Ragsan Sajan maine tumse pyaar - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome starting from prologue to chapter one its amazing waiting for part 2 hey can u pm too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting..
I am always a RagSan/TeVar fan...

waiting for next
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HELLO PEOPLE 😊 I'm back with the next chapter and sorry for the mistake because I don't have internet at home, so I have to write with my phone and it's very difficult, for not saying hard lol! So Enjoy
And Yes Jhanki is played by Daljeet Kaur :)

If you want me to PM you send me buddy request so that I can tell you when the next chapter is update!

Chapter 2:

Next day, Ragini was awake all the night, she cannot sleep, because she was thinking about her past and her future. So when the sun wake up she go to have a bath and come down. Her mom was already awake, and she was surprise to see Ragini so early!

Jhanki- Good morning Laado, Kyon tum jaldi uth rahe hai?

Ragini- I think it's the jet lag ( Trying to be normal)

Jhanki- Tum mano ya na mano, main tumhari ma hoon, aur main tum achi se pata hai! Kya hua?

Ragini- Ma, aap pata hai ki main comfortable nahi hai! I still cannot move on! Yesterday night I see Sanskar and Swara hugging each other that's why, I'm sad!

Jhanki stop her work and come to Ragini- Laado, tu mere bahadur beti hai! Tu to meri jaisi hai, I cannot let someone sad, What you have done in the past, was the best thing, and what they have done to you was not right. You know when you decide to go in Australia, my heart was bleeding! I have lost a-one daughter, and with your departure I feeling that I have lost my other daughter! After your leave, I was not in touch with Swara, I was angry at her, but I have to make her bidai. I make all my duty toward her, and I will also make yours! Stop living in the past, you are beautiful, smart! You will find someone who will love you a lot.

Ragini- Ma, mudje yeh sab nahi chahiye! Aab main pyaar vishwas nahi hai aur nahi dosti bhi! Love just give you pain, and friendship give you betrayal.

Jhanki- You have to marry one day

Ragini- Yes, I will

Jhanki smile, Ragini continue- but it will just be a compromise! I loved once and will never do this again! Jhanki smile vanish and Shekhar enter and hears everything. Ragini goes out the Kitchen, tears full in her eyes.

Shekhar- Don't know why God did all this to her! My princess are a good heart person, she always smile even when she is sad, and today she has just tears!

Jhanki- Do you think it's a good idea to invite Swara?

Shekhar- If she have some brains she will not come. And I hope to not cross her too

Jhanki- Shekhar she is your daughter!

Shekhar- Nahi, she was not anymore! The day she took the happiness of my princess , this day she was dead for me!

Jhanki- You won't forgive her?

Shekhar- You forgive her?

Jhanki was silent but then reply- At least I talk to her

Shekhar- Because she is...

Before Shekhar could complete his sentence Ragini come and they stop talking!

Ragini- Dad you awake this time?

Shekhar kiss his daughter- Kyon, my princess don't sleep all the night, you think your papa will sleep?

Ragini- Papa don't do this, your health will deteriorate!

Shekhar- and you can? Don't you think how I feel when I see you crying like this? Sometimes I think I should send you back to Australia, maybe there you will stop crying!

Ragini hugging her dad- Nahi papa I will stop crying! Don't worry

Dada come- Yeh kya kiya tu nai Shekhar? Tum meri Rajkumari roya tha?

Shekhar- Nahi dad

Dada- Rajkumari don't dare to cry again! Tum meri takat hai, iss ghar kha roshni hai, nahi tum iss ghar ka devi hai! Dekh tum ayi aur tumhara dadi theek gayi. So don't dare to cry again!

Ragini- Dadu, aapki Rajkumari devi nahi hai, insaan hai wo, and shaitan bhi

Dada- Nahi meri Rajkumari shaitan nahi hai, bilkul unki ma ki tarah, unki dadu ki tarah

A voice came behind dada- Hay buddhe, meri Laado aapki tarah nahi hai, meri tarah jaisi hai, bilkul smart, and sushil hai wo.

Dada- Main buddhe? Mudje nahi patata ki aap smart ho, sushil ho?

Dadi- Haan buddhe! Main smart hoon, issilye maine aapki shaadi haan kardi ya!

Everyone laugh even Ragini, all was happy finally Ragini was smiling genuinely.

Ragini- Dadi Aap haram chahiye, aap kyo uth gayi subha subha?

