SwaSan:'First love Vs True love'(chapter12:updated page36) - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

244

Views

24.7k

Users

25

Likes

433

Frequent Posters

lekahravi thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Leku... 🤗 very intriguing update and story..

Nicely explained about girls talk.. When we shout.. It will echo after 1 km.. When it comes to murmur even next person can't hear it..

So Sanskaar has fallen for her..

He collected her details.. Through Laksh.. He is such a lakshman... 😉

I loved it sissy...

Waiting yaar..

Love you...



Thank u so much sissy!!!!
Yup Lakshman!!!
lekahravi thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: zeenucharm

Simply superb... I don't have words what to type yar... Awesome



Really...oh thank u so much 😳
lekahravi thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice update..really liked Sanskaar pov 👍🏼



Thank you 😃
lekahravi thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Hi frnds...going to start next chapter...

CHAPTER 4(a)

SWARA POV

Next day morning...i woke at 5 am...al my frnds were busy in sleeping...yes al sleeping together in one room though we booked two rooms...my mind full of his thoughts..i want to know about him..atleast name god pls even today I want to see his cute face...today plan is visiting temple n heritage...kushi told about place name...i cant able to pronounce southindian language...but while she telling I hope he also should visit same place where I go..i know its not possible...still lil hope or whatever kushi says "oru chinna asai"... smile appear in my face for kushi cute expression...really my whole class will love her cute expression even in angry look..but she won't dare to friendly with boys ...bloody al thinking she is quite, obident girl but truth she is rowdy in our frnds circle..outside her mouth will mum..mum mum only..only she will friendly with few of our class boys...especially with harsh..oh no friends..enemies...always cat fight will start...harsh handsome, rude,arrogant n class topper..but still ??? Oh why suddenly harsh running my mind...throw him swara dadha...i shouted towards my thoughts...oh shit my sound made Priya n kushi woke up..kushi started to scold me ..oh again Tamil" arrivu illa,go and die swaru"pls let me sleep..i laughed again funny expression..yes kushi love sleeping no noise should be there..like pin drop silence otherwise she behave like some spirit possed her...priya came near me said"swaru I need to talk to u "...aishu and leni in deep sleep..but kushi sleep is spoiled she screamed in low husky voice"oh without me secret no never"and giggled...priya told "chi pakki come I need to ask u both something"..so went near balcony to avoid noise..we started our casual talk ...but I sense tension in Priya face..i asked her what happened come to the original topic..her eyes widen..then she look at us..kushi gave confused look...kushi asked "what's going here re pls tel"...priya asked us"how is laksh"...me n kushi were confused..coz we never heard such name not even from our frnds...kushi said "how we know...we never heard such name"...priya in huge shock..her eye widen..which made me tension...what any pblm has happened in trekking oh god if our parents for got know al dead...i shaked Priya and asked "tel me clearly who is laksh what happened is everything ok.."..omg that idiot played prank ..hey guys I shared about us to laksh"..said Priya.."areey sirf bathao kya baath yeh..tum kya bola usse" I asked Priya...looked at kushi who had smile in her face oh I cannot understand anything...this female is smiling...priya started said "while trekking he smiled at aishu..but aishu gave killer look to him ..me and leni laughed..but again he smiled and told "hi" to three of us..but as u know aishu won't interested in this type..she scolded him badly.."meeko boath pura laaga"...me and kushi r damn shock seeing Priya concern towards unknown guy laksh...but composed ourself n wait till she finish...priya continued "so I decided to ask sorry to him behalf of aishu...he started climb lil back of us so I used that time to talk to him ..i leave way for aishu n leni to climb before me...I started to talk to him by telling sorry for aishu behaviour..he smiled n gave intro...we started to talk I do no when we started to share personal questions..so I shared about me,you n kushi coz while talking about aishu he told pls don't talk about her...and he said u and his bro were friends..."...already me and kushi were in shock ..oh god who is he ,why he got our info...now his bro is my friend who is that lot of questions running my mind...I told "what I don't know anyone Priya..u making me more tense"..but kushi were mum..but she had lil mischievous smile...it made me relax coz I knew she would find somthing from her criminal mind very dirt mind...I saw Priya in shock ..i,kept hand in shoulder told"relax pls completely tel us..nothing serious"..Priya said "sorry machi I thought u know his bro so I shared about us ...really sorry I didn't meant it re I called u while climbing just u guys will see him
So I asked how is laksh..why u not saw him???..yeah in entrance u both sighting one boy actually he is laksh brother sanskar..i saw u and him where smiling at each other so I believed laksh re..oh god I did big mistake Priya started to cry "... Oh god its him we nt smiling ..staring eachother...she took it wrongly...without consoling her..i lost myself with sanskar..wow his name finally I knew it ...I,have to thank Priya for this...butterflies r flying in my stomach oh swara don't be filmy...its ok I'm so sooo happy...but why laksh wants my info...i came of thought by loud laughter of kushi..seriously she gone mad,..i scolded her "stupid Priya is crying u laughing..." I gave angry look but still she smiling...i consoled Priya"leave re nothing happened just chill"..."yeah stupids stop it pagal he fooled u to collect details about swara for his bhai..hahaha..come Priya leave its not big deal coz he brother needs Amara heroine swara..pyar hota I think.."kushi completed...really I'm very happy but not showed n gave angry look to kushi and said "what did u mean just stop ur nonsense kushi"..."oye I'm serious ok swara don't hide machi..but really I'm impressed by laksh..Kya guts re..aur where we both will see him while Priya calling u ..he acted by tieing his shoe lace...wow what an idea ..semma la"said kushi...yup kushi is rite I said really she will judge the situation n find everything clearly ...I cant tel its good or bad mind ..but using this she will clear al pblms ...carefree person...I said may be u r rite kushi...kushi told "ofcourse nan sonna correct thaan irukum(if I said it will be correct).."...priya asked "u guys tel me what's going on now between u both"...I started to narrate about my feel towards sanskar and whole thing happened in trekking"...she was laughing and asked "so do u like or love him with questioning look"...i said "I do no re but now nothing we should concentrate in our college admission...lets wait n see "...kushi and Priya laughed together have me side hug...finally I'm relived coz I knew his name and he collected my details ..i hope he will come...and shared feelings with Priya kutti ...she also important in my life...she basically malayali..she loves Tamil n Hindi...now basic learner in Hindi..but fluent in Tamil..kushi knows Hindi lil to speak n write..but she understand very wel..both r maintain their frnds by speaking English..its really funny wen ppl getting scolding in Tamil from my idiotic frnds...then we three discussed about college which place Chennai ,mumbai or Delhi...still not yet decided!!!!...finally day went 2mrw evening we have our train...torrento...will wait for my boy..but sad coz priya did not collected any details about him!!!! She busy in admiring laksh..what to do..my fate decide... 😳


Sorry guys I cant make it short coz its POV simply my hand typing without listening my words 😕
Pls feedback...

Let me know which place i can choose to continue my story...
Thank you

Lekah
Seriously. thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Res..

Unres...

Awesome update yaar.. Simply love it..

Swara came to know about Laksh enquiry on her to her friends..

Really nicely written...

Waiting...


Love you sissy...

PS.. My likes button is not working...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
Sujayricky thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Lovely update
Pov was awesome 👏
abi03 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#37
pls dnt make it shortly...we want long updates only pls pls...coz ur story s very interesting pls give us a long update...
Esha012 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Nice update but next time bada update dena plz..
Teddy94 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Read all ur updates.. Awesome story 😊
Pm me pls..
Give long updates..
sneharay thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Lovely update.. 👍🏼
Pm me pls 😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".