DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF-T3-DELETED- AN-PG 1 - Page 12

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

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Shekhar😡🤬

Originally posted by: piccola1

Oh My God, Shruti - this waa a heart in the mouth, harrowing read.😲

Despite being forewarned (Thanks dear !) or perhaps because of it, Devendra evokes terror and repulsion. And Swara - our super brave, heroic Swara ⭐️- admiration for her sheer guts to take on that lecher.👏

I am so thankful that you didnt do an Indian TV on us and leave us with an update that left her still at his mercy and us imagining the worst. Big hug. 🤗

That she, in spite of having been maliciously played with and then mauled by that animal😡, was still capable of connecting with her prince and reading his message, is awesome!👏

Moreso, that she used the brief chance she got, to attack that lech back AND free her Sanskaar - Wow ! 😃You have made her truly worthy of respect ! 👏

So far, we had seen a Swara that won our hearts because she was a truly good human being - compassionate, honest, guileless and courageous in the face of the worst adversity. Someone you would love for being unblemished. 😊

But now, she is so much more ! Here is a Rajput princess who can fight her own wars.⭐️ We have seen her kill a man in self defence (with the help of brave Veer) and now turn around what was a lost cause into a very possible victory. ⭐️⭐️

With Sanskaar free and raring for revenge, she has won the right to be by his side as he fights his way out of this skirmish as well as the larger battle he has to win.😃

Prince Sanskaar has truly met his match ! 😃A valiant hero with his own valiant princess! ❤️❤️

Thank you for a super update ! 🤗Eager to read the next one - for them to win their way out of this, ⭐️for Sanskaar to beat that animal 😡to a pulp AND for this awesome duo to finally acknowledge their love for each other !😳

And to agree, that the Princess needs to be where she belongs..(come hell or high water) - right beside her Prince !❤️

P.S. The update was so Swara dominated that I missed mentioning how well portrayed is Sunny boy's mindless desperation, his tearing need to get his hanfs free so he could save his beloved princess. That fleeting kiss on her head is a masterstroke (and a signature kiss of our golden couple even in the TV version)! 😳😃 Love Swasan and that last part ! ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Sojourn through Hell: "All Relationships go through hell, real relationships get through it. (anonymous)

Swara and Sanskaar (whether both know it or acknowledge it or accept it) - they are bound together and they will get through this hell and are halfway through it already.

Okay - so Swara did have the gumption to go through the plan - however, ill-advised it was. As we guessed, Sanskaar gauged her intentions and was anguished for her. In the end she did quite pull it off, managing to wound Devendra (a little lower, a little harder could have gashed his throat, though Swara might have had a hard time recovering after inflicting a fatal wound, however deserving the assailant was of being brutally hacked). She is truly courageous - she did what had to be done despite being terrified, in spite of all odds being stacked against her.

And Yesss - It was Bagri.

The end was awe inspiring, could truly visualise it - Sanskaar, holding the sword, shielding Swara, ready for the battle! The soldiers have no idea that what is to be unleashed on them - for Sanskaar is like "You can't scare him - he has known fear beyond every other." -( Grapes of Wrath)

Sanskaar has already faced his greatest fear of almost losing Swara, nothing much can scare him now!

BTW: Is is Karma (lovely symmetry if it can be called that) that Swara picks the very sword which Devendra lays down moments before, which is the Maheswari heirloom sword?

love,

Nyna

PS: In case you are wondering on the short comment - most of the chapter was about Devender - I detest (this is the kindest word for my feelings) men who believe that women exist only to 'befriend' and 'entertain' them (my chauvinism is so deep-seated that even if the woman is 'willing', I detest the man). As a writer, I am sure that this is what you would want to be conveyed and you have succeeded superbly. 👏👏

