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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Nice update

Waiting for your next update


Thankyou 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

SANSKAR POV

Chill breeze...mild climate reached trekking spot ..waiting for adrash bhaiya with my bro n good frnd laksh..suddenly heard horn sound I turned and saw Innova few girls got down..but my heart skipped seeing one girl..what a cute face ,bubbly...i cant take my eyes from her...but she didn't even notice me...laksh shake me asked "how long I'm calling u bhai..where u lost ..look adrash bhaiya came ..come will start our trekking bhai..i nodded and laksh went to get entry fee and came back ..we start to move but bhaiya got cal so we stop ...again I saw same girl getting ready for trekking with her frnds.. Simply staring n enjoying that beatuy n innocent face... Suddenly she turned head look around ..oh got did she caught me..with jerk acted has if enjoying the nature...yup enjoying my beautiful girl activities...smile appeared in my face..heard her frnd scream..shit I cant able to hear what they speaking...we maintain long distance ...laksh busy in taking photos of nature ..oh I do no may be girls...again started my work yes started to stare my girl..but now started note their face expression so that I can guess somewhat what going between them..i saw she looking at her frnd suspiciously..her frnd winked at her..im totally confused what's going on there..im very curious to know...her frnd stood up came near my girl...her frnd staring at me and murmur something..oh god did she telling about me before she turn...i started my casual talks with laksh..laksh gave weird look...laksh wore sunglass ..with help of I saw her but its blur not clear vision thought I tried hard to see them..i lift laksh face up n straighten to see their view..oh god what and why I'm doing this ...y I'm affected this much for unknown girl...i ignored my mind and with difficult saw view in sunglass ...she didn't blink her eyes n mouth widen..omg she staring at me..feeling so good and happy...controlled my laugh n excitement..signal laksh to kept quiet...actually IM in cloud nine..I never felt this with any girl ..she is precious thing in the world...i thought to start my investigation about her with help of laksh..laksh told she turned bhai..my eyes widen in shock..laksh said"I noticing from first so u can't escape bhai..so tel what's going on"...shared my feelings to him and asked for help..now he is in shock .."what bhai r u serious I cant believe my eyes n ears u feeling for a girl..unbelievable.. R u in love"..."shut up laksh...will u help or not".."ok,cool bhai come adharsh bhaiya will not come will start our trekking otherwise ur girl may escape"..oh god he started his teasing tone..but yeah did I love her..i fallen for her oh many questions sucking my mind...i want to answer for that question..now main motivate is to know about her...me and laksh started I saw she and her frnd holding ears and giving mischievous smile to their frnds...and their journey..we followed them...i make sure to maintain distance coz not to make them doubt us...her 3frnds started climb cave fast..but my girl n her frnd walking slowly by talking something...her frnd told "he is back of us" almost shouted ..she turned n saw me no,no stare at me ..I'm felt so happy before jumping in excitement laksh hold arms tightly"bhai control don't show it".murmur in my ears ..yes he is rite...even I gave her look..she turned her face ..oh god her rosy lips ..thick eyebrows,...eyelashesss...she driving me crazy...so these two girls talking about me...but did she felt same feeling what I'm going through..did my presence affects her...laksh gave idea to overtake them...i saw both girls standing like statue ...make use opportunity went near "excuse me will u give us way" and her eyes widen and just nodded oh I'm gone ...her cute face I cant resist myself controlled my emotions started to climb with laksh..but made my ear sharp to hear their convo coz now its confirm both girls gossiping about me..i want to hear about me from her and told laksh to gather info about her from her frnds who climbing infront of us...laksh started his work by filrting..but by seeing them they not showed any interest to laksh talks...laksh gave angry look but I pleaded him...now my work oh god why these cant talk lil louder by while fighting n in angry mood they shout from bottom of stomach as if they ate loud speaker...but while gossips just I cant hear murmur sound only...i tried again with full effort..i hear"already suffered...my parents...no use of love"..oh I cant get it properly but her sound make me sure she sad while saying this..i gave side look n shocked coz her frnd had tears then its confirm something fishy she has some sorrow...i want to know it ,want to console her,...but her frnd did my job...i hear laughing sound from them...I'm relived but these na how suddenly they smile,laugh n sad..oh god mixed emotions only girls can have this talent...after that I tried to listen their convo and maintain certain distance its very difficult job...suddenly her frnd shouted " swara jaldi ana yarr"..its her name or her frnd name..so clear it i turned my face she shouted "we coming u guys carry on" she saw me showed attitude look n shake her head..i jerked my face..oh so cute na..swara nice name..so future swara sanskar maheswari sound perfect na..ofcourse it should!! Coz its my choice... oh god trekking completed...did lucky collected her info ..if no I have to follow her...i hope he did his work...but thank god my girl n her frnd is slow so that they cant see their frnds n happenings ..so that lucky might finish his work...I reached entrance ...even my girl n her crew reached ...but no sight of lucky...girls went to washroom..she did not look me once also...again sad..lucky came and we started towards our car where adharsh bhaiya waiting ...my eyes searched her yes she is near Innova ...i start to move coz lucky showed thumb up n said full details...I'm the happiest person..no need to follow..next visit direct her place...so I not turned to see her ...planned to surprise...driver started the car ...we reached the place ...but IM in my own world with her...i will make my destiny with my swara...at any cost..saw my family who waiting for us to have lunch..soon al finish ...went to sleep in my dream land!!!!!


Thank you guys ...
Its too long update na!!!sry next will try short one..
Sorry if I bored u ppl...
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Edited by leku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing yaar... Continue soon... PM me please !! I love ur story !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome 👏
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Leku... 🤗 very intriguing update and story..

Nicely explained about girls talk.. When we shout.. It will echo after 1 km.. When it comes to murmur even next person can't hear it..

So Sanskaar has fallen for her..

He collected her details.. Through Laksh.. He is such a lakshman... 😉

I loved it sissy...

Waiting yaar..

Love you...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Simply superb... I don't have words what to type yar... Awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update..really liked Sanskaar pov 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pearl.16

Amazing yaar... Continue soon... PM me please !! I love ur story !!



Thank u so much..
Sure will do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome 👏
Thanks for the pm


Thanks...
No thanks for pm!!!!

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