'Destiny decides it all'- RagYa FF - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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RagYa are so adorable😳
update soon please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey I love your SS ! please update soon! Pm me when you update :)
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Yeah Please Update soon 😳
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Part- 4

(Just when she is about to complete the sentence, Laksh puts the piece of roti inside her mouth)
Laksh (Laughs)- Yeee I win!
Ragini (Has tears in her eyes so looks the other way)- Laksh aap bhi na bilkul bacche hai..pata nahi hum shaadi ke baad apko kaise sambhal payenge
(Ragini forgets the truth for a second..Both Laksh and Ragini get silent then)
Ragini (Realising what she said)- Sorry Laksh woh galti se humare mooh se nikal gaya..I am sorry
Laksh (Silently)- Sorry toh mujhe kehna chahiye Ragini..meri wajah se yeh sab hua hai
(The mood gets sad between both of them and to light up the mood Ragini puts a piece of roti in Laksh's mouth and laughs loudly)
Ragini (laughs)- Yeh dekhiye humne bhi aakhir aapko khila hi diya
(Both of them laugh and feed each other like best friends..Laksh suddenly stops laughing)
Laksh- Ragini?
Ragini- Haa Laksh
Laksh (Forwarding his hand)- Will you be my best friend)
Ragini (Smiles at shakes his hand)- Kyu nahi? bilkul..accha abb raat ho chuki hai aap so jayiye..kal ghar bhi toh jaana hai
Laksh- Nahi Ragini agar raat ko tumhe meri zaroorat padi toh? tum so jaao main nahi so sakta
Ragini- Aap nahi soyenge toh hum bhi nahi soyenge
Laksh (angrily)- Tum sach mein bohot ziddi ho..theek hai main sofa pe so jaata hu..kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh mujhe jaga dena okay?
Ragini (Smiles)- theek hai Laksh
(Both of them sleep..Laksh is sleeping on the sofa and Ragini is sleeping on the patient bed..Laksh is in heavy sleep and Ragini is still awake..she is looking at Laksh and smiling..she gets up from the bed and goes near Laksh..she kneels down on the ground and sits near the sofa admiring his face..she gently caresses his hair and keeps smiling)
Ragini (smiles and gently touches his hair)- Laksh zindagi main aaj tak aapse zyaada humne kabhi kisise pyaara nahi kiya..bachpan se suna tha pyaar mein apni khushi se zyaada uss insaan ki khushi maaine rakhti jisse hum pyaar karte hai..aur kisine sach hi kaha hai..zaroori nahi ki jisse hum pyaar karte hai woh bhi humse pyaar kare..humari khushi aap se judi hui hai laksh..agar aap swara ke saath khush hai toh hum bhi khush hai
(She kisses his forehead and keeps her head on his chest for a second and hears his heart beat. She then gets up and goes to sleep on the bed)
@morning in the ICU
(Laksh is sleeping..Ragini is packing her stuff and suddenly the Gadodias and the Maheshwaris enter..Ragini touches the feet of all the elders..they see Laksh sleeping and Annapurna is angry at him)
Ragini (Smiles)- arrey aap sab aa gaye? hum bas apna saamaan hi pack kar rahe the
Annapurna (angrily moves towards the sofa)- Laksh! Utho Laksh! humne tumhe yaha sone ke liye rakha tha ya Ragini ka dhyaan rakhne ke liye?
Ragini- Arrey nahi Maa...humara matlab hai aunty..hum hi ne Laksh ko kaha ki woh so jaaye..woh toh jaagna chahte the
(Annapurna realises her problem and comes near her..she cups Ragini's cheek and kisses her forehead)
Annapurna- beta tum mujhe aaj bhi maa bula sakti ho..bhale hi tum meri bahu na bano par maine tumse dil se apni beti maan liya hai
Ragini (smiles)- Jee maa..hum bhi aapko maa maan chuke hai
(Swara wakes Laksh up and he is shocked to see everyone in the morning so early..he then looks at Ragini..she is ready to go back home)
Laksh- Ragini tumne mujhe jagaya kyu nahi?
Ragini- Laksh kal aapko bohot bhaag daud karna pada..aap bohot achhi neend so rahe the isiliye hume aapko jagana theek nahi laga
