SWASAN OS: THE MORNING AFTER - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: soapbubble

This OS is like adrak chai with sooji waale rusks! Thanks so much.

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Now that's a hatke comment... I dunno what to make of it🤪 I'm guessing it means yummy(?) and refreshing🤣 Pls correct me if I'm wrong😆 Thank you so much though, I'm sure it means something nice😎😃
Love,
Akshata😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you dear!!😃
Love,
Akshata😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: taniks

Such cute story , really a pleasure to read some sweet romance off swasan .beautifully written

Thank you so much🤗 I'm glad you liked it😃
Love,
Akshata😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Akshata sweetheart...🤗 🤗 🤗

My My...what a lovely morning after that was. 😳 I was literally walking around with a dreamy smile on my face after I read this!

It was cute yes, but more than that---you wrapped your readers in a warm cocoon of contentment, joy and bliss. Seeing our favorite couple so much in love and together, after so many trials and tribulations.

The highlight for me, was Swara giving a mighty heave to the bedsheet, and toppling her poor pati right off the edge!! Thank God for the soft carpet, or else poor Sanskaar would have got bruised. 😉

Sanskaar admiring his wife's hearty and innocent laughter was such a nice touch. This is what he always wanted to see, na? Swara being happy, completely, soul satisfyingly happy!

And that little romance between them, where Sanskaar pulls his wife to lie prone beneath him on the carpet...☺️ They were so lost in each other, I just KNEW someone would come and interrupt this incandescently beautiful moment. 😉 And it was Sujju! 😆 But the interruption was loads of fun too---we got to see Sujju being both sly and slightly embarrassed---the advice was too good--"Lock the door next time". 😉 I would think, given the predilection for the MM wasis to barge in to a married couples' room without knocking, at the slightest pretext, they better bolt the windows as well! 😆

Lovely blend of romance and humor. Do write more, dear!

Lots of Love,

---Viji

Vijiii🤗 Such sweet words Sadly, there are no kissy smileys here, gotta make do with❤️ Seriously, your comment made meThis OS was actually written for selfish motives, i desperately wanted a good healthy dose of swasan.. the OS is a result of this..😉 Glad i could wrap y'all in this fantasy too... Me too was hasing zor zor se while writing the tug-of-war scene.. Sansku is a Kelloggs man, strongest and smartest, isliye use kuch nahi hua😆 Sujju is totes adorbs here na?😉 And i guess you are right, SwaSan should definitely consider locking their windows too🤣 Thank you sooo much for the wonderful comment darling😃😃
Love,
Akshata😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24


I'm humbled at being considered so highly by you my dear... Seriously this was a delightful read. I hope you will write more in future 😊

You have earned it, sweetz👍🏼 Will surely write more..
Love,
Akshata😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: simsen23

This os is really beautiful. I would love to see this in actual show.lovely.

Keep writing
Love,
Simi😊

Thank you sooo much, Simi!!🤗
I too want this to happen in the show.. Glad you liked it!!
Love,
Akshata😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Danie

lovely moment of Swasan😳..it nice

Thank you Danie!! Glad you liked..😃
Love,
Akshata😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gayu6

Nice os. N sujatha she noted but she pretend to b lik she didn't see anytng and later she teased them😳

Thank you!!😃
Yes, sujju is a dear sometimes😉 Glad you liked it..
Love,
Akshata😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you Tara!!
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Akshata😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cute sweet and refreshing one thnx fr d pm.

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