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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Res ❤️ + WA heart eyes for u know what! 🤣


Chapter 18:

So dev escaped😡 But then such men dont die that easily. And anyways why waste such an intelligent villain so early in the series😳 He is a wounded beast now, and not just physically, his ego has been shredded...that too by a girl😈 let's see how he strikes back. Sanskaar's single handed battle against Dev's men was extremely well written. The blood, the gore, men dying like flies, Sanskaar's sword cutting through each new lot of soldiers all was brilliantly captured 👏 Even in all this Swara is topmost in his mind. He ensures she is protected before stepping out of his self made defensive wall to tackle Dev's men. Good thinking there with him using the table as a defense barrier Shru👏 It goes on to show how truly "skilled" Dev is, that once Sanskaar is free & he is down with what should ideally be nothing more than a cut for a "warrior" he cannot even get up. He is lying there half dead. I wonder if it was only the bleeding wound or seeing Sanskaar's rudra roop made him sit there paralyzed in fear😆

Pawan is here!!! You made me wait for him for 17 chapters you cruel girl😡 but wow what an entry I love men with curls and with a healthy sense of humour and who are loyal to the end and who are perceptive and hence Pawan is just perfect on all counts and he is all MINE!

Even when Swara's strength is finally giving in she is still thinking of Sanskaar. Only him. That complete absorption of hers in him even at such a moment & after so much proves how much he has become a part of her very soul.

That SANSKAAR which she uttered was heartrending 😭 It was a silent plea to not leave her alone with a complete stranger no matter how trustworthy😭 She wants just Sanskaar to be with her atm, no one else will do😭 She is really such a little baby here that you automatically feel protective towards her The way she holds on to Sanskaar, the way she panics when he puts her down to drape that cloak around her...

Ah horsie is safe😳 and so is Swara now! Nicely bundled up & with Sanskaar😳

Pawan killed Bagri 👏 Excellent👏

And so while here Swara is being so brave in spite of the circumstances there her father is labeling her a traitor I do understand where Shekhar is coming from. To be fair he didn't believe the charges against her immediately & did try to find her so she could be proven innocent. But everything seems be going against her & the society then was too very harsh to the families of traitors, especially if she is a girl. Though that didn't stop me from wanting to scream at the injustice of it all as Shekhar in the end decided to award the culprit 😵


Lanny xoxo

I knew exactly what the WA heart eyes were for and was 🤣. Whilst many were awaiting Pawan I have never seen such enthusiasm as you have displayed, not even knowing whether I will have him positive or negative so I think we have to concede that you can have Pawan 😆😆

Dev - sighhh- yes he had to get away I am afraid- all in good time is my motto on this story and I didn't want Sanskaar killing Devendra to be the focus after all that happened. And thank you for getting my thinking on Devendra 👏.

Thanks for liking the battle scene with Sanskaar as the berserker 😳. Yes, the aim was it was all about Swara for him as of course usually he doesn't fight like that- as he has never before felt like that. And Devendra- aha! Well, the man isn't a bad fighter himself but he did sense that Sanskaar in the maddened state he was in was not someone he could take on. The injury he took would be painful of course as would the groin kick 😆 but yes his falling apart was a mix of those factors with sensing that Sanskaar would not be stopped that day if he got his hands on him.

I am cruel indeed! 😈 I knew PKJ was so eagerly awaited and I only wanted to bring him out when I felt it was right 😃 But yayyy you like and in fact loveee him 🥳. I am so glad about the curls!!! I somehow sensed that- I have NO idea why but I did!!

SwaSan are truly one soul in two bodies no? I wanted this sense of each totally only focussed on the other and therefore come what may to their own persons, it was about the other that caused any reaction. And yes, the whole point was that the battle lust was on Sanskaar and he almost by reflex wanted to see her safe so wanted to ensure that and then decimate Devendra. But as you say, only he can be the one Swara can gain comfort from and she just needed to collapse- in his arms and her one cry contained all that and of course he heard it and responded as he was bound to. What she has gone through will need serious care and he has to be the one to give it to her.

Horise is safe too 😆- SwaSan had been through enough then to have to deal with anything happening to horsie!

I wanted Pawan to kill Bagri- his entry statement 😎

Glad Part 2 worked for you. Yes, Shekhar's MU is understandable although still very unpalatable. I am so hating Shekhar in the show at the moment, I sort of ranted out here even though I cannot make him as ridiculous as the one on the show! 🤢. Two ironies- one that he is thinking what he is about his child who has done something so brave and amazing that the nation, not only he should be proud, instead of branding her a lost cause and then as you say- the evil step sister gets the present- here if the full inheritance for what you did 🤢.

