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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
Awesome update
update soon
plz pm me

Thank you so much prithi...

glad you liked story...

yeah will pm you from next time

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: gayu6
Loved all the 4 parts.

Hey thanks dear...

glad you liked the story...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Very nice Mukta. Lovely to see the start of a beautiful friendship between Swara and Sanskaar...and all his misunderstandings about Kavita's death are also cleared by Kavita's mother herself.

The selfless empathy and concern shown by Swara has made a special place on Sanskaar's heart. The whole "mujhse dosti karoge" dialogue and scene was so moving.

So this story ends here? Are you planning to perhaps write another SS showing how Ragini acts, and how SwaSan finally land up together?

Lots of Love

Viji

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thank you so much dear...

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Very nice Mukta. Lovely to see the start of a beautiful friendship between Swara and Sanskaar...and all his misunderstandings about Kavita's death are also cleared by Kavita's mother herself.
The selfless empathy and concern shown by Swara has made a special place on Sanskaar's heart. The whole "mujhse dosti karoge" dialogue and scene was so moving.

So this story ends here? Are you planning to perhaps write another SS showing how Ragini acts, and how SwaSan finally land up together?

Lots of Love

Viji

Thank you so much viji...
Glad you liked the dialogue and scene in story...

I myself was very unsure about both parts...

Sadly yes story ends here...
I wanted to write something on this relation of silence, concern, realization between them...

Despite of not falling deeply for each other still they feel something for each other and holds the courage of standing for it...

I might write another ss showing how swasan finally land up together but that won't be including Ragini...purely Journey of Swasan falling for each other away from the place where they got pain, betrayal and Heartbreaks... But not sure about it now...

Love
mukta..

Edited by muktai - 9 years ago