SWASAN OS: THE MORNING AFTER

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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

Cute...I -could- just -cuddle it sort of cute! I'm glad you wrote something like this dear, to light up the atmosphere as SwaSan journey through yet another dark storm thrown at them. Loved it.

Love,

Sakura

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome one 👏
I loved it

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Such a cute and romantic take on a blissfully newly wedded SwaSan- a sight we are all desperate for but only live out in FFs thanks to our excellent show! Really enjoyed the mix of humour interlaced with passion and as usual- Sujju makes the perfect entry (not) but certainly makes the perfect response. Love Sanskaar's chilled attitude even when almost caught in the act! 😆 Nicely written!

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piccola1

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Posted: 9 years ago

This was delicious...another lil interlude that fills my heart with contentment !

A big Thank You for it !🤗

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awww beautifully written...👏

Why every one enter room without knocking??? Ruined swasan perfect moment...🥺

But loved it...do write more...

Take care

Talia👍🏼

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Dear Akshata,

That was a delightful OS - dreamy, romantic with a tinge of humour.

Finally a beautiful blissful morning for our golden pair - and Swara is being decidedly unromantic - she even uses all the strength to yank the bedsheet and 'drop' Sanskaar on the floor😆 (though I am sure that Sanskaar would have preferred her to display her strength in other ways😉) Oh and the way he takes 'revenge', pinning her down on the carpet- which is the most (in)appropriate time for someone to walk in 😃

I did like your portrayal of Sujatha - insensitive to barge in without notice, scandalised at what she had interrupted but quick on her feet to give a fantastic exit line - ''agle baar - lock the door'

And finally the last line - '' a simple word, in a hardly serious situation...but they knew it carried the promise of a lifetime...together' simply profound

Do keep writing.

Love,

Nyna

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

This OS is like adrak chai with sooji waale rusks! Thanks so much.

Edited by soapbubble - 9 years ago

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taniks

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Posted: 9 years ago

Such cute story , really a pleasure to read some sweet romance off swasan .beautifully written

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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sakura24
Cute...I -could- just -cuddle it sort of cute! I'm glad you wrote something like this dear, to light up the atmosphere as SwaSan journey through yet another dark storm thrown at them. Loved it.
Love,
Sakura

Hi sakura!! M so very glad you liked this... You know how much I love your writings, so this means a lot🤗 Thank you dear..

Love,

Akshata😊

Edited by Krishnabhisarik - 9 years ago