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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: soumi93

Hey shruti
awesome chapter yaar
so many revelations accusations too
I love the cnvo of RP and Sanskar
Ragini being ragini the ultimate one to shed her crocodile tears to keep the mask.
Annapurna finally spoke up loved it totally
Swasan wants to spend time together bt to their uppermost discouragemnt ita nt gonna happen.
do cntinue shruti...
I pmed you the link of my ss if time permits do read.
would love to hear from you.
Love
Soumi


Dearest Soumi 🤗

Thank you so much for your appreciation on 24! Yes indeed it was a chapter of rather important reveals and am glad it came across well. Ram had all that pent up so had to express that and as for Ragini- she cannot just openly confess- that is not her character. Annapurna had to make her stand clear too like she did before with Durga Prasad in private. Yes, it isn't going to be straightforward for SwaSan to simply start talking and spending time together in the circumstances. But let's see what happens.

I am so sorry about not having had a chance to read your work. I am currently really struggling for time and it seems my whole life is sort of on hold to complete DK, I seem to race for space and time each day. I have saved all the links and I will definitely read and comment as soon as my schedule allows. I hope you will forgive my tardiness, I promise I won't forget!

Lots of love,
Shruti x

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Posted: 9 years ago
i dnt knw why i love to read swasan in love bt in pain also...
& ths ragini...finally!!!
amaizing updt. 👏
sorry for replying all late.bt i hate history type story as i hate history.jst for swasan & ur writing style i m reading it wo vi two three parts togethr...
so sorry for late & less commenting.
bt i m loving it...
thanks for pms & keep continiuing...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Aap pehle aapni sehat ache se bana le.and aapnne kaha obsseadd sirf aap hi nahin main bhi hoon.nd who sanky ka lucky ko kehna ki jab yeh mera aur swra ka plan tha aur us waqt mein traitor tha iss waqt nahin tho puri kahani sach kaise.mast tha
Phir swara ko sanky ko bachana apne pita se.acha tha aur bahut pyaar bhara.mujhe sabse jyada who pasand aaya jab rp aur sanky ke convo ke waqt swara ne sanky ke taraf kadam bhadhaya.phir rp ka truth superb tha.den rp aur dp ka sanky se maafi mangna bahut hi acha likha gaya tha.ragini ki tarah magarmach k aansu koi nahin baha sakta.shekhar se umeed hi nahin rakhi thi tho mujhe bura nahin laga.aur who last scene jab who ek dusre ko dekhkar juda hote hai .lajawab tha .aapse weekendd pe milte hai


Hey Niti dear 🤗

Thanks again for your concern! I like fellow obsessed people! 😃 I am glad you liked Sanskaar's clear but very clean logic in what he said to Lakshya. If people thought it through they would see the truth of what he said but sometimes in families we don't want to see as to see causes complications. Swara didn't really save him but she tried and so showed where her loyalties really deep down lie 😃 and yes, with her standing silently supporting him, they both so well understand each other, the other must be able to feel that no? 😊. Glad you liked the sequence with Ram and of course Ragini didn't surprise anyone really. Thank you so much and yes, catch you after 25!!

Love,
Shruti x

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Hey Shru dearest 🤗

I am back with my comments for the last two chapters 23 and 24..😊😊

Poor Swara, my heart went out to her when I read the particular passage, where she was sitting away from everyone else, staring out at the dunes..😭
But I loved it when Sanskaar told Adarsh that the princess would travel with him on his horse..😳
But Swara and Sanskaar missed each other all night and didn't sleep at all..😲 Poor Swasan..😭
Later when they were leaving to Maheshpur, she was touched by his gesture of making her wear that cloak to protect her from sun and wind..He had always been her protector, from everything-- even death.😊

Ragini's dilemma was really fun to read😆 when those messengers arrived at the palace..😃 and thank God that everyone including Shekhar were ready to believe Swasan..😳😳 and they were even willing to arrange a grand welcome to the homecoming Prince.

Lakshya was clearly disturbed when he saw Swara snuggling close to Sanskaar upon Veer😉😃😃 But I loved that scene..ha ha😆 Serves him right, for not believing her.. And I really loved the way Sanskaar secretly assured her not to worry, when he felt her worries..