Dadi- Maine sunna ki iss ghar main ek pooja hai, issilye, main ek puja miss nahi chahiye

Ragini- Haan devi ma, mudje pata ki aap bilkul passand nahi hai puja miss kare. Chalo, aap mere saath chale, you will guide me to make prasad!

Ragini go with Dadi and make all the prasad! After that she prepare herself into a traditional wearing! She wear a beautiful royal blue and white color anarkali.
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When she get down all guest was already here. Sanskar was here too, and he sees Ragini coming down and was lost in her. He think- How beautiful you are Ragini
Ragini who was passing tell him- Thank you
Ragini and Sanskar was shocked. Still Ragini can read in Sanskar eyes, it was awkward for them, the two have tears in their eyes. Ragini rushed to her dad and mom, but then Ragini eyes the entrance and was dazed to see Swara here. Yet she behave like nothing, and Jhanki hesitate to go to Swara, but Shekhar goes to Swara and Ragini sees that her dad was saying something to her, and she has tears in her eyes.

Shekhar- You have the dare to came here, when Ragini is here too? You don't have messed up her life much?

Swara- Dad Uncle...

Shekhar taking her arms with so much force that she hiss in pain- Don't dare to call me dad, whatever you have done to Ragini, I won't forgive you! I still tolerate you because your are Jhanki sister and my best friend's daughter! If not for them, I will have ruin you and your family!

Ragini was seeing all this and want to interfere when she sees Sanskar coming toward them, she goes to them too.

Sanskar- Dad... I mean Uncle you cannot see that she is pregnant, behave nicely with her! At least not for her, but for the baby she carried.

Ragini finally sees her baby bump, and was crying, and think- It must be Sanskar child! Swara and Sanskar sees Ragini crying, and Swara was about to come to Ragini, but Ragini say

Ragini- Swara I don't want to hurt you, please stay away from me! Dad come Puja will start.

Shekhar nod and goes and Ragini too was about to go but Swara stop her- Laado, I'm happy to see you again

Ragini- This name is just for my family not stranger! Next time don't call me like that

Sanskar- Ragini rukko

Ragini without turning say- Congratulation for you both! I hope you will give this children a good value like not to betray someone whom you love, or not to be a double face person.
Ragini goes and the three have tears in their eyes. The puja start and Sanskar was watching Ragini. Ragini sense that and look at Sanskar. Swara was praying but he was looking at Ragini. Ragini sees pain in his eyes, and Sanskar too sees hurt in the eyes of Ragini. Ragini look at Swara's stomach, and Ragsan think about the past

Flasback-

Ragini was in Sanskar room and hugging him.
Sanskar- Kya hua Ragini? Today you are very romantic!

Ragini- Sans you know I cannot wait to be your wife

Sanskar kiss Ragini's forhead - Why?

Ragini stop hugging Sanskar and begin to be shy- Nothing

Sanskar- You won't tell me?

Ragini- You know today when I see your sister Parineeta's child, when I took him in my arms, I cannot tell you how I was happy! I was feeling something I don't know how to describe you this feeling!

Sanskar- hum...

Ragini- You listen to me?

Sanskar- hum..

Ragini shaking him- SANSKAR!

Sanskar- Haan Ragini

Ragini- You listen to me?

Sanskar- Haan

Ragini- Toh? What I have told you?

Sanskar hugging Ragini- You said that you want a child

Ragini hit him and stop hugging him- I never said that! I just say that when I took the child I was feeling something

Sanskar hugging her again- Yes it's call motherhood! You want a child!

Ragini- Hum maybe you are right

Sanskar- BTW I don't mind we can begin with our suhaagraat!

Ragini- SANSKAR?! Don't you have some shame?

Sanskar- I was joking yaar! But yes I want a girl just like you

Ragini- NO I want a boy just like you

Voices- And we want a boy and girl just like you two

RAgini stood up being shy and looking down. Sanskar too look down and then DP enter

DP- So my would be daughter said she want to be a mother?

AP- Haan ji, you heard that?

DP- Haan I heard that, I didn't know my daughter will be eager to have a children! I won't mind because I'm old I want my grand children, but they won't give me this quickly! ( saying with a sad voice)

Ragini- Kyon papa? Why I cannot give you ( Ragini stop before uttering another work because she is shy)

DP- Haan this pandit ji told us a date for your engagement!

Sanskar- That's a good news dad, why are you so sad?

DP- Not a good news Sanskar beta

Sanskar and Ragini look at each other and they are scared. AP and DP suppress they laugh seeing their face

DP- Pandit ji told us

Sanskar/ Ragini- Kya?