Lots of love xoxo


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sneharay

Mindblowing update.. 👏


Thanks Sneha 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: soumi93

shruti
hi dear...
well another awesome chapter...
Though its also so brutual and drastic bt i love the heroic sanky here...
hw can he forgive those morons who dare to touch the most precious gem of him.
Pawan makes a entry and sanky s frnd...hope no rivalry came in b/w regarding bravery issue.
his dialouge gave me some ngtv wives bt i choose to ignore it.
sanky's care fr swara omg its so hzkazj
he can give up chasing devendra fr her...he holds her so close to his soul...
his concern love and at the same tym maturity is penned down well here...
loved it..
do pm fr nxt dear...
its really going interesting day by day.


Dear Soumi

How are you? Thank you for liking on 18 too:). Yes, indeed it was deliberately gory but hopefully satisfying to see Sanskaar hack those men to pieces in mad defence of his love. Yes, Pawan is here! And re the dialogue- ah well, the intent was to show their camaraderie but as this is DK- anything can happen 😉. For now, enjoy PKJ and his humour 😃. You like the care already? More needed of course 😉. I'll def PM you on 19 as soon as it is ready 😊. Thanks so much Soumi- lots of love for this xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bilvyina

Super update shru keep going...take ur time v wil wait ages 4 ur wonderful update so dnt wory...relax...and update...story love u...
Krishna


Thank you so much dear Krishna for the love on DK and for your understanding too! 🤗 I'll be back soon and love you too xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Shuru baby...whistle...👏

Chapter 18 was like a block buster movie...what action...enjoyed it..was fully supporting sanskaar... Dark knight (Dk) is driving me nuts...😕

Sansku madness ...all the bloodshed...killing...heads .arms n limbs amputations...i was imagining all...just to protect his love..life swara...like a true lone warrior fighting like a lion in a jungle of emerging herd of hyenas...he was successful...but hyenas kept emerging...🥱😕

He was no worried for himself ..just swara...n then came PAWAN...😆
I was waiting for him since sooo long...n what a time to make n entry...helping his friend..prince...awww

Loved how he killed badri...😡but devendra is alive...for sometime.. waiting for moment when sansku kills him brutally..😡.but now time was not right.. sanku took right decision not going after devendra ..his priorities changed..he thought about swara n his small army...👏😊

Was drooling when he draped cloak around swara..n protected her from prying eyes..😭😊.put swara on veer n himself sat n protectively encircled her in arms...but shuru... Why why... u stopped here...😭😭

Im greedy just want swasan scenes...😉😉

When i read shekhar sharmishta part i was like...may be we have last para for swasan...im officially gone case now...
🤢
Waiting for next chapter...update earliest...😊

Lots of love 😉
Talia


My sweet Talia 🤗

Awww- thank you, thank you! Glad you liked the movie! 😳

Exactly as you said- it was meant to show a maddened lion roaring his fury and killing those who had hurt his lioness and repeatedly holding off the baying hyenas. Both SwaSan were only truly concerned with each other, not about themselves. 😃.

You were indeed waiting for Pawan and hope you liked him! Killing Bagri was his entry statement! Devendra- he cannot be dead all in 2 epis I am afraid- he is a serious villain after all . But his time was not yet come so all in good time 😉. I wanted to show that despite everything the only really important thing to him now is Swara:)

Haha- the cloak scene was about starting the sequence of him comforting her- what more to show in the circumstances?! 😆 I know you are all greedy but again, if we eat too much we can only get indigestion 😆😆.

The other people- no matter how tedious need dealing with too unfortunately so there we had Shekhar and the rest!

I'll update soon, just need a few days of time to write it 😃.

Loads of love, mmmwah xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sree8410

Res for chapter 18

Unres

Shruti 🤗 thank you so much dear. 😳

Finally the much anticipated chapter 18.

The fight scene was brilliant. I expected this reaction from him after seeing his love suffer so miserably in front of his eyes.

What an entry of Pawan👏, Wow. I knew you wouldn't leave Sanskar alone in there to face the mad hoard. Through Pawan you have shown how much Swara means to Sanskar, not that we didn't know it already, but drawing two lines to show the difference speaks much more here. He was told to be loyal, but here you showed that he is not just a loyal friend cum brother but also the level of understanding they have. He could understand his friend before the latter can put his thoughts into words. Love the way this relation is treated.

Devendra, I hoped he would die here, but like he said today is not the day. I so wanted to him crushed in front of Swara suffering a really painful slow death, something which will make him curse the day he was born. Boy wouldn't that been a treat, I'm sure you have much more planned for him than I could imagine. I just have to wait for few more chapters to get this, I know and I'll try being patient not that it's my strongest suit.😊

Swara poor thing I felt terrible for her. Chapter 17 was supposed to be the worst but I guess we are yet to face chapter 19 to see how all these events have taken a toll on her. Even when she feels her strength draining away from her she tries to pull herself together to see that Sanskar is safe. Love has found its way to her(it did happen before when he was fatally wounded) . When she felt that her whole life would be meaningless if she lost him(its not right for us to expect her to understand those feelings at the current situation), this might help her to review their relationship at some later point. The only thought which gave her the strength she needed was to see him through. The safety she felt in his hug and the panic that arose when he put her down to cover her could explain what she is feeling. God I really don't know how I'm going to handle the next chapter even though I will get an extremely caring and protective Sanskar.