Laksh- Ragini tum bhi na..sach mein bohot ziddi ho
(The doctor enters with the discharge papers and lets Ragini go)
Doctor- Ragini how are you now?
Ragini- Doctor hum abb bilkul theek hai..Thank you
Doctor- Accha abb tum ghar jaa sakti ho..lekin dhyaan rahe tumhe zyaada kaam ya bhaag daud nahi karna hai..abb bhi tum thodi weak ho
Ragini (Smiles)- Okay doctor!
Doctor (Thinking that Laksh and Ragini are still engaged)- Laksh ji, aap apni fiance ka khayaal rakhiyega..inhe bed rest ki bohot zaroorat hai
(Laksh looks at Ragini and then at Swara..All three of them have an eye lock)
Laksh (Silently)- okay doctor
(Everyone leaves the hospital and all head towards baadi..Laksh, Swara and Ragini are in one car)
@Inside the car
(Ragini is sitting on the back seat and Swara is sitting near Laksh on the front seat near the driver seat..Laksh can see Ragini's face in the front mirror..Swara and Laksh are talking and Ragini feels left out)
Swara- Toh Laksh batao zara kal tumne aur tumhari hone wali saali ne hospital mein saath kitne maze kiye?
Laksh (Laughs)- Swara tum nahi jaanti tumhari behen kitni ziddi hai..kitna jhagad rahi thi kal mujhse khaane ke liye..mera mann nahi tha khaane ka but phir bhi usne mujhe khilakar hi dam liya..pagal hai woh bilkul
Swara (Shocked)- Accha? Ragini ka aisa bhi koi roop hai mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha..maine toh hamesha ragini ko sweet simple bado ki baat maanne wali ladki ki tarah hi jaana hai
Laksh- Waise Swara aaj tum lag badi accha rahi ho
Swara (Proudly)- Sirf aaj? main toh roz hi acchi lagti hu..aakhir Maheshwaris ki hone wali bahu hu
Laksh- accha? zyaada bhao mat khao..agar main nahi hota toh yeh kabhi nahi hota..tum hamesha swara bose hi rehti
(They keep fighting like this the whole journey..They finally reach baadi..They get inside and sharmistha welcomes them)
Sharmistha- Arrey aa gaye ye teeno..aao aao andar aao
Laksh (points at Swara and runs)- Maa aapki yeh beti pure raaste mera sar kha rahi thi..kaise sambhal leti ho aap ise?
Swara (runs behind him)- Accha main sar khaati hu tumhara? Abhi batati hu ruko
(They start playing like kids and sharmistha takes Ragini inside..Ragini goes inside her room to keep her stuff..she comes back to hall and Laksh sees her)
Laksh- Arrey Ragini tum yaha kyu ho? yaad nahi doctor ne kya kaha? jaao apne kamre mein rest karo
Ragini- Laksh hum theek hai..aap fikar mat kijiye..hume sabse kuch baat karni hai isliye hum yaha aaye hai
(Ragini looks at everyone and makes an announcement)
Ragini (announcing)- Kyuki abb humari aur Laksh ki sagaai toot chuki hai aur hum bhi hospital se wapas aa chuke hai isliye hum chahte hai ki Swara aur Laksh ki sagaai aaj hi ho jaaye
Shekhar (shocked)- Ragini ye tu kya keh rahi hai? itni jaldi?
Durga Prasad- Haa Ragini itni jaldi sab kaise hoga?
Ragini- Aap log fikar mat kijiye sab kuch aaj hi ho jayega..sagaai mein kisiko bulaane ki zaroorat nahi hai..ghar ke sab log ho wahi bohot hai..lekin sagaai toh aaj hi hogi
(Laksh and Swara look at Ragini..Both are shocked but happy that Ragini is supporting them so much..Ragini holds swara's hand and takes her to her room..the Maheshwaris leave to get Laksh ready for the engagement party)
Ragini- Chalo Swara hum tumhe tayyar kar dete hai..tumhe aaj shaam ko sabse sundar lagna hai
Swara (blushes)- Chalo Ragini
@in evening at the engagement party
(both the sisters are wearing lehengas..Swara is wearing a yellow lehenga and Ragini is wearing a pink lehenga..Both look beautiful but Ragini looks better..The Maheshwaris have come and everyone is waiting for Swaragini..They go down)
Laksh (To adarsh)- bhai ye ladkiya bhi kitna time lagati hai tayyar hone mein
Adarsh (points at swaragini)- Aa gayi dono behne lucky..udhar dekh
(Laksh is mesmerised to see both the sisters but even he accepts that Ragini looks more beautiful)
