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Posted: 9 years ago
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How are u now dear?? I hope you are much better... Coming to DK.. Shruti yaar.. Reading your work is such a treat!! The intense longing, walls of separation, sleepless nights, lack of hunger... How a mere mention of the other can warm their hearts..👏All the pining was supposed to be sad but the way you write it is strangely attractive, i can actually read it again😳 Bordering on masochism here😆 And pawan!! I just love this guy.. He is the only one supporting SwaSan and that too how😆😆 His and Uttara's chemistry was oh so cute😃😃 but the main punch was Swara's small payback🤣🤣 Too good!! Pawan shocked Swara rocked🤣
Coming to the best part.. Sanskar finally cannot stay away from Swara anymore.. Searching for her all over the palace like a deewana Finally cornering her in the stone building, drenched, with rain outside, followed by light teasing, harried heartbeats, incoherent thoughts, rising of passion... And.. Then...☺️ Aooo Maaayy Gawwdd!!! That moment i literally swooned It was quite something... Haaayeee!!😃 And the last part where Sanskar now partly knows why Swara is intent in runnin away from him and he is determined to win her over.. Wow!! No wonder my dil was all dhak dhak then
Aaannn.. The next chapter cannot come soon enough😛
Love,
Akshata😊
Edited by Krishnabhisarik - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Wow- that was so quick hon! 🤗😃


What can I say Sis? I'm as addicted to DK as you are😉

Hey thanks for clearing why he didn't climb the windows😳.
Edited by Sree8410 - 9 years ago
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Shru🤗🤗
It was awesome re . I loved it to bits and pieces ..That ache and agony of swara and sanskaar ..I could feel it ,like literally feel that pain of them,😭 the longing to see each other..💔

I love the way you script the scenes 👏⭐️👍🏼Like in this update started off with swara at fountain ..totally loved how you took your audience back and forth,spinning of the events which led to this and the continuation of sanskaar seeing her ..totally brilliant👏

Bless the rain ..bang on timing😆😉..

and my my ..Needless should I say ... ..indeed the kiss was like banquet for starved souls like us waiting for glimpses of swasan, so much of passion, desire, love, pain all poured into one blissful kiss 😳..I am gonna sleep in peace dreaming in la la land but yes after reading few more times ..yes I am besharam 😆😆 my thakri dimaag activated😆😆 thanks to you😉

And I loved sankys last lines..yes my darlin. please go for it your love is enough for both of you

Thanks for update ...totally brilliant and awesome 👏..loved it to bits 🤗🤗🤗

love
lucky

PS ; Looking forward for next chapter but yes let me go back and relish this update and that will do till you post next one😛 Hope you are on your way to recovery ..get well soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

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😆 Was it that exciting? 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi buddy. Was awake all though its past 1:30am here. Logged in IF ainwayi ang got this.
Love ya. Tc. Get well soon

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Heeya!! Read your replies to my my comments. So will answer them first. I guess maybe I overreacted yeah, but dude I'm angry with DP. I know he regrets it, but still. His son or nephew and he kept his whereabouts unknown. Didn't tell anyone about it and never tried to trust him. Isn't that unfair? He is a King, I do understand but still, I just dk why I felt it unfair that just saying sorry covers it up! Anyways, let it be. SwaSan are more important.

Part 1:

Isn't it like, everything related to Sanskaar keeps her occupied all the time? I mean, the Princess who would jump and hop in a fountain shower, feels no joy with the thought of rain and her legs involuntarily take her to the fountain, where she had enjoyed a rainfall' with her Prince! Even the thought of Sanskaar gives her such an excruciating pain. Oh my babies! I feel sooo bad for them. And I feel sooo happy getting this intensity!! Sorry, don't call me emotionless, but still, this angst and pain of separation which they are going through and then the desire all coming up resulting in loss of control was a treat! And the untimely rainfall! Well such downpours are considered bad omens na? I've just heard something like this; I'm not a stereotypic or superstitious person who believes in bad omens and all, but reading that sentence I just recalled that I've heard something like this! Is there any reference to this here? Or am I thinking too much?

I have a doubt! Did Shomi and Janaki believe Swara or no? Shekhar didn't that's clear. But did, these two IN THE END believe her or they were too happy to have a back and console her that they didn't even think about it? But of course, they are mothers, and mothers know their daughter inside and out. They could feel that she felt something for Sanskaar. How would it have felt when Sharmishtha would have asked her, about that vile wretch!! Ugh... Poor gal! She's already suffering hell and now the nightmarish memories of that particular hour! Swara wouldn't let anyone badmouth Sanskaar, just loved the way she clearly refused and objected her mothers' accusing Sanskaar. She clearly said that Ragini betrayed her and yet she wouldn't bear this accusation for Sanskaar. She loves him sooo much!! Such is love after all, unconditional, undying and true and pure! I understand Shomi's fears regarding Swara's growing feelings for Sanskaar, as she herself had to go through this, when accusations are laid upon the dignity of a lady. All the memories coming back to her, as Sanskaar wasn't there to hold her in his embrace and give her the solace that she needed, this was sooo good!! Just loved it.

