SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 50

Originally posted by: ishanita

Nita

Wow I love ur way of telling story and setting dynamics bw characters...really very natural...sanky as usual is SK so...😳😳

I love swara here so much and her imaginative power reminds me of a great show THATS SO RAVEN 😃😃 oh there also I luvd the central character and her tactic to save everyone jus lyk here .. ...

Ragini as usual is so #####😕😡

Shomi...melodramatic🤢

Ap...drives me crazy lhk hell.

But wud luv to see the changing physics chemistry and biology of swasan😳😉😛

Luv

Isha

Originally posted by: Sree8410

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Nita🤗

I guess you have started showering your love for Ragini and AP. Now I get why AP is Ragini's mother.😉 she and her ladoo's pyaar🤢. And what a reason to fall in love with Laksh. 😆 does the guy know about his lovely wife's intention to marry him? Jealousy has already creeped in, wonder what would be her reaction when she finds Laksh going all Lakshman for Sanskar.Since i wont be able to say sorry for the late reply i just give you lot of hugs instead🤗 🤗 . You already love Ragini and AP .Great to know. Well you cant just blame Ragini only , why do you think Lakshyaji fell in love with Ragini, it was love at first sight after all. It will be so much fun when Ragini finds out about lucky being cupid😈

Sujatha seems to be alright now. She will definitely love her son a bit more, it's understandable. But you have made it clear that even though she loves Laksh more her love for Sanskar is not any less. I always liked her except when she goes against Swara or start her bengali jaap, so here nothing of that sorts .She is alright for now😉

AP- I thought she slapped her daughter for her misdeeds but nope, she was worried about everything thing else other than the problems her daughter is creating.😡 I like this evil version of AP better that the one defending Ragini in the show.😆

Shomi is as always supportive. I like the way she tried to apologize for forcing a relationship on her daughter. Shomi is just like us ,who messes up and apologize and try to mend her relationship.

Swara I love her character in this one. She is not neglecting her family's fault in this forced relationship, but she chooses to forgive them for the sake of her mother. Loved it. This girl's imagination will land her in trouble for sure. Rather than clarifying for whom he bought the saree she chose to reject it upfront accusing him for gifting her something he bought for his ex. But I loved it. She herself declared her as his wife. Can i believe that in her heart some sort of feelings has started for her husband? And we got our first hug. Remember Janmastami in SR, we got a similar scene. She cries and leans to his chest and he consoles her.. For that scene to show that he will be will her no matter what, I love you 🤗 (my way of thanks😳)Happy to know you like Swara character arc, i cant have her saying it okay mom for everything but at the same time if she didnt forgive her family then it will not be like Swara😆. How can i not rememeber that hug, I am happy to know you liked that scene 🤗

That's it with the ladies. Now with the men.

Shekar -I'll not waste my energy on this one.😡 Me neither 😆

DP - like Sanlak did can we swap the father's for real? Swara as DP's daughter😳 seems like Sanskar and DP bonded well. Well DP understand one language and that is business so ofcouse they bonded well .😉

Laksh - does he even know what the hell he is doing? 😆 He has decided to play Cupid hope he doesn't end up messing his love story😆. Honeymoon trip for Swasan, really Lucky? They are still not at a place where they can start a relation and he wants them to go on honeymoon.🤪 but I was touched by his gesture of postponing his own trip to fix his brbrother's life. Good thing is that he literally force his bhai to praise his bhabi, informed his bhabi about his brother's likes and dislikes. Modern Lakshman, please stay like this...See lucky will remain being silly or else he will stop being lakshyaji😆 . What an idea right Honeymoon trip for SwaSan when he forced them to marry 😉. As i said he loves his brother probably more than anyone as he always been there for him, so his sacrifice was simple for him , i am not sure what his wife would think about it though😈.

Sanskar - I'm speechless. Where do I start? He clarified her doubt, asked Laksh not to force any more thing on Swara, supported her when she needed it the most without making it awkward for her, wants to put free her from this relation if thats what she wants, ate the food she made even though it brought back lot of sad memories... Perfect guy. She should consider herself lucky. Hope she does realise that soon. He is putting her feeling before his own, hope she sees that.He is perfect just that way i want him to be😆. Swara will not realize right away but slowly she will see what a gem of a person she got married too 😃

I loved it Nita❤️. Love you🤗 for taking the story in its own pace neither dragging nor rushing. Love you Sree 🤗. I was worried that you might feel the pace was too slow

So next chapter will be them discussing further course of their life. Mostly Swara explaining what she wanted to do with her life, I guess. I suppose his doubt on whether she wants to be in this relationship or not will also be clarified there. First step of understanding each other will start with chapter 6..Yep, you were right on your guesses😆

Now back to waiting and watching😉😳... Me back to try to write 😆 Love, Nita

Love

Sree.

