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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#81

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Hi Nimmi,

My trio are back and let me first party there reunion. I know it was implied they were in touch all along but i get to read it now. so i am going to keep celebrating it .🥳

Poor Maddy. Swara is on a mission and she wont relent 😆. Loved there whole conversation where swara asked about the girl and even settled for a boy since he is family and the awesome part was Sanskar wanted a sister now😆, he got a lovely fiancee , a brother , a friend , a dida and now he wants a sister. When will he want a son or daughter.

I am thankful Swara was understanding or else it would have been hard on Mav . Bozo is also here ,happy to see him. Mav and him are friends now. ⭐️

The group of four discussion on how to deal with Mav love story was too good, especially Sanskar conversation starter and him saying he is not a good kidnapper neither is Mav .Well only awesome Assassins then got it. 😎

That girl misses him too. Well wait for him ,he is with is family will come soon😆 and you need to become part of the family as Gabreil needs a sister 😉and Mav is fallen in love with you.Wait for it Maverick the Assassin is on his way.😃

Awesome update Nimmi..I loved it ..Sorry for the late Unres..Love ya ..

Love,

Nita

Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago

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AditiPant

@AditiPant

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Damn...man this is sooo much good...I know many may hate me for saying this but I think Maddy's love story is gonna be better than Angel and Kitten's...

The dialogues were so hilarious I was actually laughing instead of feeling pity for Maddy... You are really great nimmi

And bozo's back...yay the young family is back together... And also the description Maddy gave of the girl was utterly amazing... Drugie...alcoholic and happy in the life of hers...

And shivani is also feeling the absence of Maddy...something's happening...does she even know that somewhere in daman, four people are having such a 'deep' conversation on her??? :P:P

And swara was suggesting of kidnapping shivani and sending her to rehab??? Seems like she's the one becoming a bad girl now...the expressions of maddy, swara and bozo were so comical...then their utterly hilarious dialogues... Damn

And sanskar is a free lance travel photographer now...that too an ace one...he has to be a perfectionist in every field he goes...and their life's good...and happy...waiting for Maddy's life to be the same with shivani...

Hope Maddy somehow gains courage now and talks to shivani...taking beer as a present for her...:P:P...hopefully he'll get a positive response...

The chapter was fab...really hilarious and epic...and LOLish...and ROFLish...etc etc

Update the next one soon...till then love ya, tc and keep it up dear

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Olivia12

@Olivia12

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Hello dear,
Finally Angel and Kitten made their entry, was missing them...

You had me in fits of laughter from d word go, Swara's concluding "it must b a guy"
and then consoling Maddy after learning truth, Sanskaar's HELP are just few of
my favourites...

So Maddy's gal is falling for him too, interesting...

You took care of practical matter of their jobs nicely as Sanskaar is retired from her previous one
and Swara is busy in other ways...

You were again your charming self, waiting for next instalment of this good boy-bad girl love story
Loads of love

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svg98

@svg98

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Amazing update.. So cute Maddy yarr..cant believe he fell in love with a girl like that..but he is so so cute.. The girl must have faced something which made her like what she is..It was so beautiful to have him watching her for a week..and then he didnt come the next day..the girl was missing..she surely has started having feelings for him..Maddy looks at her in a so beautiful way..anybody would fall in love with him.. Sanskar and Swara was so awesome.. i thought after angel i m so going to miss them..but you have included them in this is like a double treat.. Bozo is still afraid of Sanskar's driving.. that part was so hilarious..he and Maddy have become best friends..amazing cant believe they are big one family..The way Sanskar tells Maddy how Swara gets her work done..was speechless..i couldn't stop laughing.. Surely something or the other will make Maddy to go the the girl and talk to him..

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Kiara.25

@Kiara.25

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

So a marvelous start again...poor maddy😭😭

Serves him right..in his case karma is a bit*h...😕😕

The magnificent heart fall for a girl so wrong..🤣.seriously after her maddy looks like a angel in whole white...😉😉

Nimmi🤗

Do you know you are awesome???