DP- That

Sanskar- That?

DP- the engagement are

Sanskar- tell us Dad you are scaring me

Dad- in next three months

Ragini/ Sanskar- What three months?

Dad- Haan three months

Sanskar- Dad call another pandit, maybe he don't see clearly

DP and AP laugh and then AP say- We are just joking beta, your engagement is in 1 month! We have to call Jhanki and Shekhar ji to tell them the news and after that your parents can fixe a date for the wedding! I cannot wait too, to have you as my bahu.

Ragsan touch AP and DP feet, and then hug them. AP and DP get out the room, and Sanskar hug Ragini- I'm so happy, finally we'll married.
Ragini too hug Sanskar- Yes finally I cannot wait

Sanskar with a naughty smile- Haan you cannot wait our suhaagraat?

Ragini- nahi, I cannot wait to have you as my husband! You know I love you so much, and being away from you is hard for me! I want to be your friend, your wife, your confident, the mother of your child!

Sanskar- And will be glad to be your husband, and you will make me proud if you are the mother of my child! I love you Ragini, I love you so much.
Sanskar kiss Ragini on her lips. The kiss turn into a passionate one. Sanskar was losing his control but Ragini stop and said- You have to wait our Suhaagraat Sans

Sanskar taking gradually is breath- Can I ask you a question?

Ragini nod

Sanskar- Why you always call me Sans?

Ragini- Because your are my sans, my breath, my life! Without you I'm nothing, if you are not around me, I'm sad! When you are with me, I powerful.

Sanskar has tears in his eyes and say- I don't know why you love me this much Ragini?

Ragini- I don't know too, but I love you! I know I cannot live without you

Sanskar- If I died

Ragini- Don't dare to say that, if by mischance you died, in this house two corpse will go! Like I said before, your are my breath, I cannot live without my breath!

Sanskar was touch by her word, then continue with the last topic
Sanskar- So mother of my child, You have to give me before a girl! Because girls are papa's princess

Ragini- And boy mama's rajkumar

Flashback end

Ragini was crying remembering the past, Sanskar have tears, but then Ragini think- Ragini don't think about the past, now Swara is pregnant with Sanskar child! You have to move on, try to move on!

Ragini shut her eyes and pray- Bhagwan, I don't know you make my life like a joke, and I won't complaint but please make me strong, and give me the strength to move on. I cannot ask you my love back but please make them happy, and this child too.

Sanskar too pray- God, I never believe on you, but Ragini does, so make her happy! I cannot see in pain. I know I'm her culprit, but make her smile again! I ask you to give her love back! I want to see the old Ragini, even if I know I killed her years before.
The puja end and Ragini was talking with some guest when someone put a hand on her eyes. Ragini turn around and was happy! She was smiling at the person and hugging him too
Sanskar sees that and was jealous seeing this!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice update aww poor Ragini she is in pain can't wait to see who is the person she is happy to see

Janki is so sweet she is being nice to everyone

Dada and dadi are cute like their realtionship

Please post he next part soon thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Is that guy by any chance Laksh. ??
I still don't think Sanskar cheated her.
He looks so deeply in love with Ragini.
Very beautifully written dear.
Was eagerly waiting for this update.
Pls do update soon.
And Sans .. Beautifully described ...

Amazing update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so if sanskar and ragini love each other so much...what happened? you said ragini think this is sanskar's child...isnt it? they are married for 5 years right? why did sanskar marry swara if he really loved ragini so much? beautiful story and beautiful writing btw. really good one. waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such an interesting story plz add me to pm! Can't wait for more!!!
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Chapter 3:
The puja end, and Ragini discuss with one their guest, when someone hug her from the back. Ragini turn around and was happy to see the person. Sanskar sees that and is very jealous

Ragini- Oh my God, who is this handsome boy? Dad do you know him?

Sanskar think- Ragini how can you see someone else handsome?

Person- Hey Rags thank you very much for this compliment because you don't compliment often, and you don't know me? Should I tell your dad what happened one week back?

Ragini eyes pop up and then said- I will kill you if you do that Veer!

Janki- Laado, you won't introduce me your friend?

Veer- Aunty Ji I will introduce myself to you! I'm Veer Kapoor, student of the law, and Ragini classmate too. And yes, we are neighbor, and colleague too.

Janki- Laado you didn't tell me that you have such a handsome friend

Shekhar- What do you mean by that Janki, I'm not handsome for you? Veer I won't spare you

Veer- Hey chill don't fight over me!