Part 2:

The time period was such that men were always honoured, and women are always treated as toys to be played with!! So agreed! Shru, you do remember na? Devendra has to die, very painfully as a matter of fact. That monster still haunts Swara in her dreams, and he is all safe in hiding?? NO!! Not accepted! He deserves a torturous death, about the punishment of Prometheus like I earlier mentioned, just that he should die of course! Shru, is there more to this betrayal that Sanskaar has got? You've been repeatedly mentioning in Sanskaar's POV that he still suspects internal foul play, so is there something more? Another traitor to be unveiled? Well, I'll be waiting! Sanskaar won't take any chances of course when it comes to Swara. He wants her guarded and he will go against the world, to have people agreed to him!! Such a darling he is!!

OMG!! Swara... I don't have any words to describe this dude!! You chapters so love to compete with each other and make me, their judge go mad!! So in your court, the judge becomes the victim...lol! She clutched the puppets and she pined for Sanskaar all night. OH MY GOD!! Such angst and intensity of love, dang I love it! Her eyes would lighten up only when Sanskaar is mentioned!! Aww! As much as you miss his master hu? I love this line!! Even the phrase- star- struck idiot!! Awesome usage buddy<3 Ohkay, so I like Uttara!! She's really nice<3 Sweet as Pawan says *winks*

Why is Pawan ignoring Uttara? Mujhe ye samajh nahi aaya! What's the need to ignore her? Pawan directly asks, if she thought she might meet someone else by chance. Woah! Bold hu! And then Swara's my friend VEER and Pawan's VEER misses you a lot, was amazing!! Both knew what each other implied yet Veer came in b/w...lol!! The way Swara teased Pawan was hilarious!! Jeez I loved it<3 Amazing! Ah!! Our beloved Sujju! She wouldn't have Swara as her bahu! Well, let's see. Idk why, but I don't feel angry at all at this convo that she had with Janaki and Sharmishtha. I should have, but I didn't! Infact, I found it rather amusing! God, I've gone mad I guess. Poor Swara, such a severe pain inflicted upon her. I really do wish that this is not elongated long!!

Part 3:

Well, this was the most EXCITING and THRILLING of all three!! Pawan teasing Sanskaar was ROFLMAO!! Hilarious damn!

Sanskaar! I really did not get a chance to ask the Princess of minute to minute account of what she has done, including each mouthful of food that she may have eaten and how many hours she may have slept'

Aowww Gawd!! Sanskaar would have been so jealous and vexed at that. Oh my poor Prince!! He is craving for her presence. He misses her sooo much!! The way he had been thinking all about Swara, his touch, her presence, her feel! He's totally smitten and lovelorn! And the way, he saw her there and his eyes enlivened, was sooo sweet!! Made me go all Aww and OMG! And both of them were sooo happy to see each other! Damn, I love this. That word...when he utters...no calls- Swara! God the feel! When too deprived souls, finally get to see each other, damn the emotions!! I really love this<3. The way he says, Well it's nice to see you again Swara' had me smiling like anything. Sanskaar's questions were making her sooo nervous!! Aw... and then she blurts out, that even he didn't come...!! This two honeslty know how to make a person smile even when his/her mood is totally off. Love you for portraying and characterizing them like this Shruti! Nymph and Mermaid! Just beautiful and cute nicknames he has kept for her and hearing them makes her heart thud like wild!! Oh, I just loved this chapter beyond words buddy!! Too beautiful and just awesome and amazing!

Woah..!! That kiss was exhilarating! Damn, my heart is thudding right now. That was intimate and passionate. Result of this separation! God, both of them were burning with desire and it was really Hawt!! Those feels! Amazing Shru! That I missed you so much' was so passionate and full of yearning and he asking her to stop her was a bit ironical na? Such a brave Prince asking her to control him, huh?! That firm decision that he takes that he'll make Swara his at any cost- that is Prince Sanskaar!! C'mon Knight, you can do it!

Waiting really really badly for chapter 26!

Sakshi!


Edited by MusicAddict - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg Di.. This is amazing..even with such health how can you write such story..amazing..expected a lot of swaragini here.. But it's okay.. Instead got swasan... Sanskaar realised that the women are stopping them and poor swara.. Really feeling sad for her...and the way you portrayed scene between swara pawan and uttara.. Wow...can't wait for next...and the kiss Omg..very passionate... Wow... Take care di
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow.. like seriously wow...
1stly sincere thanks for updating in spite all the odds that you are facing.. you truly are a sweat heart... 2ndly, i literally jumped to get my laptop as soon as i got email notification of your PM, so that i can read the update to the earliest...

i loved the update... all three parts of it, and to every bit of it... how swara has been suffering, even after being in the protection of her family, who in the initial days of abduction were the only ones she wanted... both her mothers were unable to calm the turmoil within her...

i liked the cute friendship between Uttara and Swara... uttara for sure must be sanskar's favorite (seeing their previous encounter) and im sure even Swara and Uttara have developed a really sweet bond...