Annapurna, the loving mother..wow I really loved your description of her transformation from a reigning Queen to an affectionate mother. And so she welcomed Sanskaar by applying tilak and Sanskaar, our righteous hero, took the chance and silently communicated with her to welcome Swara in a similar way..
And she could see the transformation in Swara from a childish girl to a regal lady-like princess..You always point out such minute details in a really warm way, Shru..And I love you for that🤗

And here comes my Pawan❤️ While Annapurna welcomed him, I felt realy joy, but you are already creating a sautan for us Pawan-deewanis in the form of an all grown up and beautiful Uttara..huh😃😃 But I know, this angle is going to be interesting..😆😉 and I am eagerly lookin forward to it..Please make their love story extra special, ok..😳😳

And here comes my most expected moment of the day..Sanskaar---Ragini confrontation..
What a show she tried to put up..😲😲 with her fake tears and shrill voice..🤢 and Shekhar and Lakshya fell into her trap so easily..😆 Two spineless men..🥱

And Swara, too sided Sanskaar against her wicked conniving sister..

But what followed was completely unexpected, OMG..Ramprasad was that person , who had witnessed that scene..Great master stroke by you Shru👏 I really really loved that scene..

And I really loved that "one tight slap" which Janaki delivered on her beloved daughter's masked face.👏👏waah wahh waah taaliyaaan moment of the day..😃😃

Ok so we have to wait for the next update to know the verdict of this Sanskaar Vs Ragini case..

Take care of your health Shru..🤗

lots of love

Naina😳😳



Dearest Nainu 🤗
Thank you so much for these lovely comments on the duo of chapters and apologies for my late reply.

Swara was in deep pain then- she had to go and lick her wounds in private as the person she would usually share with was actually part of the reason for her pain (however much he would never want to be), hence her not wanting everyone to see but of course they could 😭.

Yes, I wanted to make it clear that Sanskaar won't just give up on Swara because of their MU and Swara too won't insult or challenge Sanskaar when it really comes to it 😃. Yeah well you can't sleep with that much rolling through your heart and head I guess. This is the start of more sleepless nights I would suppose . And yes, that gesture- he still feels her littlest discomfort and will ensure her well being no matter that he himself is in pain, the power of their bond.

Ragini- haha- yeah time to finally face some of her deeds and she never thought things would have turned out like this with these two returning as heroes! I think they all had to believe the story about everything other than Ragini as all that was collaborated by Adarsh and of course Sanskaar does come back with the maps.

Haha- I am glad you liked Lakshya ji squirming. To be honest it was awkward for all but good he saw his brother's clear possessiveness towards Swara! Sanskaar is just so in tune with her no?

I really wanted Annapurna to let her guard down there for a short time and she did keep so much trust in her son, she deserves to celebrate his victory. Ah yes, I had intro'ed Swara through AP's eyes so wanted to highlight the difference through her too. Thank you hon- that is so sweet 😳

😆😆 Sautan Uttara!!! Yes yes you all cannot get too complacent and Pawan is such a Hanuman type in that way he deserves some bold Princess who likes him no? 😆 I cannot deal with their whole love story here hon, only snatches, but let's see what happens 😉

Yes the much awaited Rag---San confrontation- and I very much wanted Swara openly siding with Sanskaar and offering him support in other ways too. Yayyy so glad you liked Ram's revelation. I always wanted it to be him; it was planned very early on and I dropped various red herrings along the way 😉 I knew most would love Ragini getting a chaata from her mum! 😆

I'm working on 25 and hopefully will be able to post later today.

Loads of love to you!

Shru xoxo


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey shru🤗🤗
Just back from a long journey..so not posting a detailed one sorry for that but I loved 23rd and 24th chapters👏👏⭐️ swasan doesnt need words because they can even understand each others silence..loved how sanskaar made sure swara got her due share of respect and pawan as well

pawan & uttara .. 😛 another couple in making hmm..and sach ka saamna 😆 Waiting to see how the entire truth of ragini is gonna come out, she still has some supporters in form of laksh and shekar ..some people never change😡..I juts want to imagine their faces when the truth comes out

RP part was a surprise .It was good to see him play an important part in your FF unlike in SR

more angst and pain for swasan??..I am all for it😉

Looking forward for 25th Chapter😛

Lucky

PS; Btw I loved the thappad from janaki 👏👍🏼


Edited by lucky.m - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
My dearest friends,
I have just posted Chapter 25 on Page 2 🤗

I am still catching up with some remaining lovely comments on 24 but I will carry on and in the meantime any feedback on 25 will be gratefully received like always. I am on some strong painkillers which are making me rather sluggish so please forgive slow responses.

Loads of love to you all!