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

main yeh chap padkar sun mun si ho gai hoon .bas last main thoda hope tha. yeh devendra tho ****,****, puri thread uske liye kam padegi.hmm acha laga sanky samajh gaya ki swra kya karna cnahti hai.par problem ye thi ki devendra bhi samajh gaya..aise hi nahi maine use 16 ke cumnt par intelligent kaha tha aur aapne bhi use intelligent banaya hai.par who **** hi rahega.aur swara ki aazadi ke badle sanskaar keycode dene taiyaar ho gaya. aur swara bichari phasi hone k bavjood bhi ache se situation ko samb halne ki koshish kar rahi thi. so brave.aur mujhe yeh accha laga ki swasan devendra ka dhyaan dusre k taraf se hatakar apni taraf khich rahe the jaise dusre insaan ko bacha rahe ho.aur yeh bhi padne layak tha ki sanky jab bhi gusse mein bolta devendra kaap uthta.jaise pata ho agar jo yeh chut gaya tho meri tho aabani.aur swara ka last main sanky ko dekhna aur who khanjaar uthana aur devendra ko 2 tyms maarna . meri tho padte waqt hi aankhen dhari ki dhari reh gayi.aur who sword sanskaar ko lautana.uski rope kholna..aur who something near to kiss haiyee kita cute tha aur samajhdari bhara jaise keh raho tensio chodo main hoon ab.then ab tho sanskaar aa chuka ab tho devendra aur uske saathi tho gaye kaam se.yaha swara pura chapter chura k le gayi part kya koi jaan paya us***** k saath swara ko dekhkar auir who badtameezi sehen kar ke hamare prince par kya biti hogi.ab thoda bagri par dhyaan de .jab who devendra ki entry hui thi na. tab jab main soch rahi thi na koun ho sakta hai tab bagri b hi ek option tha tumne nxt chapter main usse bhej dia.par ab jaldi se mujhe mere nxt hero ki jhalak dikha do.yes my dearest horsie.plz pretty plz.

Originally posted by: geetkumar

My God Shruti!!!!!!!!

Are you alright? I can very well imagine how drained out you might be after writing such an episode. It is truly taxing for the writer, isn't it?

Do you realize how gifted you are? you have the ability to grab the reader's throat with your words and demand 200% attention from him / her.

Your words!! They are like a film running in front of our eyes. I literally had to stifle my screams of rage and to call for some divine intervention. But it is not required, is it?Our brave heroes are more than capable of dealing with the situation.

Swara!! Our brave Swara,My hero. managed not only to save herself but also to free her dark knight. And now I am completely sure that he will get out of it along with Swara. But I seriously dread the aftermath of it. How devastating it will be? Will Swara ever be able to come out of it? Will Sanskaar ever be able to forgive himself? Oohh... ! The helplessness and the mind numbing fear they both must have felt!!! This fear can actually break the strongest, but then again I have a very strong faith that this horrifying incident will forge a bond between them with steel, which will be impossible for anyone to break.

Shruti, a small request. Take as much time as you want, but please, please, please give a slow painful, agonizingly painful and horrifying death to this Devendra and his men.We Swasan fans will feel rewarded. Thank you.

Love❤️

Geet

Originally posted by: Swasanian

Shruti,

I know I have never commented before. But that in no way means I have not wanted to. It is simply how brutish time is, more than 10 minutes spent on this site on working days is impermissible to me. But if I do get those 10 minutes, I choose to spend them reading The Dark Knight.
I would first of all want to thank you, from the deepest bottoms of my heart for being brave enough to start a story so utterly fascinating. I have never been in love before the way I am right now with SwaSan. To call them my obsession would be an utter disgraceful insult to not only their pure and sacred bond, but also to the immense adoration I have for them. The way Sanskar loves her, like his every breath, every heart beat depends on her-it is truly unfathomable.
And if I were to speak of your story, I would fall short of words. There is probably no adjective I can find, truly powerful enough to even attempt to describe your dark knight. The character in itself is so powerful-his heroism, his unwavering confidence and his sense of righteousness, I am beyond awed. Having lived a life of such grief and loss, he still has the rational part of him functioning, it is unbelievable. The more I read, the more I seem to fall in love with Sanskar. And I know he would have defeated all those that came in his way with no effort whatsoever, but now he is helpless, having lost his heart.
The intensity of his feelings is such in magnitude, that I being a reader feel it to my depths. This particular chapter of yours was so mighty, that you almost had me trembling by the end of it. I am literally fighting with time right now, but I cannot resist saying all that I have in mind since the beginning of this story.
I know this being one from times people like us have not seen, it cannot easily be imagined. But to have someone like you write it-trust me, the vision is in front of my eyes. The flow, the pattern that you have brought in-it really is commendable. There is nothing overly dramatic or unbelievable about it. Every next chapter is like this is the only possible thing that could have happened after the one prior to it. And I have no words for the way you are taking forward SwaSan's love story.
Trust me, I felt his anguish this time, of seeing his precious beloved being stripped by a disgusting leech like Devendra. Our little Swara, too brave for her own good- oh, what to do.
But its time to rejoice. Our hero is free. And Swara is his biggest strength. If he has her, Sanskar can fight the world. What are few soldiers, then?
I know the cycle of life, and I deeply appreciate the fact that you manage two chapters weekly for us. And the unexpected surprises that we have been receiving, in the form of early updates in the last few days, I literally want to stand up and solute you.
If you can do so much for your readers, trust me Shruti, I promise you, I will make it a point to give you all of my views on every chapter henceforth-no matter what.
Between two updates, you literally keep me on tenterhooks. I wait so desperately for each progressive update, I almost want to laugh at my own childish glee when I see there is an update from you.