Swara wanting to see Veer, who has certainly been instrumental in her journey with sanskar so far, and hoping to get a glimpse of his master, but again facing disappointment...


and then swara teasing pawan, seeing the spark between uttara and pawan, was a must needed relief from all the stress swara had been facing in the past few days with sleepless nights, nightmares and no sight of Sanskar..


swara then coming back to the same place where she had once danced like a mermaid... her meeting with sanskar was must needed relief even for me as a reader, as the tension between them had to be released, even if it was only for a few moments..


the closeness which they both wanted, initially hesitating, but then not being able to hold any longer... sanskar pulling her in, and kissing her senselessly... and even swara allowing him to do so... that moment was pure bliss.. while reading, i knew that things would be even more worse once the kiss ended, but nevertheless, that moment was magical.. both of them not being able to resist their feelings any longer...


sanskar was very well aware that he must stop, but only to talk to her father, so that he could claim her forever... but all this was far more complicated now.. swara very well knew, how her relationship would be taken by her mothers and father, and also how their feelings would not be welcomed by sanskar's mother... and so she walked away, certainly with a heavy heart...


the promise that sanskar made to himself at the end gives me hope, that very soon sanskar will be able to show swara, how both of them being together is best for them...


i cant wait to read further... your each update comes as a pleasant surprise and leaves me yearning to read more.. will be waiting for the next chapter..

love
Jessica
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shuruuu love...😊..muahhh muahhh muahhh for chapter 25...i was literally jumping with excitement when i saw my email notification...😆😳

Chapter 25 was sooo good i cant even describe it...i want to skip my comment to last part but nooo ...i wont that the bestest part..coming to update...👏


Swara condition is getting worse...😭She is longing for sansku...wanted to see him..feel him..stay with him like when they were together in camp.n palace.. she is getting weak..insominac but cant help herself..just want one glimpse of him but its not possible..with soo many people wandering around her...on the other hand sansku condition is same ...worse like swara...he wanted to see her..wanted to know if she is okay..wanted to clear soo many thing...but not getting enough time...managing.. plotting and scheming ..to protect his realm...ahhh poor souls...😭 felt bad for them...beautifully described their pain n sufferings...😭

Was sooo happy to read sooo many people have understood their special bonding..sharmishta..janki...pawan uttara ..sujata etc...all have noticed their silences...😳

Swara n uttara bonding..😊.good bhabhi should bond well with her nand..😉.hehehe...swara ..uttara n pawan scene was sooo cute...all that teasing by pawan..😆.loved how swara retaliated n tease them...heheheh sooo cute...😆

Sujata ahhh women why u never understand ur son.😡..but i feel she is doing this under someone's influence...bcoz she got back her son after sooo long .his happiness meant everything to her...she noticed how he introduced swara after returning..she is not heartless to let her son suffer again ..i hope im right...n she has some hidden motive to unite swasan..😕.finger crossed..or may be im wrong ..she is just stupid...n not using her head..just like she is in serial...😡

Now coming to the bestest part...you know there is a term...😳😃

Death by chocolate...😳.after reading last part..it was like Death by chocolaty kiss...😉😳

You know darling im going to file a case on u..for slowly torturing me to death...😲by giving me massive heart attacks...🤢.hehehe 😆uhave to defend your case now??? hehehehe

..u literally increased my heart beats...😆ahhh loved the intimacy swasan share...wish that scene continues..but it was short lived..thank God...for my own mental health n sanity...😆now a day everyone is thinking im a nut case..always smiling ..with mobile in hand...cherished swasan moment to the fullest...😳😊👏

Love u girl...😉

Update when health allows...😃hoping ur good now????😊

Tc lots of love hugs n kisses😉
Talia
Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago
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oh how much I started liking this story i cant say in words u r a brilliant writer i fully fell in love with ur story .i was eagerly wating for the update and i am not a writer to say what i felt iafter reading ur story.
just onething Sanskar feels that swara is not in love with him? Love is peculiar ting to understand and is without definitions that one could understand. Now , I believe we will see Sanskar in action
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veer and his master cannt see swara attention elsewhere🤣
para angle is going to be revealed.

nobody could escape the attention of maheswari siblings😆
sujata such a double standard selfish woman she is short sighted lady thats all😡
i liked how u intermingled the past with the present the fountain today and that day and Sanskar is perfect opportunist always doing what he wants . Romancing and telling the other to stop what was that? he is a grown mature man .

Edited by aamias - 9 years ago
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Thank you so much for the likes and replies already in guys 🤗. I had to focus on real life Sanskaar for a little while finally 😆 and will catch up soon but am reading and feeling really happy and touched!
Love,
S

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