Shruti x
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Shruti🤗

Love this chapter too as like the ones before. Shruti, I'm on cloud 9 after this chapter.


Both mothers seem to understand what lies in the heart of their daughter. Poor Swara!! Though I understand the stand of the mothers, my heart really feels bad for Swara. Like you have said that happy princess is gone and the new one seems to be too much mature or maybe depressed. I love the part where she defend her prince by saying that they should place the blame where it lays and not the one who saved her numerous times. When it comes to her prince she will fight with all her might, broken or not. Love that quality.


Extremely diplomatic of Durgaprasad pressing not to focus on the Swaragini issue and concentrate on the main issue. True king in that sense. It's good to see how he supports Sanskar in all the matters. Poor Shekar, though he wants to confront Sanskar his hands are tied. Has to bend down under pressure. I'm not feeling bad for him, infact I was laughing thinking about his situation.

I'm proud of my Sanskar where he tried to initiate conversation with Laksh trying to mend his relation with his brother. But the resulted in another heated argument. Both trying to support their respective partners. Poor Laksh doesn't know whom he is supporting is the real reason behind everyone's misery. My heart really goes out to him. Apart from this he has yet again showed his concern over Swara's security. It indeed is an ironical situation.

The irony doesn't stop here. Now when Swara is with her own family she is not able to relax if anything she feels alone. I loved the part where she was clinging on to the things Sanskar bought for her during the fair and insisted on having it with her. They are both trying to live in the memories of those wonderful days they spend together.

Swara and Uttara's friendship is a good turn of events. I really like to believe that she might act as a messenger for her brother when the time comes. Both seems to want to go visit the horses with a hope of meeting their master. Poor Uttara is trying so hard to get the attention of Pawan where as he is trying to avoid any such thing. Why I do have a feeling that even she knows what her brother feels for his princess. Para playing cupid for Swasan. Love these two jodis. Bechara doesn't know that no one can run from love. Ask Sanskar if you need more clarification on that topic.

Pawan doesn't seem to stop with teasing just Sanskar. He was teasing Swara too. "He misses you Princess!". Whatever he wanted to convey he conveyed without actually addressing Sanskar directly. He was shocked to see Uttara siding with him on her brothers issue. He then went ahead and started teasing Sanskar when he came. But as karma would have it, Swara could understand the undercurrent between Para. Loved the teasing from Swara's part.

Veer like his master doesn't like Swara's attention diverted. Still possessive and like his master, won't get attached that soon and once attached will not share even the attention of their favorite person.

Ahh!! Sujatha... You know I knew she will create more trouble. She came and destroyed what remaining peace she had. But she has made a clear statement that she will not entertain Swasan relation. Kyu apne bte ki khusi ke peche padi hai ye aurat?? I know she is not bad, but what she did has a very bad impact on Swara as if the issues they were having was not enough.

Part 3 is my favorite in this chapter. You know the reason Shruti!!


My Kiss ☺️... Shruti barish me itne hot feeling kaise laye tumne yaar? I can write the whole part especially the kiss paragraph by heart. What can I say, my madness is increasing day by day now.

"I missed you so much", he groaned against her mouth, getting distracted in kissing the beads of dew dancing on her face and neck. "Please ask me to stop! I need to to go and speak to your father. I need to ask him for your hand and .."

@underlined: why he didn't stop with this and continued with kissing.

@bold: This had me laughing. A man with super self control is not able to stop by himself. He can do that only if she asks him to do it so

Had hai yaar!! Why bring father here? Who brings parents in the middle of romance? Idiot!!! I know he wanted to have the right to be with her before doing anything including kissing but he is not able to stop himself from kissing her.

She would have not accepted this offer as still she feels he is trying to set things right. She has to know that what he is doing is out of love and nothing else. And to add to the already misunderstanding and sufferings Sujatha has done her bit. Shruti do something yaar!! How are you planning to show this impossibly stupid girl that her prince was not talking about kavita that day and it was her whom he was talking about.


(The beginning of that chapter 12 she asks "Have you ever seen anything more beautiful?" Sanskaar looked into her upturned face, and mesmerised by her as she was by the scenery. he replied with his eyes glued to her face, "No, I don't think I have."It's clear here that he was talking about her. Even she was blushing hearing this. But then when he said"Maybe some love stories are never meant to be? Maybe only in death could they find any fulfillment of their love and some peace from a world which thrives on inflicting pain in the name of honour and family and duty, but never allowing one the freedom to enjoy those oh so noble causes with love? The world is cruel indeed Swara, sometimes those who do right are met with only wrong and perhaps loving someone too much should be a crime as it can consume you, and once you are in a grip of love like Samarjit's, if the world doesn't let you have your love, you want to destroy it, but may end up annihilated yourself and worse still, see that very love lost to you." He was sharing his fear of losing her here, not Kavita's loss. How will this be cleared??

