SWASAN OS: THE MORNING AFTER

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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Awesome one 👏
I loved it

Thanks Sujay!! Glad you liked it!!😃

Love,

Akshata😊

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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Such a cute and romantic take on a blissfully newly wedded SwaSan- a sight we are all desperate for but only live out in FFs thanks to our excellent show! Really enjoyed the mix of humour interlaced with passion and as usual- Sujju makes the perfect entry (not) but certainly makes the perfect response. Love Sanskaar's chilled attitude even when almost caught in the act! 😆 Nicely written!

Thank you so much!! Having read and loved your FFs, this comment means a lot...🤗 Sujju is, well, Sujju.. Rough but loving😆 And sanskar had to be chilled out afterall swara was totally sharam se paani paani.. And someone HAD to face Sujju😆 Anyways.. Glad you liked it..

Love,

Akshata😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Akshata sweetheart...🤗 🤗 🤗

My My...what a lovely morning after that was. 😳 I was literally walking around with a dreamy smile on my face after I read this!

It was cute yes, but more than that---you wrapped your readers in a warm cocoon of contentment, joy and bliss. Seeing our favorite couple so much in love and together, after so many trials and tribulations.

The highlight for me, was Swara giving a mighty heave to the bedsheet, and toppling her poor pati right off the edge!! Thank God for the soft carpet, or else poor Sanskaar would have got bruised. 😉

Sanskaar admiring his wife's hearty and innocent laughter was such a nice touch. This is what he always wanted to see, na? Swara being happy, completely, soul satisfyingly happy!

And that little romance between them, where Sanskaar pulls his wife to lie prone beneath him on the carpet...☺️ They were so lost in each other, I just KNEW someone would come and interrupt this incandescently beautiful moment. 😉 And it was Sujju! 😆 But the interruption was loads of fun too---we got to see Sujju being both sly and slightly embarrassed---the advice was too good--"Lock the door next time". 😉 I would think, given the predilection for the MM wasis to barge in to a married couples' room without knocking, at the slightest pretext, they better bolt the windows as well! 😆

Lovely blend of romance and humor. Do write more, dear!

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: piccola1
This was delicious...another lil interlude that fills my heart with contentment !
A big Thank You for it !🤗

A big thank you for the lovely comment🤗 Sooo glad you liked it this much😃

Love,

Akshata😊

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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Awww beautifully written...👏
Why every one enter room without knocking??? Ruined swasan perfect moment...🥺

But loved it...do write more...
Take care

Talia👍🏼

Hey Talia!! Thank you sooo much🤗 Kya kare, mmwasis ki aadat hai bina knock kare andar aana..😆 M glad you loved i though😃 You too take care😊

Love,

Akshata😊

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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
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Aaraaam se.. Take your time😛

Love,

Akshata😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Hi sakura!! M so very glad you liked this... You know how much I love your writings, so this means a lot🤗Thank you dear..
Love,
Akshata😊

I'm humbled at being considered so highly by you my dear... Seriously this was a delightful read. I hope you will write more in future 😊