Then let me remind you that you are...

This sequel is a treat.👏👏

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Hello ..I am here🤗🤗

Oh god nimmi , thats such a an funfilled update ..you totally cracked me up gal ..I love your comic sense..its so bang on 👏⭐️👍🏼

Reading this was soo so fun ..Karma Maddy karma😆🤣🤣 i totally loved the satrt when maddy declares theres no girl and swara thinking its guy ..and maddy giving those looks😆😆 but finally he had to give in ..smart sanky tricked him using the name of his kiteen but yes a ceratin swara bose is totally capable of doing that 😆 and swara's theory oF bad by good girl and giving gyaan ..🤣 but sanky was right on point that shivani( Thats the maddys' gals name right) should be ready to leave that her world of hers

and nimmo ..a big big hug still giving us those Snippets of angel and KITTEN ..I miss them😭😭 and whoa..sanky is an freelance photographer and his cute cute reason ..hayee My darlin ..😳 swara, freelance journo ..awesome duo our darlins are and yay ..BOZO ..I totally love him and this line

Her ideas tend to be treacherous, perilous and absolutely horrible not to mention immensely risky for life and limbs."

🤣🤣.

he has got some real time experience in this case na😆 and his statement on AK 's love being

contagious .and maddys glaring statement😆 nad his reaction on knowing his girl is druggie ..lol..teeno ke teeno dramebaaz..mourning🤣 and bozo's Is there anything I could do for you?".

.god ..I would die laughing ..and then sanky giving them an practical insight and this part

Talk about what?" Maddy had to ask.

"Why don't you talk about on going rates of hashish, heroin, ganja, cocaine? I've got good quality beer in the cabinet. Take it to her as a gift. And.."

🤣🤣

and destiny comes into picture again ..

whoa that was hell lot of fun darlin.. super duper awesome update ra..👏👏

Love

Lucky

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

I told you, I knew it!

Sanskaar is going to have his time! Through Maddy!

Ohh too much fun! For me & Sanskaar!

"This is what love does to a man. Now this brat would know what Sanskaar went through when love happened to him. Maddy pitched his tent on moral know-it-all high ground right! Now Sanskaar will watch that younger man flounder and flop around helplessly when he is being swept by a tide called love. And Sanskaar is going to have time of his life. At Maddy's expense.

Oh! How he loves Karma!"

Buhahaha! Karma Maddy Karma!

Ohh how much I'm ROFLMoying!

Btw what a superb chapter!

So much Sanskaar-Swara/Angel-Kitten 😳

And their little sweet but dramebaaz family 😆

Sanskaar-Swara with Maddy & Bozo!

And their conversation! Hilarious!

After Swara & Bozo's reassurance Maddy was lil relieved BUT then Sanskaar happened 😃

The only practical among these impractical clan!

And his idea of initiating conversation with that girl 😲

"Talk about what?" Maddy had to ask.

"Why don't you talk about on going rates of hashish, heroin, ganja, cocaine? I've got good quality beer in the cabinet. Take it to her as a gift. And.."

Idea of the century!!!

God, Nimmi I can't stop laughing 😆

PS: Nimmi you again missed PM me 😭

Edited by Nupur_5 - 9 years ago

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Supriya

@smnsupp

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!😆😆😆😆
I Mean That Was Sooo Epiccc!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏
Loved Angel's Dialouges!!!😆😆😉
Seriously Maddy Accussing Swasan 4 spreading their luvsickness!😃
The entire convo from Angel warning Maddy to the end was soo perfectly written👏👏👏👏👏
I really could'nt stop laughing the entire part!!!!!!!!!
AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!!😊😊
WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE😃😃😃
-SUPRIYA

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Prabhleen Arora

@7APK

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Wow!!!! Swara has her weapons and ammulations in disguise. ..
Maddy finally told his love story to Swara , Sanskar and Bozo. ...
Swara and Bozo are giving him tips. ...
But Sanskar is not helping at all...
Such a devil he is ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...😳