Janki- Ji you know him?

Shekhar- Haan when I was visiting Laado, I saw him, and he is very friendly. He keep my Laado happy in these 5 years

Sanskar heard that and was hurt, but happy that Ragini find someone who love her. Swara saw all this, and keep a hand on Sanskar reassuring him. Ragini sees that and was hurt.

Veer- Aunty, are you sure you are Ragini's mom?

Ragini- Do you have a doubt on that? Cannot you see that I'm beautiful like her?

Veer- Ha I can tell that your mom is beautiful, but you ? No way

Ragini- Veer ki bacche

Veer hide behind Janki- Aunty please bacchao mudje, yeh Laadki bohot katarnak hai

Janki- Aap dono yeh bacchpani katam kidjie, we have guest in house, see how they are looking at us.

Veer at loud- Let them see, they will know how to have some fun!
Everyone laugh and Veer spot Swara and Sanskar, and come to them. Sanskar was already furious and Ragini see that.

Veer- I think I already seen you somewhere? Haaan you are Sanskar MAHESWARI, I read an article on you. You are a very interesting person, you was top of your year, and have the best result in India.
You know Ragini too is the best student in our campus. In these five years she won every competition, and was top on her promotion. I must say you and Ragini can be a perfect couple.
Everyone was shocked. Veer don't know what he said and continue ( pointing to Swara) I may know who you are beautiful lady?
Before Swara reply Veer, Ragini come and said- Beccharam laadka, you won't change hai na? Always flirting with random girl.
Swara was hurt to be called random girl, but doesn't said anything. Ragini pointing toward Swara stomach, sindoor, and mangalsutra said- She is your Sanskar Maheswari wife.

Veer was shocked and said- I didn't read that. On the article it's said that he was still single. But never mind, you have a beautiful wife Mr MAHESWARI.
Ragini look at Sanskar, and he reply- Thank you Veer

Shekar seeing all this think of something, then talk with Janki.

Shekar- Don't you think this Veer are perfect for our Ragini?

Janki- Ji but ?

Shekar- What but?

Janki- Ragini said she won't marry now

Shekar- Tonight talk with her, I will also talk with her

Janki nod, and Sanskar hear everything and think- Why I'm sad when I want her be happy? Why I'm jealous of that Veer? I know Ragini don't love him, but seeing them together, I'm afraid. Maybe it's my punishment for not keep my promise to her.

Swara try to come to Ragini, but she don't get any chance. Every time she is with someone, she sees Janki and come to her.

Swara- Janki ma, I'm...

Janki trying to be calm- Kya hua Swara?

Swara- At least you talk to me

Janki- Even if I don't want, I have keep a promise toward my jiji and I won't break it. So what do you want?

Swara- I want to thanks you for inviting us.

Janki- That's all

Swara- Nahi, I'm happy that Ragini is here, and I'm happy that she is happy

Janki- At least she can act to be happy.

Swara- Act?

Janki- Yes, I don't know why I have invite you and Sanskar, because of you two she is unhappy. You know Swara I never differentiate you two, I always give you two the same love, the same education. So why you have snatch my Laado's happiness? Why you have snatch her smiles and replace with tears? I cannot choose between you two, but with your doing you make me ashamed toward my sister. Janki was crying, Swara too, Ragini sees all this and come to her mom

Ragini- Ma why are you crying? You, yourself said na, past is the past. Forget all this and forgive Swara. I know you love her, don't do this with you

Janki- How can you think I will forgive her?

Ragini- Because I'm saying ma, see Swara is pregnant she need you more than me. She need her mom, and you are her mom.

Janki- Laado are you sure?

Ragini nod positively, and Swara was happy. Janki hug Swara, and goes. Ragini too was going but Swara stop her- Laa... Ragini thank you very much, I will never forget this. This means you forgive me too? She ask hopefully

Ragini turn around and then said looking in her eyes- I'm not forgiving you Mrs MAHESWARI, and never will! I did all this for my mom, I know she love you, I can be selfish. I cannot see my mom suffering. I'm not like you who snatch everyone happiness. So keep that in your mind, I'm not forgiving you, not today nor tomorrow.
Ragini goes away, Sanskar was behind Ragini and hear everything. He was happy to see that Ragini have not change, but sad too because two was unhappy, and he cannot do anything.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely it was..
I loved it..

I am loving this SS..
It makes me love Ragsan more..
I hope the Tevar work together some day as a couple.. It would be my dream come true..
But for now.. In SR.. I only want Swasan.. and Raglak

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