DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF-T3-DELETED- AN-PG 1 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Shruti my friend,

First of all i am asking sorry for my late reply.

While reading the update felt sad for swasan 😭

Sanskar was in a helpless condition.

The Devendra is a cruel man.

While reading the previous update from the villager, the cruel behavior of Devendra and his army was revealed.

He misbehaves with women and use them for the momentarily pleasure. He is a devil.

In previous update the change in the behavior of swara have a reason. She wanted to save sanskar.

While swara was saying yes to Devendra for their friendship I was little confused.

But she was not facing sanskar and she avoid the eye contact between sanskar.

Sanskar was helplessly call her name. I was little confused for my prediction.

But in swara's eyes the concern for sanskar was visible.

And sanskar was also ready to sacrifice the secret of key for swara. When Devendra asked the key sanskar was ready to sacrifice his life. But for her he was ready to sacrifice it.

And sanskar realized that Devendra is a viper. A wolf in lamb's coat.

And he tried to misbehave swara. But at the end swara gave a beautiful reply. Really loved it.

The Devendra early realized the fact that swara is important for sanskar. He was worried for their closeness At last sanskar got the sword. I believe he will escape with swara.

Because they have to expose the real traitor.

And I forgot a important hint in the story. In the palace of maheswari's Devendra have messengers. I think so many other people also involved in the traitor story.

It was a awesome update. But some events were really horrible.

Waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Hi Shru
I know I'd reserved chapter 16 on that thread. But I'll unres it here! I hope you don't
mind!
Okay, so coming to chapter 16-
Wow!! This was an unexpected twist. I mean I'd thought that it would be Laksh or
Adarsh but it was This Devendra who I loathe to the core of my heart. Ughhh This
man is so disgustingly horrible and he's such a bas***d! Sorry dude, unresing
after reading chapter 17. I was about to miss the city bus as I was reading chapter
17. Anyways will rant about that later.
This guy was so irritating! I mean, how more loathsome can a man get. And the
way he said the lady too of course, I understood this man's intentions. I was sure he
wants to do some hanky-panky with her and torture my Prince Charming. Holy
Hell!

Those men dragged Veer!! I'll KILL them!! How dare they drag such a loyal animal.
Don't they have a heart! If I would have been there, I would have made sure that they
don't hurt my Veer! Um...zyada ho gya?? But I would have surely tried I tell you.
Tried my best.

Sanskaar called her his wife! OMGGG, the feels here when he calls her his wife<3
How good and heart warming it feels!*big smile*
Swara should ride with Devendra?? Why in hell?? I tell you his intentions are soo
very wrong and of course that was proved in Chapter 17. That vile. He tied Sanskaar
! Aww my poor Prince. What he must be going through! Being tied like that. And
Swara is so disturbed at that! Of course she would. She loves him soo much! Aww
my SwaSan<3 But this Moron here is so damn irritating

So Devendra was the traitor. See I told you earlier that I knew it wasn't Laksh.
I had full intuition that Laksh isn't the one responsible for all this crap!! Had
Kaveri and he been together anyhow? Maybe the came together to rob Sanskaar and
kill him but Kavita died instead. And Shru, please don't be like RS to bring Cavity
back! Definitely no... Okay??

I knew Swara would be doing this trick. She's trying to buy Sanskaar time and
somehow escape from there. But Shona, this plan of yours is gonna land you
nowhere! The update was awesome!
Sakshi

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Shruti dear 🤗

First of all I am really sorry for my late comments..😊 I am going to comment for your last three chapters 15, 16 and 17...All three were amazing..😃

Poor Swara felt really sad while leaving that haveli na..So many memories she is taking back from there..
And then our brave and chivalrous Sanskaar..He just couldn't keep himself away from helping that innocent man..😳 And he submitted himself to get flogged for rescuing him..His character is pure gold, I must say.. But he gave it back to the man who hit him, by means of the challenge he posed before receiving those 5 whiplashes.👏I am in awe of his pure mettle..😃😃

But then when their leader arrived, I had expected it to be Adarsh, Lakshya or Pawan..😲 But he turned out to be Devendra..hmm..that was an interesting stroke..I was literally fearful when Swara had to mount his horse, poor Sanskaar..he was took along for questioning like a thief..😭 and all he could think about was about his Swara..

By the way when are you planning for the entry of this Pawan..😉 It has reached chapter 17 and there is still no sign of him..😛 I don't believe that something had happened to him, like Sanskaar did..😆 I know that you are actually planning a real surprise for us😳 hain na Shru😊😊

Ok..and coming to the chapter 17..Oh my god..!! that was so real..I was wondering how Swara is going to escape from that beast.. and poor Sanskaar, his plight was unbearable ..And thank god, there were those weapons in that room..otherwise I can't even think about what would have happened to Swara..😲😲

And now I have no fear at all..I am really sure that Sanskaar can make it..because he is filled with such intense sense of revenge against those scoundrels..I am awaiting the massive bloodshed which is bound to happen😆 I am not being cruel you know..😉

Such a wonderful story this is yaar Shru...Love you for this..🤗

Originally posted by: NitaReid

RES for chapter 18

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Hi shruti,

Chapter 18 was so Good Shruti👏, the actions scene were awesome⭐️. I loved how Sanskar fought to protect his love and as you said a caged beast in him is unleashed after the last few hours of seeing his love suffer and i expected Sanskar anger and fury to take over this time and it did.