Originally posted by: Vini224

Nita🤗

Love you for this long update. I love you this awesome comment too🤗

Sujatha seems very mellow and calm here not like the person in the show.

Very sensible and trying to do the best she can in the circumstances she has been placed.She is the only elder left and i dont want her to cause too much problem for SwaSan😆

Felt bad for Sanskar when Swara behaved rudely with him.The pressure of the day seems to have gotten to her badly but still.But Sanskar was awesome ,instead of getting angry he immedediately cleared her MU.Loved how he is standing by Swara and how he ate the kheer inspite of the memories attached to it.Hope Swara recognizes quickly what a favor fate has done to her.She will thank Lucky when she find about how lucky she was to get married to Sanskar 😆.

So delusional Ragini makes an appearance .She doesn't consider herself evil even though she suggested Swara to make the kheer knowing the history behind it.And AP is not mad at Ragini for her misdeeds but angry for family's name sake.What a mother daughter duo?. Wonder what they'll do next. Keep Guessing 😈

Loving 'Lucky the Cupid '.He postponed his honeymoon for his brothers sake.Hope Ragini doesn't get to know otherwise he's dead.Ragini will get to know or not the question of the century 😈.Happy to know you loving Lucky the cupid😊

Eagerly waiting to know about Swasan conversation about their future.

Hope they don't talk about divorce.Just can't take that.Too much of divorce talk in the show can make you feel like that , i understand 😊

Really sorry about the late unres,NitaAnd i am really sorry about the late reply too Vini🤗-Love ,Nita

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Originally posted by: foresight

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finally managed to read all chapters now. so so sorry it has taken be ages. i loved how you have been insightful in bringing out some areas which if they had been done/understood in the show would have been amazing.Come on Sapna, No sorry plz. I know you were busy and i am really happy that you took time to read mine. Well you know me and how much i hate certain things in the show like Swara being too forgiving and all, i try to find reasons to it so that will make it a little better, so keeping them the same i try to make them more insightful. Well atleast that what i think i am trying to do😆

first one is that laksh reprimand. sanskar realising that by protecting him, laksh wasnt learning. isn't that what has happened to a large extent in the show. everyone always gave into him, until they stopped one day and he was so used to it by then that he couldnt handle it. Yep the show made a mockery out of relations they support him one day , disown him the next day. That why he feel like they dont love him and all. Just trying to make sense of the show that an hard task indeed😆

the other thing that you picked up and showed really well here is ragini's insecurities and desire to get out of the rigid atmosphere at home. AP is exactly like dadi in the show and you have brought that normal and logical need from most people who go through such life very beautifully. Ragini fantasies of white knight and the reason she fell in love with the concept of love was because she wanted an escapte from her house. Yep instead of Dadi we have AP here..😈. I dont intend to make her full evil , i will never do that. I will try to justify her thought process too.

finally, shomi and her forcing swara emotionally into things. swara got into fake marriage and continued it for long because she wanted that family for the first time but also because shomi wanted it so bad. but here, i like how you have shown their confrontation. swara may forgive shomi, but it was good to see swara speak up and admit the reality here even if not in the show.Swara get to speak because it is me 😈, else it will be you dont need to say a word i totally understand . I know Swara forgave her family but casually forgetting it is an tough ask, so they need to let her speak up and break down too

i also like how you are slowly developing the relationship between swasan. also that this swara is lot more perception and accepting .Anything and everything to make Swara more perceptive😆

all in all really good updates all of them. waiting for the next one. 🤗... Thanks Sapna. I am happy to know you find it good 😃. Will try to start the next one soon. Once i finsih unres my post on others stories

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting..

Originally posted by: Chexa123

Hiii Nitaa...

Great work yaar...

Swasan were just fantastic...

Lakshya playing Cupid..😆...he even tore his honeymoon ticket for his brother...that was soo sweet...🥱

And Ragini being Ragini..🤢🤢

And what's with AP??🤢

And now swasan are finally gonna discuss about their married life...woww can' t wait for the next...

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