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Posted: 9 years ago
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Clear because some thing is happened
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
Waiting for OS
and PHIR SE...


Unres..

😆
Amazing ...sujay...swara so innocent..,cute..
Sanskar adoring his beautiful beauty... 😳
Swara complaints against sanskar so funny...
Really waiting for next update 👏
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Late but res...

Unres...

Aww sorryyy.. I totally forgot this .. Broo...

Awesome... Description are superb.. Soo.. Now he is happy with his marriage... Aww
That's what he should see that photo before... 😆

He frightened her now what will be her reactions.. I'm eagar to know...

Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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In Waitin list yaaar...
Jaldi unress krona...😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Another one 😊
Great going sujoy 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice Sujay. 🤗 Very romantic, Sanskaar falling in love with Swara at first sight! You have portrayed her so well---beautiful inside and out, so innocent and guileless.

But why was Sanskaar against the idea of marriage before? He feels he is a broken man, who cannot give a happy life to anybody. What has happened in his past? Would you be revealing that in Part 2?

Do update soon.

Lots of Love,

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome part sujoy man ur a good at writing stories swara is really a chidish girl Dad jee Mom jee rang the bells in sanskar's mind poor sanskar he was hating the marriage and now after seeing her would-be wife smiling as if he got his life through her.swara described very well the behaviour of sanskar and sanskar smartly played with her.waiting for swara's reaction on wedding day.
Thanks for the PM sujoy waiting eagerly for second part.continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it pls continue soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read it before you could PM me!!
Plz have some mercy & update soon...like real soon!
It's amazing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Sujoy,
Simply loved it - So Sanskaar who is against the marriage (why???) fall for her at first sight. Poor Swara terrified of marrying a man about whom she has not heard a single good thing😉

Their conversation was good especially Sanskaar bolstering her impression of him being arrogant.

Do complete soon.

Nyna

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