Vajra : An elven tale SwaSan chapter 13 page 52 Updated 21/5/16 - Page 101

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..

Originally posted by: lucky.m

saku🤗

Lucky🤗

well..every chapter that unfolds makes my pull towards vajra only stronger with so many concepts to linger upon and leaving you just wanting to read more

There could be no greater joy than hearing your writing is magnetic from a valied source. Thank you so much!

I loved this chapter in many aspects, esp the start of chapter with shoba penning down about desire to love and how you connected it towards end ..absolutely outstanding👏⭐️ , I loved those lines😳

I did want to try a different approach with the chapter, this one sort of reminded me the opening and closing we usually witness on episodes from English shows, they have a similar concept, of someone talking in the background relating to the happenings throughout the epi.

Witches and clans, rather intriguing and was aruna a witch??..😲

Aruna devi was not a witch in the wicked witch sense, but she was born of magical blood and did have powers of sort.

Now you make me love rivers too..*Sigh*.Well I am making a list ,god knows how many more are coming up, River Indra ??....the flow from three lands and change of its flow imbibing the characteristics of each land ..lady you are just awesome⭐️⭐️❤️

Ah, glad you loved my description of Indra. In fact I had visited a similar site in my childhood, tried to rebuild that memory...It was a soothing place, although not in elven realms. Thank you my lady

Is suvanna going to fall for laksh??ya she is just using those words to sooth her mind, still there's a bit of heart left in that poor girl, only if pratula was bit caring as father, she would have been other suvanna

Yes, Suvanna is indeed falling for Lakshya, she sees similarities to herself in him...that is first step to love in my opinion. I would never make it easy for RagLak will I? Oh yes, the blame lies with that poor excuse for a father Suvanna had. She was otherwise a wonderful child.

well now parineeta and adarsh ??..one doubt saku, the whole cruise is booked for wedding of whom, pari & sanky ??😲😲 and why is sanky funding pari's dad?

About Pari, I did promise I would reveal in chapter 12, but could not deal with the length that thing would then became. And on a different note, I don;t want to rush anything, so in 13 you will get an idea why.

and finally my fav part, I love when my darlins are in same frame, and I loved the illusion parts b/w swasan was well as aruna and sanskaar

I love them in the same frmae too😳 Thanks dear!

Y do I feel Sooner or Later sanskaar is also going to sanctify in Indra

Good guess!⭐️

saku ..I totally loved this part, Its like merger of so mant parts conected to each other moving towards unison ..I told this before but saying again I totally love your scrpting of scenes

Thank you so much. You have no idea how at ease you've put me by saying this. I'm very nervous about scripting in Vajra.

superb one ..totally loved it ..⭐️

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Hey Sakura!!!🤗 M so very sorry for such a late reply.. And even then i can't give a detailed one, been travelling... But what an uodate!!! Super!! I liked how you started with shobha's musing, wove it all through the chapter, and connected back to it... It almost felt like she is writing their story.. And about suvanna, today again i felt like she was the serial's misguided but far gone Ragini.. Nice touch there.. And lakshya, well, the triangle has started... All in all.. I loved it!!!!!! (As always😛) can't wait for the next update😃😃

Love,

Akshata😊

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

I think its A-Sanskaari madness, Saku my dear. 😊 😉

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Saku dear, i don't mind the nickname one bit, its actually endearing😃 And you and Viji, both are right.. It increased the Sanskari as well as A-sanskari madness.. Y'all are spoiling me for my future husband, poor me.. How m i ever gonna find him with this kind of a wishlist😛😛

Originally posted by: Sakura24

@Ahana,

Thank you so much for taking time even when you were busy. I will reply as soon as I can.

Love,

Sakura

Originally posted by: akanjli

Your replies are the parts I really look forward to read..Will be waiting..

P.S. Updating anytime soon ????😊

Originally posted by: Sakura24

We are all spoiling each other😆😳 How long is your wishlist BTW Akku? Mine is miles at the moment😛 And some are completely unreasonable as well😳