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Posted: 9 years ago
Friends, I am fairly sure I have now caught up to each individual comment for 21 but if I have accidentally missed anyone off please scream out and I'll correct myself! I'll make a start later on replies for 22. Dead tired today so need some rest and also want to start making notes for 23:)
Loads of love xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: piccola1

Oh no..this is so incredibly tragic..especially after that stupendous melting moment of bliss !

Res until eod..and in the meantime a big hug again for this full platter of DK😃


Thank you Pic- and sorry about adding the tragic but it had to be done xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie23

Chapter 22

Omg omg this sooo different then I thought would happen and you have managed to surprise me quite well... aawww poor Swara I felt soo bad for her when she heard those two talking but maybe that was kinda reality check of the soceity they live in

Also I agree with Adrash that they live in a society where no mistakes from a man might be noticed but a small tarnish on the woman's reputation and even if she is right she will be looked down to... and thank God now the Maheshwari's also believe Sanskaar to be innocent...

And the sindoor part how I wish he had just filled her maang no matter the protest from her side.. but I can understand where Swara is coming from she thinks he is doing this solely because he thinks he is responsible for all the mess and believes him to still be in love with Kavita but she does not know the he was doing this for his love as well as respect he holds for her

Waiting eagerly for the next update... one question - are we nearing the end or this still has a lng way to go??

Love,
Manasi


Manu 🤗

I like to keep you all and myself on my toes hence the twists and turns so we never quite know where we will go 😉 See exactly that with what the men were saying- that is the harsh truth. Forget the orthodox times they lived in but even now its a fact that its one set of rules for men and another for women. But yes, Sanskaar is cleared :)

Ah I was never going to get them married quite like that 😈. I knew once I thought of the sindoor scene everyone would think it would happen but I personally hate forced marriages and more in the next but Swara as you say would think his reasons are what they are not! She already had this huge MU in Samkalgoonj and along with all else and him starting by talking about his guilt- it was bound to go wrong .

As to how much is left- 😕 I keep thinking I need to wrap this up now but there is at least 10 chapters left! 😳 Thankfully no one has said- enough now and end it and I do worry about the length but I have so much more I want to cover - eeekss!!

Lots of love, Shru xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sneharay

Mindblowing Update..
Their first kiss..so blissful..
Hope everything sort our soon..


Thanks so much Sneha- glad you liked the chapter! I will put things right in time so don't worry 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jasw

Oh God, what a roller-coaster ride! The high of the kiss and low of the misunderstanding between them! Awesome chapters! Loved it how Swara realized her love! The bangles, dresses, puppet performance...Sanskar is treating his Princess royally! 😳 I love Pawan too!

They are so much in love and yet not able to express their inner desires to each other! So much angst. Loved it! 😊


Hey Jas 🤗

Thanks so much for appreciating this chapter which was a difficult one for me to write! I am so pleased you see why this juncture has to be cleared by SwaSan before they can realise the power of their love 😃.

Do keep reading, lots more in store!

Love,
Shru xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pakh

Hi shruti...chapter was so good yet heartbreaking...when I was reading initially I thought wow finally they will confess and everything will be alright...but u gave twist in the tale...but I like it... as more heart breaks and pain...so beautiful will be the reunion...and I have full faith in you...that will make your all updates better than the previous like u always do

hope u well now and will be fine soon...

love..
kirti


Dear Kirti 🤗

Thank you so much for liking this chapter despite the angsty parts in it! Ah see- if I just made them confess it would be too easy. For me, all great love stories pass through a lot of pain and difficulty- otherwise they are just a love story and not epic! And absolutely- the greater the pain the sweeter its resolution 😃. I hope I can live up to the expectations but your support means a lot!

Thank you so much for this and for the wishes for my health!

Love,
Shruti x

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Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Hey Shruti! Hope you are feeling better now and wish you a speedy recovery🤗 And Ouch! That last part hurt😭 I knew things wouldn't be as easy as it was portrayed at Adarsh's entry, but this hopeful heart *sigh*... Everything was so wonderfully written.. The depths of their emotions, their insecurities mingled with hope, the heights of respect both have for each other, its just so perfect.. Aaa, stupid ppl, they are perfect for each other n stillFabulous update as usual.. I also love the bonds of loyalties you have portrayed throughout between Sanskar and his men.. It's fairly touching..👏 Chapter 23 is gonna be harder to wait for😛 Get well soon🤗

Love,
Akshata😊


Hey Akshata dear 🤗
I'm still not good but working on trying to get better 😊, thanks for asking. Ah yes- sorry!!! I knew that last part would be bad, it hurt writing it too! So touched that you thought it well written 😳. I know the budhus are perfect for each other but people this madly in love can often be silly no? I am so pleased to see you pick up on the contrast I drew between Sanskaar's bravehearts and the other gossiping men! I will try not to take too long with 23 😃

Lots love love,
Shruti x

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: soumi93

Aww shruti
wonderful update
I just loved it...
Swasan Kiss is so blissful
Loved the whole part
Swasan argument
Swara's turmoil and insecurity is fair as well as sanskar's feelings too
Hope u make them sort out everything soon pleass!!!
do update and pm me


Hey Soumi 🤗

Thank you so much! I know that was a chapter of ups and downs! So pleased you loved it! I felt it was necessary for this phase to be dealt with, they cannot just simply kiss, say they love one another and go home for now 😉. I will of course PM when I post 23!

Loads of love xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

You know what you should have stopped with 1st part or him about to fill her maang😭 I was having FB of Swasan sindoor wedding and you brutally broke it with your remaining update💔😭😭 I hate you Shru I hate you😭😭


😆😆 This sort of hatred is love to a writer so challo- accepted! What is the story in they met, they kissed and said ILU and went home? 😆 All in good time! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie

Ohh that was a heart-wrenching episode..

This is my first comment by the way..
I'm a huge fan of story and you..

Why don't I get positive vibes about Adarsh??


Thank u for giving such a nice story..😊

Bye and take care of your health..😃


Hey! Hello there! Is your name Geethu by the way? I get very excited to "meet" new or silent readers so thank you hugely for reading and loving DK 😳. I always thank you all for your support as that keeps me going 😃. Ah- you clearly smell foul play by Adarsh huh? Anything is possible in this story as you know 😉

Please keep reading and do share your views if you get the chance.

Love,
Shruti

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