Ragsan Sajan maine tumse pyaar - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: wayback

Lovely it was..
I loved it..

I am loving this SS..
It makes me love Ragsan more..
I hope the Tevar work together some day as a couple.. It would be my dream come true..
But for now.. In SR.. I only want Swasan.. and Raglak


Yeah I also want the same, but I'm not happy with the current track!
Ragini should test Laksh patience, let him win her love back, and not agreeing like this! We can see that just in films! Inside I'm happy finally Laksh discover his love for Ragini. We cannot get what we want that's why we write some stories :)

And thank you for LOVING my SS I'm very much happy 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Berlin



Yeah I also want the same, but I'm not happy with the current track!
Ragini should test Laksh patience, let him win her love back, and not agreeing like this! We can see that just in films! Inside I'm happy finally Laksh discover his love for Ragini. We cannot get what we want that's why we write some stories :)

And thank you for LOVING my SS I'm very much happy😳


I agree on this.. Raglak track was shown very fast..
I was hoping of some jealousy scene but Alas..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am going to sound like broken record but I really like your writing style. I always end up feeling curious about what next and you portray emotions well. I am looking forward to how this unveils. I am really tired on how the show is progressing and how many characters are destroyed so I am staying away from both swasan and raglan these days ...i hope I can see tevar as a couple in one of the shows. Would love to see these beautiful stories come to screen.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Nice update thank you

Aww poor Ragini feel sorry for get

Wonder what happened and why Sanskar left Ragini

It's nice Ragini is being strong and trying to make her mum happy

Can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: foresight

I am going to sound like broken record but I really like your writing style. I always end up feeling curious about what next and you portray emotions well. I am looking forward to how this unveils. I am really tired on how the show is progressing and how many characters are destroyed so I am staying away from both swasan and raglan these days ...i hope I can see tevar as a couple in one of the shows. Would love to see these beautiful stories come to screen.


Oh you are so sweet thank you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4-
The guest begin to go, just some guest was here. They were also going but stay to talk with Shekhar. Shekhar is the best business tycoon in the world so every partner want Ragini to be their bahu. Shekhar refuse, and they leave. Just Swara, Sanskar, Veer, Ragini, Janki, Dada-Dadi and Shekhar was here. Shekhar come to Janki who was talking to Swara.

Shekhar- What happened here? Janki how can you talk with her?

Janki- Shekhar Ragini, herself told me to talk with her

Shekhar- And you agreed? How?

Swara- Uncle pl...

Shekhar- Shut up, I'm talking to my wife, I prefer you stay out of this

Janki- Shekhar please she is pregnant

Shekhar- She can died too I will not bothered.

Ragini come and said- Dad don't talk like this, it don't suit you.

Shekhar- So what I can do? You are my princess I cannot see you unhappy! And you are like this due to them ( pointing to Swara and Sanskar)
Veer sees all this and think- What happened now? Why they are rude with them? I also saw Ragini seeing every time Sanskar, and was sad? What happened between the three?

Ragini- Dad I know you are hurt because deep inside you, you love Swara. After all you brought her up. You and mama still love Swara but don't forgive her. You two don't want forgive her because of me. I know that's why I told mama to forgive Swara and move on. You all want me to move on, but why you two don't? If you are not happy I will not be happy. I know you all love Swara even you Dadi, still you behave coldly with her. Whatever happened in the past should be in the past. You all told me to forget my past, and live my present, I will do that if you all forgive her.

Swara was crying, she think- Ragini after what did to you, you still want me happy. I ashamed to be called your best friend and sister too. I know you still care for me, I can read in your eyes. I will make everything fine don't worry.

Shekhar- And you forgive her?

Ragini was tensed, but then reply- Swara don't need me, but need both her parent. Dad you took a promise from mausa ji that you will keep Swara happy every time, you won't let any tears come in her eyes, so why are you behaving like this?

Shekhar- You are right Ragini, I keep a promise but if my princess was suffering I cannot. I know I'm selfish, but it's about my daughter's life.

Ragini- Dad watch my eyes and tell me are you happy being away from Swara? Why you and Mausa ji keep our name Ragini and Swara?

Shekhar- Because we want you to be inseparable like us, like your mom and her sister.

