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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Sujay!
The first part was too good!
So Swara is to marry Sanskaar and she doesn't even know that. And the way Sanskaar is teasing her jeez..
Will be waiting for the second part when Swara comes to know that the 'stranger' is her would be husband!!
Do update soon
Sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jay congrats on the new story.
Awesome start, loved it.
Continue soon, shall be waiting.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb dear continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Very sweet story.
SM is awesome..
And swara the cutie..

The garden chat was awesome..
What will be swara's reaction when he see the stranger as her would be husband..

Continue soon..
Thank you for the PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font size="2">Very nice Sujay. </font><font size="2">🤗 Very romantic, Sanskaar falling in love with Swara at first sight! You have portrayed her so well---beautiful inside and out, so innocent and guileless.

But why was Sanskaar against the idea of marriage before? He feels he is a broken man, who cannot give a happy life to anybody. What has happened in his past? Would you be revealing that in Part 2?

Do update soon.

Lots of Love,

---Viji
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Thank you so much viji 😃
Yup your confusion will be solved in next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: deccan.ruler

Awesome part sujoy man ur a good at writing stories swara is really a chidish girl Dad jee Mom jee rang the bells in sanskar's mind poor sanskar he was hating the marriage and now after seeing her would-be wife smiling as if he got his life through her.swara described very well the behaviour of sanskar and sanskar smartly played with her.waiting for swara's reaction on wedding day.
Thanks for the PM sujoy waiting eagerly for second part.continue soon


Thank you so much sara 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
o mg
it was so sweet
humko to ab swara bitwa ka reactionwaa dekhna h ji...sanky ko dekhe...yaar convert it into three shorts plz...know you r busy...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: gayu6

Loved it pls continue soon😃


Thank you gayu 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nupur_5


Read it before you could PM me!!

Plz have some mercy & update soon...like real soon!
It's amazing!


Thank you so much nupur 😃
Yup i will update but after 3-4 days promised 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dear Sujoy,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Simply loved it - So Sanskaar who is against the marriage (why???) fall for her at first sight. Poor Swara terrified of marrying a man about whom she has not heard a single good thing😉</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Their conversation was good especially Sanskaar bolstering her impression of him being arrogant.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Do complete soon.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nyna</font>


Thank you so much nyna 😃
Glad you liked it

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