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Originally posted by: .IamShonali.

Amazing!!

Eagerly waiting for the next update!!!

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Hey dear... terrific updates...loved it ... waiting for next...

Keep up the good work...

Love talia

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

nice story

Originally posted by: soumi93

Great going mukta...keep it up...waiting...do pm me...

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Interesting..

Originally posted by: anu012

superb update dear
beautifully written sanskar feeling or scene ... loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Mukta ..🤗 🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much my dear...I was so hugely touched that you've dedicated this SS to me. Really feel so humbled by your gesture.

I loved all the 4 parts. You have portrayed Sanskaar's rage and bitterness so well, that vindictiveness he had initially when he was plotting against Lakshya and Durga Prasad, thinking they were responsible for Kavita's death.

I also loved the way you described how Swara has started affecting him, how despite himself, he is not able to be cold and unaffected by her tears, her plight. He realizes that it's so very wrong to harm one innocent, just to take revenge for another innocent's death. He is not able to just coolly assume Swara as mere collateral damage anymore.

Ragini also has some goodness still within her here. She realizes she is doing something wrong...but unable to control her obsession for Lakshya.

I really liked that twist you've brought in here. 2 twists in fact. One, that Swara got to know about the plot being made by Ragini and Sanskaar. Second, that Kavita's father was responsible for her murder--and her own Mom is aware of this truth. Kavita's mom being Shomi's friend was also an unexpected twist.

Wonder how Swara would explain this to Sanskaar. And whether he would believe her initially, considering that he has been under a misconception for 5 long years.

Please update soon. Thanks for the pm and once again, thanks for the dedication.

Lots of Love

Viji

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome

You beautifully portrayed the emotions and thoughts of sanskar.

In first three updates sanskar's thoughts and his feelings was beautifully portrayed. He was not able to take revenge from swara. Because she was innocent.

In the last update swara's thoughts was also beautifully crafted.

You gave a small change in the story. Swara knew that sanskar and ragini was trying to harm her wedding.

She knew the truth behind Kavita's death.

Swara was shattered after knowing that her sister betrayed her. But she was sure that ragini is a good soul. She is madly love with laksh

But swara was worried for sanskar.

Really loved the story.

Waiting for your next update.

Thanks for the pm