatein to Pawan's mortification !..later when Pawan vows to not fall in love seeing Sanskaar's state it made me chuckle...beta tu bhi gaya...just like your bestie !

Sujata...sometimes she just makes me want to slap my forehead !! sigh..how that must have shattered Swara's heart and guilt tripped her further !

The moment that these two see each other...haiii...time really does stand still doesn't it ? The thing that i reallly adore about your Swara and Sanskaar is that wordless understanding of each other's sitaution *Except ofcourse the most obvious lovee question*..buut i meant them assessing each other's appearance and state of mind while on the surface talking banalities !! *bubbbles*

She's still nervous about perceptions, and he totally gives a darn and infact goes on to tease her...fabulous...that conversation filled with little agitations, frustration, longing and yearning gives way to the bestest kiss ever !! What passion, and how you've brought that charged moment alive with your words...👏👏👏 and seetiyaan ! Annnd then the best kiss leads to that fight/argument..which makes me want to knock their heads together and say ufff bachhhon !

Like in chapter 24, Swara is still saying the right things and in her head she thinks this is only a compromise, and she can't stand it !! and her response is making him think she doesn't love him...the words they use is manifesting into total different imagery in each other's heads but actually stemming from the deep love and care they have for each other!!

His internal monologue is jsut a beautiful example of that..how deep that emotion runs..haiii..okay i now wnt to give them a hug..they really don't deserve thsi misery..*yes i've read 27 and 28...still :P*

*soooper chapter Shru...will come abck with comments for the other 3..i hope to finish this by the time you upload 29, so I'm not far behind*

*Updated for Chapter 26*

We need the storm, the whirlwind and the Earthquake !! Oh we so dooo !!

That entire spectacle at the arena with Sanskar triggering off the commencement of the ceremony had such a rich gladiator-esque feel to it !! Loooved the attention to detail, from the actual ceremony and it's significance to seating Arrangement to the crowd's reaction..and ofcourse Sanskaar's supreme skill !!

These two knuckleheads have as blazing a chemistry as the fire that burnt in the torch ! The sight of him makes her forget her resolve to stay away, and the pride that she displays makes him break out into that wonderful smile !! sizzz...! but as always the mummies...4 in tow are silently observing what the bachhas are upto...like i said..who more perceptive that mothers !

This perpetual confused side of Shekhar !! Hates Sanskaar...needs Sanskaar...is against Sanskaar...but needs Sanskaar !! 👏👏 for how Sanskaar deals with him...give respect but door se ! I do wonder why Shekhar who was so quick to disown Swara is not even venturing into trying to see what this prince and Swara are trying to say against Ragini...if so quick to judge Swara on Ragini's words and the words of society, surely you'd delve a little more into Ragini on Swara's behest...nope !! yeh toh ulta Swara the bojhhh ke saath deal karna chahta hai !! damn youuu Shekhar...damn you !!

Full marks to DP for making amends...for whatever his follies were in the past, he truly sought out to do much better...elevating Sanskaar and his men to full glory is definitely something that starts out that, and you could argue that elevating Sanskaar to that high position could be something not too farfetched for a family member...but the next announcements were the icing on the cake !! Giving Pawan that level of respect in such an open forum...*whistle*...but then he not only ices the cake but also adds a sparkling firecracker as a candle...by calling out Swara's contribution !! Well done DP...

Sanskaar's pride for Swara echoes her reaction for him from a while ago...adorable !! But yeh zaalim duniyaa !

See this next part is what makes me so skeptical of Janki...while i agree it could just be an offset of her practical and regal brain that she sees how things are and calls them out for what they are...but still...it just leaves me with a weird sense of unease that despite the Rana's speech, she comes back to Swara's broken plight ? Surely (as Sanskaar says in the next chapter), the Rana's word means more than the glances of a few women...and for a lady whose dealt with way more in her life, she should be able to put this behind her and see where her daughter's happiness lies...unlesss she's doign just that but that daughter in question is Ragini :P ...okay not troubling my brain anymore, because I know this is DK and koi bhi..kabhi bhi is something I'll just have to deal with...Maybe it's her...maybe its someone else who'd prove to be more of a shock to me.. :)

In this chapter I truly felt Sanskaar's frustration at being away from Swara...how the change of scene took away that innocent freedom from them and bound them in shackles of proprietary and rules !! Add to that more Kabab mein Haddi(s)...Ranjit and Pradhyuman (why does my brain flash to CID's ACP Pradhuyman when i read that name...not my finest tv viewing moment 😳)...ok mr. ranjit...hands...eyes...noses all off the princess...not up for grabs...nada...it's a miracle Sanskaar didn't duel with him then and there !!

