SwaSan SS- Dire Consequences. Part Eleven Updated on Page 28 (24/03) - Page 14

Originally posted by: jess_27

Heyyy... I read your story from the begining and i really like it.. Sorry for not commenting before..

Though im not in favour of a woman marrying the guy who raped her, but im liking your story coz here swara is a strong character and she will definitely set things right... She is back in sanskar's life to take revenge... Probably she'll end up rectifying sanskar and teach him a lesson.. Im very eager to read whats gonna happen further...

Sanskar has already started realising his mistakes... And hopefully he'll change for the best...moreover waiting to see swara take her revenge...

Update soon...

Love

Jessica

Originally posted by: manishasatpathy

amazing story!! i hope swara realises that sanskaar is changing
plzz update soon will be waiting :)

Originally posted by: Vini224

So Sanskar has started to realize his mistake .

Trying to give a chance to the marriage.

Waiting to see what Swara does to Sanskar to fulfill her revenge.

Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: Goldie93

Awsum..lovely..bt feeling bad fr zsanskaar..he strtd Realizing his mistakes n he is regretting too..hope ki Swara Realizes it ..bt ya wanna see Swara's revenge too bt dnt drag it fr long coz i cnt see my Sanskaar in Pain ...pm me..

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice Update.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Helee

nice chapter. its good to see strong swara and sanskar realizing his mistakes. waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: indrani7495

hey shaheen...
read ol d parts of ur story in a go...n i really luved it...ur way of writing...
although sanskar has been potrayed as the most righteous man in mst of d ff we read n he has that dream man image...in dis story its quite diffrnt whch mks me say i simply hate ds sanskar...lyk dsgusting ...simply the mention of his name made me cringe in dsgust [:-x] ...u hv well potrayed his terrible character in ur strory... 👏 felt bad fr raglak they gt separated for no fault of their's...
dadi no words...our society jz duzn chng bcz of ppl lyk her in real lyf.!!
bt i lyk swara's strong n revenge mode here...n i hope she duz take same solid n really painfull revenge frm him whch will affect him both physically and psychologically...and will have a long lasting effct...some damage to him dat will break him down cmpletely n he feel d helpness dat swara had felt wen he had assaulted her...!!
looking forward to really strong updates from u...!! 😊 please pm me the nxt part if possible i hv sent u a buddy request...!! :)
p.s.:- no offence to u ...sry in case if u feel hurt by my cmmnt i din mean to say nething negative!!

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res...

Unres...

Shaheenq... Awesome update sweetheart... Loved it...

So Raglak are in relationship before... Now breakup...

I liked trios perception... It was really nice...

Love you...

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Hmm . Sanky ko pachtava ho raha hai .and swara ko din ba din gussa badhta jaa raha hai.ab aayega asli maaza ayega sanky ko line pe aana hi hoga..par i hope in dono ka jhagda raglak ko bhaari na pade.

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

My friend

First of all sorry for my late reply.

The update was really nice.

The thoughts of sanskar and swara was well written.

The trust between dp and swara is nice. Dp is supporting swara in her plans.

The mehendi function was a heart touching sequence. She burned her hands purposefully. For a woman it is really difficult to marry a person who cheated her.

But felt bad for Raglak.

But in this update I really felt bad for sanskar. For punish sanskar for his doings is right. But in this way...

Waiting for your next update.

Thanks for the pm