Vajra : An elven tale SwaSan chapter 13 page 52 Updated 21/5/16 - Page 100

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Thanks Akku (Don't mind my nickname😊) did it increase your 😊Sanskari madness?😉

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Oh yes, they do, don't they? 😳 You know, my poor Hubby is getting positively fed up of Sanskaar. 😆 All this while, he was very sanguine in his appreciation for Deepika Padukone & Priyanka Chopra---while being quite indulgent of my mild fangirling over Ranbir Kapoor and Rana Dagubatti (and for a time, Barun Sobti). But now he fumes silently (and sometimes not-so-silently) about Varun/ Sanskaar. 😆 😆

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

I think its A-Sanskaari madness, Saku my dear. 😊 😉

Originally posted by: prerulalli

Hey saku 🤗

Iam currently res-ing for this chapter as i hav a lot to share and lot to question 😊

Finally cruise chapter ...

Kinda busy with my studies as exams are approaching

will unres maybe next week

Thanks for the PM

Love,

Prerana😊

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res for 11 - and I yet have to unres for 10😭

Love,

Nyna

Unres

Dear Sakura,

Hi Nyna,

Another chapter and another fascinating read and more questions.

Hmm, I do hope it was intriguing, thank you😊

The painting that Swara hangs depicts the place where she had her first ''dream'? And that is the island of spirits - the very place where Suvana finally chose the dark power. But she is not too happy about it - she is actually scared by what she has done and the choice she has made (is there still a tiny chance for her redemption). And the memory she has, which she clings is that of Ragini and Lakshya (now that is a polygon - Lakshya wants Swara as would Sanskaar, Swara not able to choose, Ragini and Suvana falling for Lakshya - how many-sided figure is this) and Suvanna knows that Lakshya is the banished elven prince.

The basic truth of that scene where Shobha and swara discusses over the painting is that, the place she dreamed up is real. You're right about Suvanna, she is wise enough to know darkness is bad. This phase I imagine is like an addiction, you know most addicts do know intoxication is bad, but they just can't help it and surrender themselves to the pull, similar to Suvanna. I see hope there too.

Or it is a diamond, you know too many sided figure it is😉

Sanskaar and Pari - thank God it is a pretend marriage (I give up thinking the sides your polygon would have) And Pari is the very Dr. Agarwal's daughter, who wants to prove that Swara possesses supernatural powers- which Sanskaar does not want. To save her, he reveals himself to be an Oneiro. So Swara now knows that he is elven but still does not recognise him to be Yuvraj.

There would never be any romantic angle to Pari and Sanskar, though they does have a certain story to tell. I believe in developing many strong bonds of different aspects instead of focusing solo on one bond and over doing it. I hope you will find that approach not to complex to bear.

One last question - how come Lakshya does not recognise Sanskaar and the other way round or is it that they do but do not acknowledge.

I did answer this question in a separate post, so skipping it now😊

I simply love reading your chapters - I know I do not comment much on them but then what does one write about a master storyteller like yourself - you just weave magic with words.👏👏

Thank you, thank you, thank you * almost faints while blushing*

love,

Nyna

Re-edited: the word I wanted was Raconteur😊 - that is what you are

Geez, it's been sometime since I've heard something so tantalizing😳

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Res baby

Unres

Sakura dear...

Again super late..for chapter 11...😊

Words are less to describe ur skillfull talent n sheer brilliance...😃

Story is soo captivating now..suvanna has entered the dark path n now there is no turning back...🤢

swara an innocent soul..in this cunning world...is trying every effort to decipher things going on..but onlytime will reveal lot many things😳

lakshya fallen for swara..ragini falling for lakshya...loved how he try to controll her...as a friend...but things will get complicated soon...😭

Pari..so u introduced her...fake fiance of sanskaar..thank God fake...she seems nice...she loved adharsh..how she met him..???its a mystery???😉

Finally sansku...he is revealing himself to swara...not a brilliant move..but both have formed a bond of trust...loved last scene...shekhar n Dr.agarwal join hands..to discover swara's power...but failed...sansku has to reveal his onerio side...😃

Lines from shobha aunty books was great👏...no words...did u wrote that??or its inspired???😲

Loved

Talia

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Saku dear.. You know i am currently busy ..So wont be able to give me detailed comment now ..Will get back to you when my trip ends. Till then i just have to say the update was awesome as always and i didnt guess the last part at all, i was wondering why Sanskar took the risk when it risked Shekhar life as well... But i am wondering why is Sanskar not trying to meet with Lakshya till now..He is also on the Cruise right..Does he know Lakshys is with Swara or he just knows about Swara.. I know he knows Lakhya was with Swara during her stay in the elves land but wondering did he know that he came back to human realms with her or not..

Originally posted by: Vini224

Hi Sakura

Happy that your Wifi problem got fixed and you were able to update.

Savanna is tormented by what's she done and what she's become but still doesn't want to back out.

She's become pure evil but yet seems to have little bit of feelings left in her.Suvanna was feeling soothed by the words Laksh said to Ragini.Is Suvanna starting to have feelings for Laksh?

Wedding planning going on for Sanskar and Pari?😕Pari is not in love with Sanskar and is planning to elope with her BF but still...and how did they get into such a predicament .

So Sanskar cast an illusion to prevent Swara being exposed in front of Dr.Agarwal and that's why Shekar got hurt.And Swara will be hurt after knowing what Shekar did and that was the vision she had right when she touched Sanskar.

Didnt like that Swara is feeling grateful to Laksh even though he saved her father .And that Laksh had the nerve to say he did it for her🤢

Liked seeing Sanskar's care towards Swara even if he is not aware of it himself and thinking he is just fulfilling his duty to Annapoorna.

Love

Vini.