*Lakshya not in the vicinity cracked me up...avoiding his mother 😆

Really did not like Janki's address to Swara...don't make it harder...*cringe*...poor thing, to be palmed off to an older man just to save the family from some ignominy seems sooo unfair..even if that time period had this as common behaviour ! Swara's outburst is amazing and I only wish Sanskaar had heard it then...but no hope or love lost...the fact that she puts it out tehre to her Janki maa...and stoutly refuses the marry the other saamvant is 👏👏..You go girl !

If one conversation between a mother and a daughter was crackling, equally amazing was the other one between mother and son ! *unrelated : how cute is it that yesterday Swara wore clothes he picked out and today he wears what she picked out*

Yes...back to AP and Sanskaar...Hurrayyy for frank talks and declarations *even if it is only to mothers*...I love how he wants her to take the proposal...to do it the right way..and have the queen proposition the hand of the saamvant's daughter...and also equally endearing is he thinks she doesn't love him, and owns up to AP without any qualms (given the time, she must really wonder if he cares about his ego :P)...and the hilarious part was him totally discounting Sujju's disapproval, because he knows his 'choti maa' would never speak against his 'maa'...smart bwoyyy !

💔..I can only imagine the anger he feels at hearing the news of the Saamvant's proposition !! His ever well thinking mother wants him to calm down and forget the princess but surely she knows her son better...surely she knows that he wouldn't let anything happen to his love...a spectacle is a small price to pay for that...hahaa...*rubs hands in gleee for next chapter*...Chanting Sanskaaar...Sanskaaar all the way

*Another great and fulfilling chapter to read Shru...so well packaged and it hits all the right notes on the emotion spectrum...**

Will comment soon on 27 and 28...but hurrray for this and mwwaaah...take your time to respond...so I can finish the comments on the other two...take care and don't work too hard :)...P&J !

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bones123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#199

Res for 27 and 28

*Updated for Chapter 27*

Blissful follies indeed !!

Ragini's finally made a first person appearance...after the zora ka chaata...!! She doesn't really give up being venemous does she ? I like that tenacity and persistence about her...makes her an interesting adversary...but hilarious theory about sequence of events reg. S&S...she must think she's the only desirable one :P

Equally amazing was seeing Swara give it back to her. She's realised the truth of her sister and will not sahofy the barbs...she hits it right where it aches, the elusive happiness that Ragini is scrambling for..that forms the base of all her different personalities and facades! She leaves that argument as victor only to arrive in that melee of unsavoury options ! Saamvant, Lakshya, Sujata and the to be blushing brides and finally Ragini ! RP observing her I found as a great clue...he's totally on his son's side...and obviously reads more than meets the eye !

*Drumrolll please for the angry young prince*

Loved how he doesn't waste time in getting to the point while DP is still trying to load him with material things...and it's so telling of society that automatically the interest in that conversation peaks !

Sanskaar is so Sanskaar the way he puts forward his request to DP...he may as well have said boss please ssshhh...ab bahut bol liye :P AP is also panicking, because she knows what her son wants and is going to do *despite her advice*..i found this funny that he literally gives a damn ! So deep runs his emotion and the need to have Swara be part of his life and not to mr.ranjit and chota cid :P

Shekhar's reaction as usual hilarious..doesn't know which tree hit him !The directness has flabbergasted him ! *I'm hooting now for the challenge he's openly laying out for an announcement that hasn't been made...whistleee*

Have to give it to Sujata to try and interject and save her plans with all the other titlieees...I feel for where RP's comment stems from, but her point is valid...she is afterall his mother...and she can voice her displeasure if she wants to...it's a different thing Sanskaar is so far away from any point of caring :D

I liked the Sanskaar/Janki exchange, viewed holistically her arguments are sound...but you see my brain has been tainted..I'm finding sinister meanings in everything...sigh..

but how great was his reply and no wonder Swara is going all dhak dhak *dreamyboateyes*

And finally Sharmishtaaa speaketh...and boy did the prince allay her fears !...itna ki he's causing shock to his own family..hahaha...Sanskaaar...abhi abhi toh aaye ho...bahaar bannke chaaye ho !

