Raglak DARK FF ::'YOU ARE MINE' last chap up!december 142016

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: rbb1
Please post the next part soon

Next part is coming soon 😛

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik
where is next prt

Next part is coming...thanks for the wait! 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: dewcute

Next part is coming soon 😛

yay i can't wait

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 3

Laksh looked at the mirror...he examined his cheeks , the hand prints weren't there anymore. " New morning...New start " Laksh chuckled to himself...he looked at the photo of ragini ."Hope you slept well baby ,you must be missing me ,don't worry..your darling husband is coming to you ". With a wicked grin he took the car keys and went to downstairs.

Everyone in MM was sad , they were all unable to forget what happened...the memory was still fresh in all of their minds , a broken ragini...her tear stricken face..an indifferent lakshya...the bitter truth...all were haunting them..,AP was still sobbing ,she was always a strong women..but today she is broken..! her own son broke her..laksh pointing gun on DP was still fresh on her mind , " how could he ?" She kept asking herself..." How could he change so much..?" "How could he...?"she felt like her head was spinning ,and she fainted ...before she could reach the ground ,two hands held her firmly.
Everyone in MM was on the hall...except lakshya,sanskar and AP. So when they found sanskar carrying an unconscious AP they were all startled , " what happened sanskar ?" A concerned swara asked ..everyone was firing questions...uttara and sujata started crying..asking AP to wake up .
" Mom..please relax..swara get some water, I was coming here and she was on the way thinking something and she fainted suddenly ,and Adarsh bhaiya call the doctor fast ". Swara sprinkled water on AP's face ,after a few seconds she slowly opened her eyes , " how are you feeling? Don't take stress ,everything is going to be okay "AP looked towards DP ,he sounded defeated...because of his own son! She couldn't stop crying..."badima ,please don't cry,we all will make Laksh understand ".sanskar tried to console her.

" Good morning ,all of you over dramatic people ! Why so much Rona dhona in the morning itself? " everyone looked towards the source of the voice and found a smirking laksh staring at them.laksh looked towards AP and asked "what happened to you? Why are you looking at me with disbelief?" "Stop it laksh, she is not well...she fainted...all because of you" . sanskar snapped at laksh. "Stop barking bhai and yeah she shouldn't have slapped me and yelled at me yesterday , I think she wasted her energy just like that and now she fainted...it's her fault! Not mine". Everyone was staring at Laksh with disbelief , how can someone change so much ? How can he not be concerned about his own mother? " And yeah , be ready all of you..I am going to bring ragini back , I am sure you all will be happy , after all you all love her now ".everyone was shocked at his words . "Lakshya " an ear splitting scream was heard from swara ,she was shaking with anger..,running to Laksh and by holding his collar , she yelled at him " How dare you ? How dare you even think about ragini? I will destroy you if you even try to touch her shadow ". Laksh started laughing maniacally..." Touch her...touch her shadow...? Oh..no..swara..I won't stop by just touching her shadow..I think I should kiss her in front of the whole world and prove to you and to all that she is mine and no one can do anything about it , and speaking about destroying if you won't stop poking your nose in my matters you may get destroyed ". " you can't talk to swara like this Laksh " sanskar yelled at lakshya by placing a hand on swara who was so shocked to react.it wasn't just Swara..everyone was shocked at the way laksh spoke..his choice of words to his intense eyes..this Laksh was different..! " I said ,don't bark at me bhai.., and tell your wife to stay away from me and my wife , I don,'t want any drama when I come back with my wife " .

Laksh was going to leave when again swara started to yell " How dare u call her your wife after what you did to her ? She is not your wife anymore...she is my sister...I won't spare you if u try to drag her to your life again...leave me sanskar...mom why are you holding me? Leave me I will put some sense to his head" Laksh looked at swara amused.."how can a senseless woman put sense to his head? " he chuckled at his own thought by looking at swara who was trying to set herself free from sanskar and uttara and a consoling sujata..."why are they even holding her..?it's not like she will be able to do anything ..the only thing she is good at doing is yelling" "I promise you lakshya , I won't let you go near ragini...she don't need you in her life ". Something snapped inside lakshya hearing swara's words. "Ragini doesn't needs you". His breath hitched..,suddenly he saw red. "STOP YELLING YOU DUMB WOMAN.." He yelled at swara in raw rage ..every one was taken back by his anger ,swara was frozen for seconds and then she fainted on the arms of sanskar...when everyone turned their attention towards swara,laksh took a deep breath and calmed down .by singing his favorite song in a low voice and with a wicked grin Laksh started the car to Baadi.

So how was it guys?

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Love,

Jiya 😳

Edited by dewcute - 9 years ago

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anzana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Wow first Dark FF on RagLak .. Its sumhw kind m longing for.. Thnkxxx for pen'ding it... Laksh bad boy huh m loving him.. 2nd part last part seemz he is over obessed on Ragini but on his own way Bad way .. Swaragini's bonding lubly.. Oops Swara promised she won't let Laksh to cum bk in Ragini's life so promised Ragini to get over him nd move on but our hero seemz hv his own plan.. Soo soo Intresting.. M olready falling for dis concept.. Plzz do updte soon. Nd plz plz if u r sending PM 's den plzz include one name dats mine...

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana
Wow first Dark FF on RagLak ..Its sumhw kind m longing for..Thnkxxx for pen'ding it...Laksh bad boy huh m loving him..2nd part last part seemz he is over obessed on Ragini but on his own way Bad way ..Swaragini's bonding lubly..Oops Swara promised she won't let Laksh to cum bk in Ragini's life so promised Ragini to get over him nd move on but our hero seemz hv his own plan..Soo soo Intresting..M olready falling for dis concept..Plzz do updte soon.Nd plz plz if u r sending PM 's den plzz include one name dats mine...

Glad u loved it dear... 😳

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sudhi03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

This is too good jiya

Laksh cracked me up especially about swara

Please update the next part soon

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Omg this is brilliant Laksh is a maniac yet funny he started singing lol

I know it's not funny but I liked how he told Swara to shut up

Please post the next part soon and make it longer

Thank you