The Best of Things: Thread II - Part 74 on Page 139 - Page 80

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

Bubble😉

Today in the morning when I was posting a reply here my eyes fell on the (16+) warning and I thought.

"One act (not so elaborately) done in drunkenness.

A few stolen kisses that marked a new beginning

Ah.. That seduction and a rather hot 'necking'

All sensibly put into words.Why the warning!"

But there! Ahem!! Ahemmm! Ahemmm!...just kidding dear😆

Hehe! 😆

About that 16+ - I opened on a post coital scene and I knew that the bedroom would be significant in the lives of both these couples... so just thought I'd better! 😃

Just the perfect mix of everything. A perfect brew!

Another bow!!

Bubble as someone who writes I know you might be wondering if you had crossed any invisible line. But let me assure you before you start having second thoughts. By writing this piece you just perfected the storyline, if that's anymore possible.

An author's skill lies in letting her thoughts flow flawlessly, sensibly and yet powerfully into words. And It's really hard to balance such scenes with mere words. One mistake and things go awkward. Emotions should be weaved into the lines and should spill out just the right way they were meant to. A Herculean effort.

And you did it again. Absolutely splendid piece. I loved it to bits. Looking forward for the coming updates.Because for now I'm really out of words. I just can't tell how much I have come to respect and love your works. Splendid! perfecto!

Lots of love

N

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

I have a horrible feeling it'll be a brick or sth, the rate at which we're going !! 😆😆

Originally posted by: alisha17

Awesome update

Aw RagLak on their honeymoon

Can't wait for next part

Originally posted by: soapbubble

Where IS that eggy emoticon when you need it! I'm going to order a full dozen!

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Eeek !! No eggs please, sorry for all the spammage Bubble !! 😆😆

We'll stay out of your way (as much as possible).

And won't bother you for an update (for the next 2 seconds).

So when is it ?

OMG !! I'd better run !! 😆😆

Originally posted by: dewcute

I feel relaxed after reading the chapter...

Raglak and Swasan both are perfectly immersed in their own love land..

And my fav.part ,I am sure you must have guessed...it was obviously the hug raglak shared...how Laksh realises the way she hugged him had changed was beautifully portrayed...I loved it...waiting eagerly for the next update...

My questions are still there,but I better keep it to myself...lol

Originally posted by: soapbubble

So instead of answers I have a sher for you...😛

Mareez e ishq ka kya hai, Jiya Jiya na jiya...

Sawaal hai toh kayi dil mein... kiya kiya na kiya...

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Bubble🤗
Darling I love ya😳 Thanks for the update!!
I just love these two can't help it!! And the best part was that the update had both SwaSan and RagLak moments!! Treasures!
Sanskaar is so naughty!!😆☺️ I like this! Sixth Sense of ladies is Mashallah! Always works,even when it comes to ghooring of pyaare pati parmeshwar!!😆😆
Striptease? And Sanskaar says exactly to that??😆😳 Damn!! Of course, laughing at the blush of wifey is not allowed Mr. Maheshwari, now look the way she will make you forget all your smiles☺️
You know what, you honestly know how to make a mood☺️! I'M PRETTY SINGLE! But still, just love the way you write the scenes!! Just amazing!!👏👏
Dori scenes are my all time favourite!! Oh jeez, I love it<3
RagLak car scenes were really amazing😳 Too good!! Regal huh? Awesome update
Love ya🤗
Sakshi!

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Bubble bubble Bubble !!

Update update update !!

Eeek !! Too soon ? 😛😛

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Definitely not too soon for me😆😉😃