You do remember in one of your earlier chapters I've referred that chapter 3 marked the beginning of Sanskar's feeling for Swara. No wonder she keeps coming to the same spot. It was here where he had an urge to protect her even from himself first and now it's the same place where he vows to win her.

"You will be mine Swara! I don't know how I will make you see sense but I will. I will not let you suffer alone like this worrying about pointless gossip. You might not love me but you are far from indifferent. You would have never let me kiss you and responded the way you did if you didn't feel something and that has to be enough for now! I love you enough for both of us and if marriage means that only one of us is in love, so be it."

@underlined: This line alone made my week. The determination is clearly evident here. Let's see how he will convince his adamant Nymph.

@bold: Love such words and declarations when it comes to love... But here both love each other more than anything else. Like he realised she is not indifferent towards him. There is some sort of feeling for him but can't asses the intensity till she reveals it herself.

Love,

Sree

P.S. Thanks for "I wanted to. I tried to so many times. But you stay too well hidden Nymph. I could have climbed the window but I didn't know what both your Maas would say to that. I do know what your Baba would say, and I didn't want to cause that situation. So I am glad you emerged yourself today, Mermaid. I was waiting."

I suggested this in last chapter and you gave an explanation on why he couldn't here. Love you yaar muwah!!!

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P.P.S. Are you going to deal with Para love angle as well. Would love to see what happens when his decision to not fall in love with anyone goes south. Uttara seems to have already fallen for him and Pawan's mind is convincing his heart to think otherwise, I think. Now in all Sawan conversation Pawan is busy pulling his leg. A reverse scenario will be fun to watch, though he can't pull it to this extent as the love interest of Pawan is his own sister, but still I think Swara will take the opportunity to pay him back for all his teasing.

Uttara-Swara bonding so maybe soon she will share whats in her heart to Swara and ask for guidence. But let me tell you if she does then Uttara is making a great mistake.


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Wow- that was so quick hon! 🤗😃
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As always so sorry for the late Unres shruti. I wanted to do Unres sooner and as you know having half of your family over for weekend doesnt give you any break to do what you want. Also sorry for the short comment.Still a bit busy ...Hoping the schedule relaxes a bit during this week .


I loved the update ,all three parts of it. I do get Sharmistha fear, no one could understand it better than her. My heart literally felt Swara pain too. Sleep seems like an alien concept to both of them now that they are apart.



The men calling for truce on time of crisis seemed logical. And i love to read that unlike before DP has Sanskar back now and i hope he continues to do so in regards of Swara too. While i am not happy about the mother role play in trying to keep them apart.



Veer makes an comeback with Varun too. Uttara seems like the only person who can make Swara will comfortable during this time.Parents will only spend time consoling her. But to cheer her up Uttara seemed like a perfect choice. Loved the teasing of Pawan and him playing Cupid by letting her know Sanskar was busy . Also liked Swara teased him back too. Uttara and Pawan i knew this one was coming and i am happy about it too. But i do worry for both Pawan and Swara considering there mother in laws. I refuse to like Sujatha after that scene.Even if she welcomed Swara back with open heart after sometime.


Sanskar was bit late..Why oh why , if not they would not have been able to talk alone. As uttara would have been there as well.


As i already said in my PM .i read the last part too too many times. Because i loved it that much. Words wont be able to describe how much i liked it. They finally met and i was super excited even when i know they are not most likely to resolve it soon after what Swara overheard.



The kiss was magical and it took me by Surprise. How i wish instead of mentioning the father first.Sanskar let her know how much he loved her. She still seems to think he is trying to do right by her to an extent and he think she likes him but not love yet.They dont know how deep the other is in love with them.


I know she will run or walk away from him after the Kiss but totally loved Detemined Sanskar. He is going to marry her even if it means it going to be a one sided love marriage. Cant wait to read the next one. But will wait patiently as always or try .


Love

Nita
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fantastic update
Swara seems so confused, she still think Sanskaar love and care for her as guilt, i hope these feeling will replace by true love forever.
I wonder what will Swara do when she will come to know about Sanskaar proposal for her. His decision will surprise his family.
Looking forward to read more

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