Woot woot about calling out this whole palming off Swara to the other saamvant business !! like i said earlier, this is a family that's gone through a lot more in the previous generation..then why is Shekhar so keen to get his daughter away..!

That one look that passes between the two of them when he says her opinion should be sought is total thud worthy...time stood still types ! and loveee that his one statement is getting his family to agree to it *i guess they are truly scared he'll run away :P*

When she says I'll marry Sanskaar...I whoooped with joy...FINALLLY !

So glad you wrapped up the whole Ranjit angle so well...i know you dislike overdrawn melodrama, and thsi was such a lovely example of not having to write mroe than necessary. A truly well distinguished gentleman who knows what love looks like and also is clever enough to know when the cards are stacked against him. You go Ranjit...well done !

Anddd I loved the look Ragini and Sanskaar share...again seeti maaro moment !!

RP being wingman to Sanskaar is hilarious, and glad he took up his father's advice and went in search of his lady love !

The Jal Mahal...a tranquil space that is totally opposite to the state of Swara;s mind, love how you've juxtaposed the two...

Okay..time for some heart to heart between the two knuckleheads...these two are adorable, huggable and at the same time need some sense knocked into their heads !! HOW they are so aware of everything else except that the other is in love with them is shocking :D I guess the burdens of the past for him, and the ignominy for her aren't letting them get to th truth !

But it's good that they are arguing, only in heigtened scenarios does mannn ki baat come to zubaan ! and exactly that happened...

When he says you'd rather marry the older man to live in a loveless marriage than be in a relationship with him is so gut wrenching !! *If only you knew Sanskaar*...

and there comes her reply, which voices her fear and her turmoil...the idea of living in a loveless marriage with the one she loves...who she believes loves someone else...hahaha...poor things..that light bulb moment for both was so amazingly well done...he can't believe it, and asks her to repeat it...and she gets annoyed that's doing that...and ups her outburst and her declaration !...gold standard in confessions Shru...absolutely brilliant !!

When he responds with his own declaration and the penny drops for her, its such joy to read what she goes through...that he loves her...and was always talking about her...ad not another woman...since the Haveli...awww

Madly, Deeply, Irrevocably !! and the way he elaborates on that...haiii... *SOLD*

Finally the words are tumbling, and what gems each of them...what has been apparent to everyone, is nwo apparent to the two...and i'm so glad they don't hold back or are stingy with saying what the other means to them.. *heartbubbles alert*

*BEST PROPOSAL EVER*...and not a single Adarsh in sight..Hallelujah !!

The raw intensity with which they go at each other is such an outlet of all the pent up emotion and frustration that they've felt all along...and it's so cute that he still wants to be all gentemanly! But i get it...get a room tum dono :D :D :D

I was just wondering when the best friend/fiend will make an appearance...and lo and behold..he appears...with his future love in tow...haha...These four and the sight that they are in...made me chuckle so hard

Chapter 27 was total blockbbuster Shru...drama...action...tension...emotion...love..lust...fun...it encompassed it all...FULL MARKS !!

*I'm still updating 28...and have 29 left..and now 30...* man...never knew lagging behind will take me so behind...forever in catch up mode !!

*Updated for Chapter 28*

Pawan is such a droll fellow ! The way he delivers that line, you can almost see how much he's enjoying this sight !

And Sanskaar...not even flinching, leaving all the flustering to Swara...these two friends are just the hoot !

Also..so happy S&S have now moved to cute bickering stage :) awww...hugs !

Glad someone addressed the elephant int he room about her clothes and her hair...it made me double up with laughter that once Uttara led Swara away *Delightfully rumpled...squeeeal* Sanskaar started picking up her combs and pins...and then threatening PKJ with bodily harm if he ever outed him..ROFL !!! Also have to give it to Swara that she manages to shut Pawan up..even if for a nanosecond...and Sanskaar is super oblivious...makes me think he's just so terrible at catching relationship cues :P

*Bromance bubbble alert..man i'm full of bubbles hi bubbles*...Like i've todl you before, I love a well done bromance, and you've always done fantastically with Sanskaar and PKJ...i look forward to their banter everytime..! The rest of the dinner..i totally wanted to sing aankhon ki gustaakhiyaaan...maaf hoo :)

Sujjju is such a darling...well said..what MIL isn't bossy ;) Her entire speech was so straight from the heart...which proves even through the histrionics, Sujata actually is a mum at heart and wants the best for her children...and is clever enough to understand when her son has got that and not prolong it with pointless drama...Kudos !!

