'Destiny decides it all'- RagYa FF - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you thank you thank you so much for this...

Chandra u won't believe I m always waiting for ur stories...
I jz love this Ragini.. the old one..the innocent, childish yet mature...

May I suggest u smthing if u won't mind? Plz keep ragini like this only...don't change her like cvs did...I know u won't but said just for my selfish satisfaction... sorry
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice update... I literally felt ragini's pain n m sure other readers too...
As I never liked swa-----lak..n to be very honest I just hate them..lol...so I felt pinned at their scenes but this is what makes a story balanced...
Great job...will be waiting for next part...

Soon plz...but hv to say both SwaRagini are the best...both are ready to sacrifice their love for each other...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yaar too good but one thing don't make ragini negative and plz bring new hero for her after what ever u want as raglak or some thing to do plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Very nice update... I literally felt ragini's pain n m sure other readers too...
As I never liked swa-----lak..n to be very honest I just hate them..lol...so I felt pinned at their scenes but this is what makes a story balanced...
Great job...will be waiting for next part...

Soon plz...but hv to say both SwaRagini are the best...both are ready to sacrifice their love for each other...


Hahaha to be very honest, I can't stand Swa------Lak together AT ALL. And don't worry, I love Ragini. I would never do anything bad to her character
Edited by chandra1998 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: azira07

yaar too good but one thing don't make ragini negative and plz bring new hero for her after what ever u want as raglak or some thing to do plz


It's always RagLak. Just wait and watch. And don't worry, Ragini is the lead. She can't be negative 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3:-

@at night in the hospital
(Everyone is inside Ragini's cabin..Swara and Laksh are sitting together..Laksh is looking at Swara and smiling..Ragini sees this..she is hurt but doesn't show it..Doctor comes for the check up)
Shekhar- Doctor hum Ragini ko kab ghar le jaa sakte hai?
Doctor- Abhi nahi..aap chahe toh kal subah tak inhe le jaa sakte hai..abhi inhe thode araam ki zaroorat hai..aur haa hospital visiting hours khatam ho chuke hai..aap sab ghar chale jayiye aur aap mein se koi ek patient ke saath ruk jayiye..sabka yaha rukna allowed nahi hai..aap log khud decide kar lijiye kaun rukega
(The doctor goes and everyone thinks who shall stay with Ragini)
Swara- Baba main ruk jaati hoon..Ragini ko main sambhal lungi..aap sab ghar chale jayiye
Ragini- Nahi Swara tumne bhi abb tak kuch nahi khaya hoga..tum chali jaao..hum akele reh lenge..hum jaante hai humari chinta mein abb tak kisine kuch nahi khaaya..aap log ghar jaakar aaram kijiye..hum abb theek hai
Annapurna- Nahi Ragini beta..hum aise tumhe akela chodkar nahi jaa sakte..aur yaha kisi aurat ka rehna theek nahi hoga kyuki inn sab kaam mein mardo ki zyaada zaroorat padti hai..agar kahi raat ko pharmacy se medicine laane ji zaroorat padi toh Swara ka akele raat ko baahar nikalna theek nahi hoga
(Annapurna turns towards Laksh)
Annapurna- Laksh ek kaam karo tum aaj raat Ragini ke saat yaha ruk jaao..raat ko kahi jaane ki zaroorat padi toh Swara nahi jaa payegi
(Laksh and Ragini look at each other and then at Swara..Swara is okay with it..she has no problem)
Swara (Laughs)- Arrey tum dono mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho? Mujhe koi problem nahi..I trust you both a lot
Laksh (Whispers in swara's ears so that no one else can hear)- But Swara main kaise yaha ruk sakta hu? mera yaha ragini ke saath rukna thoda awkward nahi hoga?
Swara (Whispers)- Kuch awkward nahi hoga Laksh..tum hi toh kehte ho na ki Ragini tumhari dost hai..toh apni dost ke liye tum itna nahi kar sakte?
(Laksh looks at Ragini and Ragini understands his problem..She tries to save him..she talks to Annapurna and calls her maa by mistake)
Ragini- nahi Maa...humara matlab hai Annapurna aunty..hum theek hai..Laksh ko yaha rukne ki koi zaroorat nahi
Laksh (smiles)- Koi baat nahi Ragini..tum meri dost ho..yeh toh mera farz hai..main ruk jaunga tumhare saath
Ragini- Nahi Laksh koi zaroorat...
(Before Ragini can complete her sentence she is stopped by Laksh)
Laksh- Chuppp! Maine kaha na main yaha rukunga tumhare saath..abb bas aur koi behes nahi
Ragini (Shocked)- par Laksh...
Swara- Ragini chup karo..kaha na Laksh ne woh tumhare pass ruk jayega raat ko..toh bas baat yahi khatam
(Swara turns towards all the family members and asks them to leave..They all leave..Swara looks at Laksh and gives him a flying kiss..Laksh blushes and smiles)
Swara (To the Gadodias and Maheshwaris)- Chaliye abb hum sab chalte hai..Ragini ko araam karne ki zaroorat hai
Annapurna- Laksh, Ragini dono apna dhyaan rakhna..hum kal subah hi yaha aayenge tumse milne
(Both Laksh and Ragini smile..after everyone goes, the dinner comes..They both look at each other uncomfortably)
Ward boy- Aapka khana..yaha table pe rakh ke jaa raha hu..kha lijiyega
Laksh (Takes the plate in hand and goes near Ragini)- Ragini tum khaana kha lo..bhookh lagi hogi tumhe
(Ragini sees that the plate has only one roti and so she decides to let Laksh eat it)
Ragini- Laksh ye pheeka pheeka khaana hume pasand nahi hai..aap kha lijiye..hum kal subah ghar jaakar kha lenge
Laksh- Chup..bohot ziddi ho tum..chup chap khaana kha lo
Ragini- Laksh humne kaha na hume yeh sab khaana pasand nahi hai..aap kha lijiye na
Laksh (sits near her)- Tum aise nahi manogi
(Laksh takes a piece of roti in his hand)
Laksh (Happily)- Chalo mooh kholo
Ragini- Laksh nahi aap...
(Just when she is about to complete the sentence, Laksh puts the piece of roti inside her mouth)
Laksh (Laughs)- Yeee I win!
Edited by chandra1998 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww so cute. .raglak's friendship is really cute..stubborn Laksh n caring Ragini..😳
Swara's flying kiss to Laksh 😭...uff...

But ittu sa...

Update soon n longer...n also waiting for ur other RagLak ff..
😊
Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Awesome update
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Good Yaar thanks for Pm waiting for raglak love story lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Aww Laksh feeding Ragini
It's a great story

Can't wait to see how RagLak happens

Update soon

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