Pawan makes an entry and i am delighted😃... I knew an army that large will be much stronger for Sanskar to take on alone so i am glad his help arrived in nick of time. Devandra escaped, i knew he would after you told me in the last update about how you want him to live with a scar on his face.so i knew he is making out alive this chapter but i also know he will have to meet sanskar again and i wait for that day.

He wanted to go after devendra but one call from her literally changed his decision.I loved how even Pawan realised is Priority changed, especially the way he searched for a cloak and covered her gently before riding of to safety since he knows she is in shock and he need to look after her before everything else❤️.

I liked part 2 too..Ragini facing the guilt for what she did always make me happy.Awesome update shruti... Cant wait to read the next chapter . As i so want to see Sanskar taking care of Swara just like how we got swara taking care of sanskar..😊

Originally posted by: amimus

Oh my what live can make a person do. Sanskaar is incredible, a lone man fighting off so many is simply astonishing.

Swara I feel for her, this incident will leave an indelible mark on her and it will take sometime for her to come out of it. Hopefully sanskaar is there to help her out of this misery.

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Nice..👍🏼

Originally posted by: simsen23

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Shruti...😉

Devendra escaped as expected, that jerk is needed in future..

But I want a painful death of him that too by sanskar,it 's because he is a lowlife..😡.Sanskar's new avatar is all because of the suppressed anger and pain he felt when swara was going through the humiliation.. It happens and particularly in that era ,a ladily's respect was very important...and it's swara,his beloved swara.

Pawan was there at the right time and he saw that side of his prince when sanskar's only priority was swara.Sanskar's concern and care was much needed for swara at that time.She is very strong, but realization of fear terrified her..only her prince can heal her and he will.😊

Thank God,Baghri is dead.That man has tortured sanskar a lot.😡..Now what will sanskar do with his mermaid princess,because her own father hates her and sister betrayed her.He can't let her go to the palace again..I hate sekhar a lot

😡..He is not worthy to be a father... My respect for Janki is increased more today.ragini is always in that dilemma, she can't enjoy, because of her Karma..

Looking forward to the next update...

Love,

Simi😊

Originally posted by: a_uma

wow.. beautifully written chapter 18.. and totally pulsing chapter... sanskar was fighting like a mad man just so that no one would harm his precious one.. I was so scared that he would be hurt... thankfully Pawan reached in time...👏.. but how did pawan know where was Devendra's camp and that swasan had been captured ???

loved the way sanskar took care of his precious swara.. even pawan sensed the change in him.. and its gr8 that sanskar's old tormentor bagri is dead.. 👏👏👏

what next ... now sanskar has two parts of the map.. what is his next move.. will swara be taken back to MM ???

Originally posted by: dilwali

Shruti it was wonderful and I loved each and every part of this update how bravely sanskar fought with so many people and how he took care of swara n finally you introduced pawan ohhh I am so much des to read next updates
lots of love

Originally posted by: Sanya17

That leach creep devendra escaped😡 I had a feeling that he will not die soon we have to wait for his death he is the main villain BT the biggest proof of sanskars innocence too he wont be finished too soon BT this guess isn't much helping me to wait for his death I want a horryfiying death for him the more we have to wait the more horrifying death I want for him that gives him deserved punishment nd which removes the dissapoinment we got by seeing him escaped i want his death to be worthy of our wait😡😡😡

bagri dead😃😃😃 at least here our account got settled the one who had tortured sanskar so much died n we got pleasure to see him dead I wanted him dead ever since chapter one finally he is dead 😃😃😃

Pawan made his entry 😛 he is sounding completely positive till now he is intelligent and knows sanskar too well don't u dare to make him negative if u make him negative i will😡 😈😆actually I and many others really like him😉 but the important thing is he knows sanskar too well and I think he has too much info if those info goes to devendras hand sanskar will be in too big trouble and I don't want such a big trouble for them especially after what swasan went through the time for creating new trouble has passed its time to solve

Hmm I am sounding a bit angry what to do you made us hate devendra too successfully that his survival though I know for short time but still made me angry and really unhappy I hope u will understand my anger😛

BT this ppart gave me hope that maybe pawan is positive he and devendra working together is too unlikely he is complete opposite to that leach devendra and have real strength of character such type of person will never work for a creep like devendra that too against sanskar unless there is some iron clad reason how did he came suddenly this is a surprise we will get to know later but swaras thought that you will not want someone like pawan as enemy is making me worried that was exactly what I had told in one of my previous comment this is not giving me good feeling I really hope I am wrong his entry was dramatic but pawans dialogue was hilarious u could have left some for me this made me laugh it was like they were talking about their favourate food which sanskar finished without sharing😆😆 the way pawan was busy in deciphering sanskars action looks like he already understood he has got a sister in law

Hope to see you soon with new part