SwaSan SS- Dire Consequences. Part Eleven Updated on Page 28 (24/03)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is my First Story on SwaSan. It is completely different from the Current Track. Also Swara and Ragini are Real Sisters in this Story.

Prologue
A Girl in her Twenties entered the Kaali Baadi. It was 5am in the Morning. She very well knew that Nobody would get up at this hour except her Dadi. She walked slowly and Steadily to her House. She made sure that she didn't cause much noise as she didn't want to be a Shame to her Parents if someone in the Baadi would see her in this Condition. She finally reached her Home and entered the Gate. She saw her Mother was pacing up and down thinking where she had been all night. "Shonaa" her Mother called out as soon as she heard the door " Where Have u been All Night..." But she couldn't complete her words as she saw her daughter's condition. Hearing her Mother's words another Girl came running to meet her Sister. "Swaraaa...My god we were so worried where..." Cried Ragini but she too was Shocked seeing Her sister's Condition. Swara fell on the Floor Crying. Her Clothes were torn, Lips bruised, Hair messed up and Her Neck had several Blue Marks. Ragini and Her Mother kneeled down to support Swara. Her Father came to the Room when he heard Ragini. "Who did this to you Swara?" Asked Ragini. Swara couldn't control her tears and was sobbing. She said in a slow voice "Sans...Sanskar Maheshwari"




Note: This is the Prologue should I continue or not?



Character Sketch : Page 3
Part One: Page 4
Part Two A : Page 5
Part Two B : Page 6

Part Three: Page 7
Part Four: Page 8
Part Five: Page 9
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Posted: 9 years ago
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dearie plz continue and plz do it fast as u can.somdtyms for us readers it becomes very irritating to wait for months and after that no response .
its nice with diff concept.
next tym plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue.
Different concept from real story line.
But what happened to swara.
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishanita

dearie plz continue and plz do it fast as u can.somdtyms for us readers it becomes very irritating to wait for months and after that no response .
its nice with diff concept.
next tym plz pm me



Yes Sure I ll update the first part by Today.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaheenq



Yes Sure I ll update the first part by Today.

tnx buddy.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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God..what was that????
Very interesting..update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

God..what was that????
Very interesting..update soon



Sure I ll update asap.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Nice prologue.

Different concept from real story line.
But what happened to swara.
Waiting for your next update



Thank U. Keep Reading to find out what happened to Swara.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue itself giving encounter or attack!!!
Pls update soon and
Pls do me !!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shwetaphadke

Loved prolouge...plz update soon...waiting




Thank You. I ll update asap.

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