Keep this story going Shruti. Long and long and as long as you can. It is my most favorite thing. I forget the nuances of my own life for a while, so deeply I am affected by it. It has made me believe more firmly in the existence of such overpowering love and desire, and even though it is fiction, I sort of ridiculously refuse to let myself out of it. And you have made me fall deeper in love with Swara and Sanskar. I have only two words for Dark Knight, devastatingly deep-seated and archaic.
Thankyou Shruti.
Yours in crazy admiration,
Anu

Originally posted by: rashidhingra

Hey,

I've been off for so long! Missed 15, 16 and 17. Apologies. Was not in town.

This one would be really long Shru!

Damn, that end to 14 didn't see a progression. 😲 I was expecting some more light moments. But tbh, I think I liked the way you weaved it. I have got a feeling leaving this light moment for now, would end up giving us a much more intense scene between the two later on 😳😉

Anyway, the way sanskaar was avoiding Swara's gaze to protect himself from drowning in her eyes😆. Their silent communication through eyes. These two are *I don't have words to describe them*❤️. Amidst everything, all they think about is the other person's safety and welfare. Giving us relationship goals ❤️ Swara's state of panic on seeing sanskaar being lashed out on his back. 😭

Omg, Devendra is like the most filthiest character I have ever read. His lecherous comments and the way he pries swara, is absolutely disgusting. The immediate panic and fear that grips sanskaar for swara when he realizes Devendra's intention connects with us so much. How he hides swara from the prying eyes everytime!

How swara, enters into this gamble staking her dignity just to protect sanskaar and buy him some time. These two are aww.

I have one doubt, how was he so sure that the bearded man would be sanskaar only ?

Also,was he aware of that sanskaar kidnapping swara plot ? Or he thought that they have actually eloped ?

Chapter 17

Could you please stop writing such gripping chapters and plots ?

No! Don't do that. I adore them.❤️

These angst full chapters are so gripping. The way you have written the scene - Flawless👏. one can actually feel each and every emotion and can feel the fear and panic for swara and sanskaar envelope them as well.

There can be no punishment more grave for sanskaar than seeing his life, Swara's dignity being violated in front of him and partly because of him. I can not imagine the guilt and worry and HELL that he would have gone through when Devendra was doing such heinous things to his life! The way you have penned the scene, the reactions and the emotions I literally had goosebumps on my skin. I am actually at short of words to describe the plethora of emotions I went through while reading this chapter. I won't be detailing out the instances of Devendra's assault because i just cant make myself do that.

This has cemented their relationship. If they had any doubt regarding their feelings for each other,this nightmare has definitely cleared the depth of their feelings for each other.

I admire the way you have shown swara glancing at sanskaar frequently to gain strength from him.

lastly, I would like to again compliment you for your sheer brilliance with this chapter.👏👏👏

This one , despite being so brutal is by far the best along with samalkoonj one for exploring and bringing out their deep feelings for each other on the shore. I am waiting eagerly for 18 to see how Sanskaar handles this situation and how this nightmare leads to some sort of acceptance from both of them about their feelings , if not to each other than to themselves atleast especially swara.

Thanks for the PM Shru and apologies once again for missing 3 chapters together!😔

P.S - By now you must have realized my love for angst full chapters! 😉