Ragini- You see, five years back I was going to Australia and Swara married, we were apart, and now when I come back she return. I will not lied to you, I don't know when I will forgive them, but papa you should do your duties toward her. And I know you don't talk to DP uncle, papa he is your best friend too, you shouldn't turn your back to him. He was not at fault.

Everyone was crying, except Veer because he try to understand what happened to Ragini, Swara and Sanskar.

Shekhar- My princess grew up and understand me so well. I don't know what I have done to my previous life For giving me you like a blessing.

Ragini- I know that's why I called DP uncle see ( pointing toward the entrance)
DP and AP was here, and hear everything. DP think- Ragini bete, today you confirm why I choose you for Sanskar, but destiny want else.
DP and AP come to Ragini and Ragini bend down.

DP hug her and said- How much I miss you bete, I missed your daily talk, your special tea at afternoon, and your hug.

Ragini- I missed you too partner.

AP cough and say- I'm also here

Ragini- How can you think I will forget you, MRS teacher?

AP- Don't talk to me, in these 5 years you didn't call me to see if I'm fine or dead.

Ragini- Teacher don't say that, you have to see your grand children before leaving us.
Remembering children Ragini have some tears in her eyes. AP hug her and understand her pain, but she cannot do anything, she herself is helpless.

DP come to Shekhar and hug him. Shekhar said- I'm sorry DP
DP- Don't be, I think I will do the same, but yaar you took long to realize your mistake! Sometime, I think to do some acting to see if you will come to see me or not.
Everyone laugh. They talk with each other for some time, then Ragini goes upstair. Sanskar follow her. Ragini is in her terrace and was crying. Sanskar hold her shoulder and she understand that it's Sanskar.

Ragini- Sanskar you should leave

Sanskar- How do you know it's me?

Ragini- because I know your touch

Sanskar turn Ragini toward him and wipe her tears, but Ragini shove his hand and said- Why are wiping them when you are the reason of them.

Sanskar- I know I did a mistake, but kab tak tum naraaz rahogi?

Ragini- Naraaz nahi Sanskar, Nafrat, main tudjse nafrat karte hai. Main tumse bohot nafrat karte hoon, bohot. You have no idea kitni nafrat main tudjse.

Sanskar have tears in his eyes, Ragini was in pain seeing Sanskar like this. Sanskar said- Phir be, main har din main tume sorry bolonga, jab tak tum mudje maaf karogi nahi.

Ragini- Why Sanskar? Why now? You should live a happy married life now.

Sanskar- Some time we see what we want

Ragini- What do you mean by that?

Sanskar just smile and said- One day, I will not be there for you

Ragini trying to not crying but fail at this attempt- No sanskar, you have to live for your children and Swara. I know how it feel to loose someone, I do'nt want your baby feel the same nor Swara. Main manti hoon ki main aap dono se nafrat hain, lekin uss massoom bacche nahi.
Ragini and Sanskar sees each other. They feel happy to be near, and at the same time sad to be far from each other.

Ragini wipe her tears and goes out. Someone sees all this, this is Veer and think- What Sanskar have done to Ragini so that she hate her this much? I have to find out. I will ask Ragini tonight.

He saw Sanskar coming toward him and he hide. Sanskar goes down, and finally Maheswari family goes their home. Ragini was talking with AP and DP but ignore Swara.

She think- There was a time when you could not do anything without me. Everything change because of me. I'm sorry Ragini.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Really nice update aww Ragini is still in pain poor girl
I hope we find out how Sanskar and Swara got married soon
Aww Ragini is happy to see AP and DP that's good
Can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: rbb1

Really nice update aww Ragini is still in pain poor girl
I hope we find out how Sanskar and Swara got married soon
Aww Ragini is happy to see AP and DP that's good
Can't wait for the next part


Hum I think I will not disclose the past so soon lol I'm enjoying this mystery so much 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Are you trying to kill Sanskar.. 😭
Oh no.. I want Ragsan at the end..
But I know whatever you are thinking will be good..
Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: wayback

Are you trying to kill Sanskar.. 😭
Oh no.. I want Ragsan at the end..
But I know whatever you are thinking will be good..
Waiting for the next update


Keep reading you will see I kill him or not :p
Will post soon :)

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