Adarsh- Waise kuch bhi keh ke lucky aaj Ragini zyaada sundar lag rahi hai..bilkul pari lag rahi hai
Laksh (looking at Ragini)- Haa bhai sahi kaha aapne Ragini bohot sundar lag rahi hai..but Swara bhi buri nahi lag rahi..woh bhi acchi hi lag rahi hai
Adarsh- Haa but comparatively Ragini aaj zyaada sundar lag rahi hai
Laksh- hmmm sahi kaha
(Swara sits near laksh..everyone is complimenting swaragini for their beauty..Ragini goes to the stage and starts dancing on the song "that's the way mahi ve"..seeing her dance like this Laksh gets angry and starts complaining about this to Swara)
Laksh (Angrily whispers)- tumhari behen ko koi akal hai ya nahi swara? kitni baar kaha doctor ne zyaada bhaag daud mat karo par ye madam toh naach rahi hai..chakkar khaake gir gayi toh?
Swara- offo Laksh tum bhi na..enjoy the moment..dekho kitna accha dance kar rahi hai woh
Laksh (Silently)- haaa par...accha okay
(Ragini is having a headache but still keeps dancing so that the party doesn't stop..she looks at Laksh and sees him happily talking with Swara..Pandit comes and asks everyone to get ready for the ring ceremony)
Pandit- Dulha aur dulhan dono ek dusre ko angoothi pehnaye
(Swara and Laksh both make each other wear the rings..as soon as the ring ceremony ends, Ragini faints..Everyone goes running towards her..Laksh cups her cheek and tries to wake her up)
Laksh (Worried)- Ragini! Ragini Utho..Ragini!
Durga Prasad- Laksh doctor ko bulao
(Laksh calls the doctor and takes Ragini to her room in his arms and lays her down on the bed..Doctor comes and checks Ragini)
Doctor- maine kaha tha ki inhe bilkul bhaag daud nahi karni hai..ye sab hua kyuki ye dance kar rahi thi..khair koi baat nahi maine injection de diya hai..abb inhe thodi der mein hosh aa jayega..but aage se dhyaan rakhiyega
(doctor goes and Ragini wakes up after an hour..she sees Laksh sitting near her and all others in the room)
Ragini- Laksh hum yaha? hum sab toh neeche the na
Laksh (angrily)- Ragini maine kitni baar mana kiya tha tumse ki zyaada bhaag daud mat karna..but tum meri koi baat nahi sunti..kya zaroorat thi tumhe dance karne ki?
Ragini (scared at his reaction)- Laksh hum toh bas aapki khushi mein shaamil hona chahte the..I'm sorry Laksh
Laksh- sorry? sorry se kya hoga Ragini? agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh? khair abhi tum araam karo..uth kar aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai..tumhara khaana kamre tak pohocha diya jayega..samjhi?
Ragini (scared of his anger)- Ji Laksh samajh gaye
Laksh- Good girl
(The Maheshwaris leave from there and everyone is sleeping..Ragini is standing near the window with Laksh's photo in hand..she looks at the photo and cries.."O re piya" song is playing at the background)
O RE PIYA
O RE PIYA
UDNE LAGA KYU MANN BAWLA RE
AAYA KAHA SE YEH HAUSLA RE
O RE PIYA
O RE PIYA
(On the other side, Laksh is thinking about Swara and sleeping peacefully..he recalls all his moments with Swara before sleeping)[BR
Edited by chandra1998 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Lovely update
Feel bad for Ragini
Hope she moves on

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Wonderful story waiting how it will progress. Feeling bad for ragini. Update soon waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
As always amazing...

Btw ur exams over?? They went good, m sure...

N so on plz update soon... very soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Poor Ragini! And Sarah she very careless : (
Like your stories continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Lovely update dear
Laksh is concerned for ragini aww loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

As always amazing...

Btw ur exams over?? They went good, m sure...

N so on plz update soon... very soon..


My exams? They sucked 😔 And thank you 😊

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