*Ab who is this sinister being...is it Kaveri...or is t someone else who is the informant for chapter 29*..Ragini/Janki...whooo is it...who is moving stealthily w/o waking their husband...both these women saw Kaveri appear the other day..hmmm...So confused !

*Part 2*

I'm feeling Swara's disquiet as well...darn Sanskaar..do you really have to go !! Uppar se the two love birds not being able to meet freely..hai re zaalim zamaana !

Him disappearing for the entire day...and that to his final day before he left to reclaim her home...i feel her pain/frustration...he should have told her the poor thing his plan about the supplies and how he had engineered it to make sure it was adequate..!! She'd only feel pride at his doings...!

The mock fight is soo cute ! She's angry..yet she wants him...and tries her best to be all nonchalant and bid him bye in a regal manner..and he's such a clever fellow..knows exactly what to say to get her attention and care...food..the universal need...bringing hearts together since the middle ages ;)

Ha..i totally expected them to go the distance...but Sanskaar is sanskaaari ;) His nymph union will have to wait...

This exchanging of talisman is giving me heebiejeebies...i hope they don't need protection for whatever will follow...*mummmy!!* The way you've spun that sequence is fabulous Shru...u feel the deep care and regard for each other, the worry...and also the connection between the two...that only in each other's wellbeing rests one's own wellbeing.. *still melting*

I was sooo hoping she'd ask him to stay...and she diddd...and they went back to that magical time...even though everything is alright now, still...the nights together were always so special for the duo...mwaaah for including that !

*Part 3*

Aiiiyyyo...start of the evil...nahi wonly !!

Was so intrigued to know what that letter contained, and it brought my deepest fears to the foreground !! Kavita...nahi nahi nahi..! *Now that i've read 29, i do feel at ease reg. Kavita...will comment on how fascinating i found her in 29, but in 28 I was like omg...she's been wronged...this is going to jagaao Sanskaar's inner goodness*

I felt the same indignation that PKJ feels... but Sanskaar's reply was such a nice tight slap *to me as well ;)*...

So hurrray that he wants to save her...save her all you like...save her mother also...and anybody else also that you think who needs saving...but remain forever and always Madly, Deeply, Irrevocably in love with Swara !!*

Indeed different types of battlefields are out there...and what the prince is best at doing is navigating these...

Such an impactful chapter Shru...I loved it !!

hugs and kisses ^ infinity for you...for continually taking us all on this wonderous journey of DK...Love all the characters and their nuances...

I know i keep saying I'll catch up soon..but i promise, tomorrow is the last day where i will be lagging...this time i shall catchup...and catch up in time...off to read 30 now...mwaaah

Edited by bones123 - 9 years ago

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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Oh such a beautiful morning!! Thanks Shruti🤗 Such a lovely start to my day with DK.. Pawan toh pawan, Uttara bhi kuch kam nahi hai😆 Cute teasing session that was😉 How can Sanskar be so unabashed at that??😲😆 Holding her hand throughout😳 Swara's punches keep getting better🤣 But Sansku still hasn't realised those other sparks, he's so lost in his personal sun

Next we have Sujju!! Just like on the show, crass but adorbs😛

SwaSan's almost stolen meetings😃😃 The royal mothers are sort of in on the romance ha😛

Best part- SwanSan's secret meeting at night.. Uff!! Sooo cute!! Swara is annoyed, hurt, has missed him crazily all day, and is somewhat grumpy coz of hunger.. Uspe Sanskar ka manana..☺️ The exchange of rudraksh n the ring was so very soulful!! A piece of heaven before the oncoming battle...😳😳

Itna sab kuch accha ja raha hai, you had to put in a twist na??😆 But return of kavita??😕😕 I have this strong sense of foreboding about both letters!! Especially coz of the small bit in the middle of some sinister jealous person😉 But as usual I'm very eager to know how everything plays out😃😃

Super swasanlicious chapter, thank you Shru!!!🤗

Love,

Akshata😊

Edited by Krishnabhisarik - 9 years ago