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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res..leku I'm busy now I'll give my comment later...

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Sure...its ok sissy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Lovely update
Pov was awesome 👏



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abi03

pls dnt make it shortly...we want long updates only pls pls...coz ur story s very interesting pls give us a long update...



Oh thank u so much...
Sure will try long update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavya012

Nice update but next time bada update dena plz..



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Will try to give long update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Teddy94

Read all ur updates.. Awesome story 😊
Pm me pls..
Give long updates..



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Sure will do pm and try to give long 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Lovely update.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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leku
dear
it was so nyc
m dam excited to read their story ahead
waiting for more leku
pm me if u can
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishanita

leku
dear
it was so nyc
m dam excited to read their story ahead
waiting for more leku
pm me if u can



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u guys for liking my storyline... 😊 ...


Here is next chapter...


CHAPTER 4(b)

SANSKAR POV

Rolling in bed...trying to get some sleep after very tired from trekking...no actually IM waiting for laksh to come...he went out its been 2hours till now not yet reached...even his phone is busy...do no which girl he speaking for so long...oh I know he wantedly irritating me coz after lunch we spend some quality time with family but he completely ignoring me...suddenly he excused from evryone went to attend call..al went to their respective rooms..me and laksh shared single room..after reached room I called him..he attended call just said"I came for walk bhai..wil back soon"..cut the call not even let me speak..which raising my angry...still controlling my ..continued to wait...its 12.30...his phone still busy...oh god testing my patience...i need to know what info he collected about my angel...and did laksh is fine or he has any pblm outside...no I have to go now and check..i opened the door laksh standing...he smiled and asked me "did u worried for me or thinking about ur love"...i gave punch in his stomach said"both laksh...but not more than u...come in first..change ur clothes"...i saw him his face is pale...he has some pblm..now I must talk to him...he came out and said "sorry bhai I make u wait for long...i knew u want to know about ur girl rite"...i was angry I thought he playing with me..but no he has other pblm.."stop it laksh tel me truth why r u sad..what happened...u r important for me other than nothing"...laksh mera bhai is important in my life...i share special bond with him more than blood relation...no one take his place in my heart...i know priority changes in certain period of time but not in laksh case..he always my best friend,best bhai,best crime partner,best advisor...but y he is sad...i asked him again"what happened laksh"...he started to cry "bhai I fought with Ragini again...i made her cry bhai"...oh god I thought some big pblm..silly fight again n again..."laksh enough for this u crying ...first tel me when u both never had fight..always fighting...ragini will cry everytime but this time u..you guys switched ur acting eh what???"..
He stopped crying "bhai pls don't tease me...evrytime al thinking i only made mistake but al time Ragini only making me angry by asking silly questions"..."ok ok i believe u both ..now what happened..."..laksh said"bhai i called her to ask about admission in our college coz today she has interview but she gave me cold reply ..."its none of my bussiness...its hurts me so much bhai..really do care her..but she never understand me...i asked her why u talking like this...she told"go and ask ur girlfriend"...i didn't understand whom she talking about bhai..she cut the call...but i tried so,many times she didn't pick up"...oh god possessive is pblm between these two..."laksh she talking about shanaya man"...yup shanaya our classmate she has crush on laksh..but good friend for both of us...Ragini our family friend...she is my bestie like laksh for me but she has different feeling towards laksh but never showed...i think may be shanaya would talked something personal about laksh to Ragini..I have to ask Ragini but before that I have to calm laksh by telling lie"laksh she may be playing prank or even she may thought to give suprise about admission..why we need to break just chill I knew her well for sure she planning something so don't disturb her until we return..we will also surpise her mera bhai"..."yeah bhai u r right.
But still im not going to forgive her soon.be ready Ragini metha"..."ok laksh leave we will see day after 2mrw..and its already late come lets sleep u must be tired"..laksh stopped me by holding my arms"yes bhai I'm tired but even I care for u n respect ur feelings bhai u must be waiting to know about ur love rite bhai"..." S laksh but will talk about it 2mrw now not leave"..laksh told"come on bhai u won't able to get peaceful sleep so please stop acting come will say about my ur love and her frnds also coz in future they may help u..so take precaution steps"..i laughed for his statement...we sat on bed to talk about my love..really do I love her or its crush...but I felt happy when I saw her,when she near me my heart beat fast,when I heard word "suffered"..I can sense her pain..I feel her pain want to console her...oh when she stare at me..im flat..its completely different feeling..."laksh tel me what u got to know"..laksh told"bhai u wont have any pblm in ur marriage in our society n with papa coz even my bhabi belongs to Marwari bhai"..thankgod there is no need go against my family..main pblm itself solved but what about her family oh sanskar first let me talk to her...laksh continued"then she finished her schooling..same has Ragini bhai waiting for college admission"..so she is two years younger than me...perfect..."aur bhai she planning to select electrical engineering bhai not only ur love...her frnds also..n al girls planning to choose same college bhai..they choose is Chennai,Delhi n mumbai ...i hope bhai they choose ours and al girls r from Delhi bhai but belongs to different state..priya she is malayali,kushi is Tamil girl but brought up in Delhi bhai and I not asked about other two girls coz Priya n kushi r bestie for bhabi..sorry I cant ask about her family she may doubt me so I avoided more questions.."..i prayed god pls she should choose my college but nice I think she is studious choosing difficult branch EE..great...but bhabi word from laksh pls fod make it true..yes I love her...and did she has boyfriend nonooo it hould not happen.."laksh did she has boy friend"...laksh told"chill bhai...priya not mentioned anything like that...she is very jolly type but lil rude bhai be careful...and kushi very naughty she is too close to bhabi so try to friendly with her she might help u in future"...yup laksh was correct so al r good heart person...now I have start my work to impress her but how will I know which college she choose oh god lucky..."lucky how will we trace her man"...laksh told "cool bhai...i got Priya number..but bhai I'm feeling guilty I used Priya to get this info..she so sweet ,innocent I should ask sorry bhai and one more thing bhai I told u and bhabi r friends sorry bhai"...its huge shock for me "lucky what...why u told like that ...she should now asked swara about me oh god what she will think about..first impression itself bad impression"...arrey bhgawan pls she don't think,bad about me.."sorry bhai,Priya is sharp ,she didn't shared anything after that only she started to talk about some personal things what can I do bhai..but I hurted Priya will ask sorry after reaching home"...what to do...lucky did for me only its ok I make it clear soon...to make lucky feel good"yes lucky don't be sorry to me ...ask sorry to Priya ..even I LL ask don't worry come lets sleep its 3 clock"...
Laksh said "ok bhai I'm sleepy good night"...ok lucky bhai "good morning"...we smiled and slept...oh now in happy..i will get good sleep...swara dadha be ready for me...im coming soon...



Guys again I make it too long ...
Sorry if anybody wasted ur time...i tried my best...mbl battery about to die...
Pls feedback



Thank you

Lekah
Edited by leku - 9 years ago

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