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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#771

Awesome update. I loved it . SwaSan scene was romantic which made me want more scenes like that in the upcoming updates too.

I love the ever changing Ragya dynamics and you penned it well with just hinting about the difference in an embrace . Do update soon .

Love

Nita

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#772

Superb update 👏
Swasan ☺️
That hook 😆

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#773

Bubble...muahhh

Swasan...im sooo dead...it was sooo hot...im again dead...love u for this...(heavy breathing)

Raglak ..so new n fresh start to their wedding...loved change dynamics between them...

Update soon

Talia

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Nalini Ansh

@Bennet.Lizzy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#774

Bubble😉

Today in the morning when I was posting a reply here my eyes fell on the (16+) warning and I thought.

"One act (not so elaborately) done in drunkenness.

A few stolen kisses that marked a new beginning

Ah.. That seduction and a rather hot 'necking'

All sensibly put into words.Why the warning!"

But there! Ahem!! Ahemmm! Ahemmm!...just kidding dear😆

Just the perfect mix of everything. A perfect brew!

Another bow!!

Bubble as someone who writes I know you might be wondering if you had crossed any invisible line. But let me assure you before you start having second thoughts. By writing this piece you just perfected the storyline, if that's anymore possible.

An author's skill lies in letting her thoughts flow flawlessly, sensibly and yet powerfully into words. And It's really hard to balance such scenes with mere words. One mistake and things go awkward. Emotions should be weaved into the lines and should spill out just the right way they were meant to. A Herculean effort.

And you did it again. Absolutely splendid piece. I loved it to bits. Looking forward for the coming updates.Because for now I'm really out of words. I just can't tell how much I have come to respect and love your works. Splendid! perfecto!

Lots of love

P.S just editing to add - thanks for the mention about my memoirs in the previous reply. It would be an honour to read your take on it. 😊

Edited by bennetlizzy - 9 years ago

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alisha17

@alisha17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#775

Awesome update

Aw RagLak on their honeymoon

Can't wait for next part

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soapbubble

@soapbubble

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: StarshineHues
OMG !! So much love for this update !!

Have I ever told you that I love your version of Swara ? Generally, I'm not the biggest fan of Swara on the show...they've made her too infallible for my liking, and I generally fall in love with flawed, human characters.

Your Swara is spirited, but she's also...softer, somehow. And Sanskaar is always amazing, which makes me love this couple in your story !!

Aha...and RagLak have reached their honeymoon destination...can't wait to read more on that.

As you might have guessed, lol, my fave moment was the little cuddle during their car ride...Ragini's hugs basically showcase the RagLak journey in your story perfectly...from Ragini's obsession to mutual love and acceptance.

Can't wait to read more of this honeymoon Bubble, please update soon.

Love you !! 🤗🤗

Ha, you like my Swara? I do too - she's a little BHoli... easily teased, a little gullible but good, strong, brave, spontaneous and NICE - which is not a quality I underrate at all. Sanskaar is a lot more 'chaalu' in a sense, which is why it makes him so utterly protective of her... even from himself to some extent.

The cuddle was telling, wasn't it?

Glad you liked this one 😃

Hugs!!

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soapbubble

@soapbubble

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Ooo *claps hands with glee*.. Lovely chapter!! Naughty SwaSan were☺️ Stubborn hooks😆 Swasan romance after a looong time😉
Loved how u have pointed out the change in RagLak dynamics.. A whole new chapter for them.. Also Loved the 'reverence' Ragini receives.. Lol😆😆
M bound to have some very sweet dreams tonight😉😆 Thanks, Bubble😃

Heheh! 😆😆

Good morning! I hope they were very sweet 😳 😳 😆

SwaSan after too long, I know! We've just been seeing them by chance... although I assure you the romance continues unabated in private! 😆

Thanks very much!

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soapbubble

@soapbubble

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#778

Originally posted by: _Esha_
Hey bubble that's incomplete..let swasan take a step ahead please?..naughty sanskaar made me blush entirely...and that what made my hubby grin with amusement at what was making me a little in shame ...oops sorry to spam you with my silly things..awesome update that is what i can say..god bless

Hahaha... how much more can I write on a mixed public forum Esha? But you should read my "missing pages"! 😉

You blushed so much your husband noticed!! 😆 😳 I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks a lot!

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soapbubble

@soapbubble

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#779

Originally posted by: princess_tara
Nice

Thank you, Tara!

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#780

I feel relaxed after reading the chapter...

Raglak and Swasan both are perfectly immersed in their own love land..

And my fav.part ,I am sure you must have guessed...it was obviously the hug raglak shared...how Laksh realises the way she hugged him had changed was beautifully portrayed...I loved it...waiting eagerly for the next update...

My questions are still there,but I better keep it to myself...lol

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