Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Akshata sweetheart...🤗 🤗 🤗
My My...what a lovely morning after that was. 😳 I was literally walking around with a dreamy smile on my face after I read this!
It was cute yes, but more than that---you wrapped your readers in a warm cocoon of contentment, joy and bliss. Seeing our favorite couple so much in love and together, after so many trials and tribulations.
The highlight for me, was Swara giving a mighty heave to the bedsheet, and toppling her poor pati right off the edge!! Thank God for the soft carpet, or else poor Sanskaar would have got bruised. 😉
Sanskaar admiring his wife's hearty and innocent laughter was such a nice touch. This is what he always wanted to see, na? Swara being happy, completely, soul satisfyingly happy!
And that little romance between them, where Sanskaar pulls his wife to lie prone beneath him on the carpet...☺️ They were so lost in each other, I just KNEW someone would come and interrupt this incandescently beautiful moment. 😉 And it was Sujju! 😆 But the interruption was loads of fun too---we got to see Sujju being both sly and slightly embarrassed---the advice was too good--"Lock the door next time". 😉 I would think, given the predilection for the MM wasis to barge in to a married couples' room without knocking, at the slightest pretext, they better bolt the windows as well! 😆
Lovely blend of romance and humor. Do write more, dear!
Lots of Love,
---Viji