Raglak DARK FF ::'YOU ARE MINE' last chap up!december 142016 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Wow jiya it was superb. Laksh is so shady here. Why does he have a gun?😕

I loved it. Tomatoes bheju to prepare salsa😉

Joking sweety. If you stop writing then I might hit you with a giant tomato.😆

Originally posted by: rbb1

aww thank you for update

it was awesome loved the emotion's

aww poor Ragini felt so bad for her you can feel her pain

but seems like Laksh has become crazy why had he got a gun

cant wait to read the next part, please post it soon

thank you

Originally posted by: Pheunli

Jiya...its interesting...you must continue!!

Thanks for the PM otherwise I'd have missed something really good.

Keep it up dear...its awesome!

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

OMG...OMG...wow...this is,one he'll interesting...I love dark stories,forbidden kinda love stories...and this is just one of them...though updates are small but indeed I love them...rearing to see laksh hi going to get hisss wife back...yeah...his wife...am just kind of always excited when man us jealous and possessive for there love but not ott...let's see where ur story goes...waiting for next update and thank for pm

Originally posted by: AyeshaRocks

very very very very niccceee.
do update part 3 soon... do pm plz

Originally posted by: clarity

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">OMG, is Lakshya obsessed with Ragini or what?😲

He is on a dark path.

Wanna know what happens next. Do make them meet in the next chapter.

👏</font>

Originally posted by: alinaza

The chapter was brilliant and so interesting! I love that Swara and Ragini are each other's support again. It was the way the story was always meant to be. Lakshya is much more interesting now - not so much the pathetic spoilt brat. The only thing that didn't ring true in the chapter is Lakshya pointing a gun at DP - too much out of character? Really enjoy your writing style. Cant wait for the next chapter

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD

Amazing one ..👏

Finally Reunion of Swaragini & SanGini😉

Loved to see how RagYa story moves on from here

Update soon😊and PM me

Originally posted by: jyothirgamaya

A very beautiful and emotional chapter...i was never an admire pf swaragini or swara..after reading this chapter I have turned an admire of both...you very beautifully described the bond bw the sisters...i had tears when I read this portion

"when swara finally became free...she expected swara to first go to sanskar but swara came running to her without sparing anyone a glance,tightly hugging her..smiling and crying in the same time..she kept saying how she was sure that her sister will trust her..how she was sure that her ragini will never give up on her"
Swara loves Ragini the most..even sanskar n her mom comes only after Ragini...n I think no one will ever be able to love Ragini as much as swara does..not even lakshya..
It was so nice to see sangini bonding..n what was that..laksh is getting obsessed for rags...now swara won't let lakshya come in rags life again n here lakshya is ready to destroy any one coming in bw him n his wife..Ragini won't accept lucky without swaras convent n if he do anything to swara rags won't ever forgive him..its getting very interesting..
Now I am looking forward to lot of swaragini scenes along with ragya..[/