'Destiny decides it all'- RagYa FF

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part- 1

(So this starts from the day when Laksh told Ragini that he doesn't love her and wants to marry Swara. Laksh calls her and Ragini feels nervous seeing his name on her phone screen but still somehow receives the call.)
Ragini (with a shaking voice)- Hello
Laksh- Ragini mujhe tumse kuch important baat karni hai..Kya hum aaj shaam ko mil sakte hai please?
Ragini- Haa bilkul..boliye kaha aana hai hume? hum pohoch jayenge (She blushes as she doesn't know what Laksh was about to tell her and thinks he wants to take her out for a date)
Laksh- Cafe Delight chale? I'll pick you up at 4p.m..ok?
Ragini- Theek hai..hum aapka intazaar karenge
(Laksh was confused whether he should say the truth to Ragini or not because he knew she loved him a lot and he didn't want to hurt her..But he finally decided to meet her and tell her everything)
@Evening
(Laksh is waiting outside the baadi for Ragini..He calls her. Ragini wears a beautiful green anarkali suit and she looks like an angel)
Laksh- Hello Ragini tum tayyar ho gayi?
Ragini- Haa Laksh bas abhi nikalte hai..aap kaha hai?
Laksh- Tumhare ghar ke bahaar..tum aa jao main yahi hoon
Ragini (Blushing)- Theek hai
@Outside the baadi
(Ragini sees Laksh standing near his car waiting for her..She smiles. Laksh also sees her and for a second he keeps staring at her smile and thinks that after he tells her the truth this smile on her lips shall fade away because of him)
Ragini- Kya hua Laksh aap hume aise kyu dekh rahe hai?
Laksh (out of words)- Nahi kuch nahi..woh bas...tum aaj bohot acchi lag rahi ho
(Ragini blushes very bad and her cheeks get red)
Ragini- Dhanyawaad..waise aap bhi acche lag rahe hai
Laksh- Thank you
(Laksh then opens the front door of the car for her and asks her to sit..She sits and Laksh goes to the driver seat..He is about to start the car when he sees Ragini struggling with the seat belt..he leans towards her and helps her in putting the seat belt on..During the course, they come closer and their lips are just inches away..There is a little intense eye lock between them and both of them feel uncomfortable)
Ragini (uncomfortably)- Sorry woh actually hume seat belt lagani nahi aati..isliye aapko aise hamare paas aana pada
Laksh- Kya?
Ragini (Realising what she said)- Nahi woh humara matlab hai aapko bekaar mein humare liye jhukna pada..sorry
Laksh- Koi baat nahi
(And then he drives the car and they reach cafe delight..they chose a random table and sit on it..Both feel uncomfortable and both are silent. Laksh is thinking how to tell her the truth)
@Cafe Delight
Ragini (Thinks Laksh is about to propose to her)- Laksh aap humse kuch kehne wale the na..kahiye kya baat hai?
Laksh (Nervously)- Haa Ragini but pehle kuch kha lete hai
(He calls the waiter)
Waiter- Yes sir, kya lenge aap?
Laksh (Looks at Ragini and asks her)- Ragini tum kya logi?
Ragini- Aapko jo bhi pasand aaye humare liye bhi order kar dijiye
Laksh- Aisa nahi hoga Ragini..tum bolo na tum kya khaogi
Ragini- Humne kaha na aap apni pasand ka kuch bhi order kar dijiye humare liye..hum kha lenge
Laksh- Sure?
Ragini (smiles)- Haa bilkul
(Laksh turns to the waiter and talks to him)
Laksh- Accha aap do veg biryani le aayiye
Waiter- Okay sir..aapka khaana jald pohoch jayega
Laksh- Thanks
(He looks at Ragini and then looks down..he starts playing with his own fingers out of nervousness..Ragini notices this and thinks he must be nervous because he is going to propose to her)
Ragini (putting her hands on his)- Laksh kya hua? aap theek toh hai?
(Laksh feels awkward and immediately removes his hands from hers and this shocks Ragini)
Laksh- Ragini mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai
Ragini (Now tensed)- Kahiye na kya baat hai?
Laksh- Woh Ragini mujhe lagta hai ki main tumse pyaar...
(Just when Laksh was about to continue his sentence, the waiter comes with the food)
Waiter- Sir aapka order
Laksh- Thank you
Waiter- Waise ek baat kahu sir?
Laksh- Haa kaho
Waiter- Aap sur aapki gf (points towards Ragini) ek saath bohot cute lagte ho..cute couple
(And then the waiter goes..Ragini blushes and Laksh feels uncomfortable)
Ragini- Batayiyen na laksh kya baat hai? aap kuch kehne wale the..kuch zaroori baat hai kya?
Laksh (Takes a deep breath)- Ragini dekho main abb jo tumse kehne jaa raha hoon woh kehna mere liye itna aasan nahi hai..hope you understand
Ragini (Now very scared)- Laksh baat kya hai? aap hume dara rahe hai
Laksh- Ragini main tumse nahi swara se pyaar karta hoon and I want to marry her, not you..I am really sorry Ragini but pata nahi ye sab kaise ho gaya
(Ragini goes speechless..tears fall down from her eyes and she feels like someone just cut her heart into pieces..Laksh sees this and feels sorry)
Laksh- Ragini dekho please don't cry..I know maine tumhare saath bohot bura kiya hai but I am sorry..mujhe pata nahi kaise mujhe swara se pyaar ho gaya..agar tum chahti ho ki main swara se shaadi na karu toh theek hai but I am sorry Ragini main tumse bhi shaadi nahi kar sakta..aur uske baad shayad kisise shaadi na kar paaon..I am sorry Ragini
(Hearing this, Ragini gets up from her seat and runs from there..Laksh keeps calling her name from behind but she doesn't stop)
Laksh- Ragini! Ragini ruko meri baat toh suno.
(Laksh pays the bill and runs behind her)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww the cute sweet innocent Ragini i feel bad for her, nice start i like how your story is so mellow and ice
I wonder what Ragini will do now, please post the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

aww the cute sweet innocent Ragini i feel bad for her, nice start i like how your story is so mellow and ice

I wonder what Ragini will do now, please post the next part soon


Yeah I guess I would be quite fast with this one because nearly 20 parts are already typed. All I have to do is copy and paste lol 😃 And thank you so much. I always keep waiting for your comment. You kinda motivate me with your words.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
Continue soon
And pm me too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuppypie121

Nice start

Continue soon
And pm me too


Thank you so much. And please send me buddy request so that I can PM you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandra1998


Yeah I guess I would be quite fast with this one because nearly 20 parts are already typed. All I have to do is copy and paste lol 😃 And thank you so much. I always keep waiting for your comment. You kinda motivate me with your words.

aww you are so sweet waiting for my comment i feel honoured thank you so much
OMG you wrote 20 parts already you are mazing i wish i could type updates like you lol

hope you post the next part soon 😃😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

aww you are so sweet waiting for my comment i feel honoured thank you so much

OMG you wrote 20 parts already you are mazing i wish i could type updates like you lol

hope you post the next part soon😃😃



next part shall be posted tomorrow perhaps. not sure though
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandra1998


next part shall be posted tomorrow perhaps. not sure though

okay we will be waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start to ur story
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
continue soon
waiting. . . . . . .

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