hey shaheen...
read ol d parts of ur story in a go...n i really luved it...ur way of writing...
although sanskar has been potrayed as the most righteous man in mst of d ff we read n he has that dream man image...in dis story its quite diffrnt whch mks me say i simply hate ds sanskar...lyk dsgusting ...simply the mention of his name made me cringe in dsgust [:-x] ...u hv well potrayed his terrible character in ur strory... 👏 felt bad fr raglak they gt separated for no fault of their's...
dadi no words...our society jz duzn chng bcz of ppl lyk her in real lyf.!!
bt i lyk swara's strong n revenge mode here...n i hope she duz take same solid n really painfull revenge frm him whch will affect him both physically and psychologically...and will have a long lasting effct...some damage to him dat will break him down cmpletely n he feel d helpness dat swara had felt wen he had assaulted her...!!
looking forward to really strong updates from u...!! 😊 please pm me the nxt part if possible i hv sent u a buddy request...!! :)
p.s.:- no offence to u ...sry in case if u feel hurt by my cmmnt i din mean to say nething negative!!
Edited by indrani7495 - 9 years ago