"Sanskar" just one word and it stopped him from his pursuit for Devendra. It told him that all she needed was him with her and that she doesn't have the strength any more. His whole priority has changed for good. His lifeline is now her and she will be protected with his life. Like he told Devendra, Swara is his. And now he will face the wrath of abusing, manhandling and torturing what Sanskar holds so dear to his heart. Devendra will now suffer not just for what he did in the past but also what he did now, that is something I'm eagerly waiting for. The way he draped her in a cloak . He did set aside all his demons to be able to tend to her as she did. I loved the way they rode back to safety kissing her forehead letting her know that he is by her now and nothing will harm her ever, Offering safety and peace.

Shekar though I could understand his point here. I simply hate that guy. Don't knw why but i never warmed up to this character. It just escalated when he decided to declare that Ragini will his only child. I mean seriously the evil one who is the main cause of everyones pain is being rewarded here. I'm seriously happy that though she won her battle, or she thinks, its seems meaningless to her now. And she is guilty for having done something like this.

There is also something else I would like to add here, which are the two most extraordinary women in this whole story - Annapoorna and Janki. Wow these ladies make me feel proud to call myself a woman. The power with which they handle each situation is just awesome.

So Sorry for posting such a long comment. There are still so many things I would love to add but can't really express it at this point. Oh and thank you so much for not telling me that Pawan would be introduced here though I had a feeling.😳

Love

Sree


My dear Sree 🤗

Please don't thank me- accept my thanks for your love for DK and the real motivation you give me with comments and your kind PMs and messages. Really appreciate it so much.

Glad you liked the action scene which took up most of the Chapter. Ah yes, how could I leave Sanskaar permanently stranded- it was high time he reunited with his loyal men and his best friend. I wanted the change in Sanskaar to be seen through Pawan's eyes and that too very quickly to show how striking it is:) I feel so pleased to read your reaction to Pawan and the friendship I tried to show between the two men.

Devendra- it would be too easy to just have Sanskaar get hold of him and kill him- not the time IMO. Haha, the demands I have had for Devendra's painful death- I would be rich if I could have a penny for each 😆. The truth is I haven't finished planning that yet- have some vague ideas but need to finesse and finalise.

Swara's state was/ is indeed dire . She was literally clinging on for Sanskaar and then had to collapse only against him. And yes, her feelings are overpowering too but as you say of course I cannot expect her to deal with that now- the time is just not right with the assault so fresh. But yes, the subconsciously told her that the truth is- so when she can understand it she will. Yes, 19 will be gruelling for sure in that sense- the real test of Swara's forbearance will come now but of course Sanskaar is there and let's see what he does and how he tries to heal her, and she him of course as actually both of them are hurting in different ways.

That one cry of Swara spoke volumes to her knight and of course he answered and came through. Nothing matters to him more than her- her one sign can make him lay down his life, let alone arms and the chase of a villain. His care was bursting through- it is now all about her for him 😳. The kisses on the top of her head are just his immediate expression of tenderness and utmost concern 😳.

Shekhar- yes, well, his perspective isn't totally unjustified from his blinkered but yet still logical perspective but he still remains somewhat un-relatable I guess. I hope he isn't as irrational as the one on the show 😆. Janaki is a formidable woman indeed- as much a Queen in her own right as Annapurna is 😃.

Never say sorry for long comments! Read and savoured each time! Haha, I can't spoil suspense for you all na?!

Keep reading and chatting.

Lots of love, Shruti xoxo


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Posted: 9 years ago
Yay!!!Chapter 18 so soon!!Sanskar's fight was so beautifully described.His emotions overpowering his sense of rationality just for Swara!!!pawan being the loyal friend here.That was beautiful.And Swara suffering from PTSD.That made it so real!!!Loved Janki here .She loves and trusts Swara to the hilt😊Shekhar😡.
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Posted: 9 years ago
shru

I got scared after imagining swara in dt stat.

I just love reading. do update the other chapters
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shuchi2013

Yay!!!Chapter 18 so soon!!Sanskar's fight was so beautifully described.His emotions overpowering his sense of rationality just for Swara!!!pawan being the loyal friend here.That was beautiful.And Swara suffering from PTSD.That made it so real!!!Loved Janki here .She loves and trusts Swara to the hilt😊Shekhar😡.


Thank you very much Shuchi- really pleased you loved Chapter 18- it makes me feel very happy. Yes, Swara is bound to be suffering the terrible after effects of what happened, poor thing . Shekhar was not unexpected entirely I suppose but still annoying and frustrating- grrr.

Love,

S xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: PRINCESS_ALISHA

shru

I got scared after imagining swara in dt stat.

I just love reading. do update the other chapters


Thank you so much dear Alisha 🤗

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